Powerful Sweet Pet: Where Can Cute Girls Escape?

Powerful Sweet Pet: Where Can Cute Girls Escape?

by Xiao Hope Didn't Wake Up

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About This Novel

"Strong Sweet Pet: Where to Escape the Cute Teacher" Mu Ran died suddenly due to staying up late, and unexpectedly wore the body of a tragic female supporting character with the same name in the novel. With the idea of ​​​​taking care of things as they come, she decided to change the tragic life of the female supporting character. With the script in hand, she found the male protagonist...

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Yaoyu Fairy62mo ago

Very well written

The plot is very good, the heroine is very cute, but some paragraphs are too long, which will affect reading. Occasionally, if the number of words is enough, just break a short paragraph, which will be more perfect. There are still many aspects that can be developed in the plot, and descriptions of scene descriptions, character images, and psychological factors of the characters can be appropriately inserted. The description of the uncle is very good, and it makes people see a very immortal side. Come on ^0^~, there is still a lot of room for improvement. Great writing.

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