Fenglingyuan
by Huaike
About This Novel
Introduction ① Yuling is the second princess of the mermaid tribe. She once knew nothing about the world. Until that day, she mustered up the courage to run out of Jianhe River, and she met Hua Feng first. Who knows, God did not bestow a good relationship on her. He left with a demon princess... Just when Yuling fell into her previous relationship, she met another person. They went to the Heavenly Palace for a banquet together, but before they could get to know each other well, she was harmed by evil people and demoted to the mortal world. And he couldn't help but follow her down to earth... His name is An Feng, and he is the king of the Fire Tribe. ② After experiencing a vague love in the mortal world, and with the chance, the relationship between them has deepened a lot. But just because "water and fire are incompatible", Yuling was blocked by her father who had always doted on her. She refused to let go and finally had to leave her loved ones... ③Later, when the world was in turmoil, Yuling's hibiscus petals were smashed by Lord Bird, and her body withered and died. An Feng has been searching for her for hundreds of years, but to no avail, and nothing has changed... ④ He finally found Yuling in Lanqin Realm, but she had changed her mind. An Feng went through hardships to help her recover. But in the end, I couldn't enjoy it with peace of mind. Because he colluded with the demon clan and injured the Queen of Heaven, he was sentenced to death and jumped into the sea of fire to kill him. ⑤ After hearing the bad news, Yuling, whose family was ruined and her country was destroyed, had to use forbidden magic. Therefore, her legs turned into fish tails and she went to see Dark Phoenix for the last time. However, within ten steps of leaving the river, she lost water and became a feather... ▲In the end, the token of love between the two people ascended to the sky, became one, fell into the earth, and grew a sacred tree, named Fengling Tree, to remember the deep love between the two...
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1. It would be better if the protagonist makes his first appearance and has a detailed external description, otherwise readers will have no impression. For example, when the male protagonist appeared on the stage, I didn't even feel that he was the male protagonist 😂 2. The emotional line is too fast, which will make people feel abrupt. For example, when the heroine first likes the male partner, it can be said that it is love at first sight, but it turns out to be love at first sight. It is best to have a detailed description of the male partner's appearance, otherwise it will feel that it is inexplicable that she is so fond of the relationship for the first time. Including the male co-star who liked another female co-star, it was love at first sight. There is no special description of the female supporting character's appearance. Bai Yi's personality is not very outgoing. This kind of person is slow to fall in love at first sight and then has close contact with the female partner, which is not in line with the character. 3. According to what is said in the article, it can be said that the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist when he saw her for the first time. Then when the heroine was punished by the Queen Mother and pulled down, the hero was indifferent and did not intercede for her. This is not good. It would be nice to write about him begging for mercy, even if it turns out to be useless. This detail is a bit disappointing. (The above are just my personal thoughts in the hope that the author will get better and better, come on) This book is still great, the story theme is novel, and it is not the same as other books. Very interesting. The author has a big brain and rich imagination to come up with these plots. It's also beautifully written. It can be seen from the beginning of this book that the author has a good writing style. Awesome.
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Although I don't read this type of book, I have to admit that this book is okay. I have also read a few chapters. There is no brainless plot and the writing is very good. You can read it. I was recommended to read it by the author, and I don't know if what the author said is true or not (￣y▽￣)~* covered her mouth and snickered. If possible, this book may be my masterpiece. ∧＿∧ Abba Ababa Abba, turn the author into a pig (｡･ω･｡)つ━☆*. ⊂ ノ ゜+. しーJ °. + *´¨) .· ´¸.·*´¨) ¸.·*¨) (¸.·´ (¸.·`)
very good
The author writes very well, the writing style is also very good, the story is quite attractive, and it is not so bloody. Yuling is still very cute.
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I didn't read the specific content😛I just read the beginning and I was attracted😶😶This love started like a flower, Dispersed like embers. Flowers bloom and fall, and sometimes they bloom; But once the ashes are gone, it's like a dream. Stay with each other forever, The soul dissipates and becomes a tree. Flowers will eventually fade and flourish, This beautiful phoenix will last forever.
The writing is very good, I hope it becomes popular🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥!
The writing is very good, the content is indeed quite novel, and the elements of fairy tales and fantasy are also vividly reflected. It can be seen from all aspects that Da Da is very talented in writing. Keep up the good work! The problem is that the update is too slow. I hope it can be updated faster. Don't be lazy! I also wish I could pay more attention to details when writing. Come on, we believe in you!
