After Entering the Fairy Tale, I Hold the Cheating Script in My Hand
by Qing Jinshu
About This Novel
Nan Lingyin entered the fairy tale, but she was not the heroine. At first, she was just trying to survive. Later, when she met her senior brother, she just wanted to protect him. Later, she met many people and many things, and embarked on the long road of cultivating immortality... From a cannon fodder with mediocre qualifications to a god with an endless lifespan, in countless years, she planted 9999 blessings, leaving the last one for her senior brother and herself. ------When they first met: He hooked his fingers and pulled her to sit next to him like a seductress. His raised eyebrows made him look evil. He leaned close to her ear and whispered, "Your spiritual roots have been destroyed and your spiritual power is gone. Why don't you follow me and become a demon..." When we meet again : Surrounded by seventy-two Earth Fiends, he sat lazily on the main seat. His black sleeves and robes were spread out, making his skin look cold and white, and his lips were as cold as plum blossoms. Under the casual appearance, his sinister eyes were like lightning, but he recognized her from the many demon maids at a glance. "Tonight's banquet, you will serve me closely. If you don't know how, I will teach you personally."
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In this article, the female protagonist and the male protagonist are twins, and the male and female protagonists killed each other in the previous life. The female protagonist knew in advance that the male protagonist had walked in, so she felt guilty about what happened in her previous life in the cave and was doubly kind to the male protagonist. The male protagonist also had memories of his past life after seeing her, but he never said anything about it, wanting to know what the female protagonist was thinking. - The incident in Licheng was planned by the heroine's father (purpose: to force his daughter to regain her true identity), so the heroine cannot be entirely blamed. Moreover, the heroine is not without guilt, she has a guilty conscience, and there is nothing she can do, so she chooses to take He Yu to the Yunhai Sect. After becoming stronger, she can guard Li City for a second time in the later period, help He Yu find his missing father, and make up for the regrets of the past. - There are indeed many immature aspects in my writing. I would like to thank the readers who gave me their opinions. The author will work hard to correct them~
This train of thought jumps a little too fast, and many of them have no beginning or end, and are inexplicable. It's no problem to read this chapter chapter by chapter, but, no matter what, I can't connect it. It's like I'm reading a novel by myself. When I read it...
The heroine has three incorrect views
The first point: The concept of this book jumps too fast and most people can't keep up with it. It's like the heroine has lived for two lives. When she meets someone, she calls her senior brother in the past life. There is no emotional line. Even if you believe whatever you say, there is no doubt at all. A magic letter comes from a person who suddenly appears. The second point: The heroine got back home and caused a lot of trouble. Although He Yu, the son of the city lord, said that he was not on good terms with the heroine, he said bad things to the heroine. The heroine left home and had a seven-year engagement. No matter who he was, he was laughed at by the whole city. Wouldn't the son of the city lord be the same? Yun Rong led people to slaughter the city, and everyone died. He Yu went from being the son of a city lord to a down-and-out person. The heroine cursed and said that he lost his family dog because the heroine's father died and the whole city died. The heroine didn't feel guilty at all. The heroine said that the city lord asked her to help his son, so she said harsh words. Finally, I want to say that the heroine has incorrect views and a very bad character. Even if her mother is critically ill, she said that her only relatives are her mother and her senior brother. Even her mother's body will be taken away, instead of being humiliated by Yun Rong and the others after they know it is her mother. I can think of it without writing it.
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There is a chapter about living two lives... So senior brother doesn't have amnesia? Right, right?
Haven't read the book yet
I have a bit of a problem with writing, so I don't plan to read it for the time being. There are very few people who write articles about cultivating immortals. I hope you can stick to it. I hope you can work hard!
fine
There are ideas, there are ideas. Sometimes I feel like my thoughts are jumping too fast, and if I don't look carefully, I haven't reacted yet. Come on, you won't lose money if you invest in shares. If you like reading about cultivating immortals, you can come and read it.
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Official(6)Scraped 26d ago
The author has something to say
In this article, the female protagonist and the male protagonist are twins, and the male and female protagonists killed each other in the previous life. The female protagonist knew in advance that the male protagonist had walked in, so she felt guilty about what happened in her previous life in the cave and was doubly kind to the male protagonist. The male protagonist also had memories of his past life after seeing her, but he never said anything about it, wanting to know what the female protagonist was thinking. - The incident in Licheng was planned by the heroine's father (purpose: to force his daughter to regain her true identity), so the heroine cannot be entirely blamed. Moreover, the heroine is not without guilt, she has a guilty conscience, and there is nothing she can do, so she chooses to take He Yu to the Yunhai Sect. After becoming stronger, she can guard Li City for a second time in the later period, help He Yu find his missing father, and make up for the regrets of the past. - There are indeed many immature aspects in my writing. I would like to thank the readers who gave me their opinions. The author will work hard to correct them~
This train of thought jumps a little too fast, and many of them have no beginning or end, and are inexplicable. It's no problem to read this chapter chapter by chapter, but, no matter what, I can't connect it. It's like I'm reading a novel by myself. When I read it...
The heroine has three incorrect views
The first point: The concept of this book jumps too fast and most people can't keep up with it. It's like the heroine has lived for two lives. When she meets someone, she calls her senior brother in the past life. There is no emotional line. Even if you believe whatever you say, there is no doubt at all. A magic letter comes from a person who suddenly appears. The second point: The heroine got back home and caused a lot of trouble. Although He Yu, the son of the city lord, said that he was not on good terms with the heroine, he said bad things to the heroine. The heroine left home and had a seven-year engagement. No matter who he was, he was laughed at by the whole city. Wouldn't the son of the city lord be the same? Yun Rong led people to slaughter the city, and everyone died. He Yu went from being the son of a city lord to a down-and-out person. The heroine cursed and said that he lost his family dog because the heroine's father died and the whole city died. The heroine didn't feel guilty at all. The heroine said that the city lord asked her to help his son, so she said harsh words. Finally, I want to say that the heroine has incorrect views and a very bad character. Even if her mother is critically ill, she said that her only relatives are her mother and her senior brother. Even her mother's body will be taken away, instead of being humiliated by Yun Rong and the others after they know it is her mother. I can think of it without writing it.
! ! ! ? ?
There is a chapter about living two lives... So senior brother doesn't have amnesia? Right, right?
Haven't read the book yet
I have a bit of a problem with writing, so I don't plan to read it for the time being. There are very few people who write articles about cultivating immortals. I hope you can stick to it. I hope you can work hard!
fine
There are ideas, there are ideas. Sometimes I feel like my thoughts are jumping too fast, and if I don't look carefully, I haven't reacted yet. Come on, you won't lose money if you invest in shares. If you like reading about cultivating immortals, you can come and read it.