Great writing! The description of the environment is captivating. Love it😊😊😊
Come on =￣ω￣=
From the recommendation, I can see from the introduction that the plot theme is still very new, so I clicked on it. I was surprised at the beginning (I am used to the simple and crude beginning and there is no other meaning) Here are some tips for authors: 1. I initially judge that the hostess is relatively innocent and cute. After reading the introduction, I hope it won't be too cruel. 2. Character description, a full image requires the use of various details to portray, I hope it can be greatly improved. 3. No... Come on! (づ￣3￣)づ
What a great novel, I hope you can stick with it!
Love beyond the rules, love across clans. This is one of the best unsigned novels I have ever read. I don't know why the author didn't sign... Anyway, the content is also very attractive, especially the descriptions of various different places are very good and expressive, giving people the feeling of being there, which is great!
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1. It would be better if the protagonist makes his first appearance and has a detailed external description, otherwise readers will have no impression. For example, when the male protagonist appeared on the stage, I didn't even feel that he was the male protagonist 😂 2. The emotional line is too fast, which will make people feel abrupt. For example, when the heroine first likes the male partner, it can be said that it is love at first sight, but it turns out to be love at first sight. It is best to have a detailed description of the male partner's appearance, otherwise it will feel that it is inexplicable that she is so fond of the relationship for the first time. Including the male co-star who liked another female co-star, it was love at first sight. There is no special description of the female supporting character's appearance. Bai Yi's personality is not very outgoing. This kind of person is slow to fall in love at first sight and then has close contact with the female partner, which is not in line with the character. 3. According to what is said in the article, it can be said that the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist when he saw her for the first time. Then when the heroine was punished by the Queen Mother and pulled down, the hero was indifferent and did not intercede for her. This is not good. It would be nice to write about him begging for mercy, even if it turns out to be useless. This detail is a bit disappointing. (The above are just my personal thoughts in the hope that the author will get better and better, come on) This book is still great, the story theme is novel, and it is not the same as other books. Very interesting. The author has a big brain and rich imagination to come up with these plots. It's also beautifully written. It can be seen from the beginning of this book that the author has a good writing style. Awesome.
ヾ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ
Although I don't read this type of book, I have to admit that this book is okay. I have also read a few chapters. There is no brainless plot and the writing is very good. You can read it. I was recommended to read it by the author, and I don't know if what the author said is true or not (￣y▽￣)~* covered her mouth and snickered. If possible, this book may be my masterpiece. ∧＿∧ Abba Ababa Abba, turn the author into a pig (｡･ω･｡)つ━☆*. ⊂ ノ ゜+. しーJ °. + *´¨) .· ´¸.·*´¨) ¸.·*¨) (¸.·´ (¸.·`)
very good
The author writes very well, the writing style is also very good, the story is quite attractive, and it is not so bloody. Yuling is still very cute.
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I didn't read the specific content😛I just read the beginning and I was attracted😶😶This love started like a flower, Dispersed like embers. Flowers bloom and fall, and sometimes they bloom; But once the ashes are gone, it's like a dream. Stay with each other forever, The soul dissipates and becomes a tree. Flowers will eventually fade and flourish, This beautiful phoenix will last forever.
The writing is very good, I hope it becomes popular🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥!
The writing is very good, the content is indeed quite novel, and the elements of fairy tales and fantasy are also vividly reflected. It can be seen from all aspects that Da Da is very talented in writing. Keep up the good work! The problem is that the update is too slow. I hope it can be updated faster. Don't be lazy! I also wish I could pay more attention to details when writing. Come on, we believe in you!
Great writing! The description of the environment is captivating. Love it😊😊😊
Come on =￣ω￣=
From the recommendation, I can see from the introduction that the plot theme is still very new, so I clicked on it. I was surprised at the beginning (I am used to the simple and crude beginning and there is no other meaning) Here are some tips for authors: 1. I initially judge that the hostess is relatively innocent and cute. After reading the introduction, I hope it won't be too cruel. 2. Character description, a full image requires the use of various details to portray, I hope it can be greatly improved. 3. No... Come on! (づ￣3￣)づ
What a great novel, I hope you can stick with it!
Love beyond the rules, love across clans. This is one of the best unsigned novels I have ever read. I don't know why the author didn't sign... Anyway, the content is also very attractive, especially the descriptions of various different places are very good and expressive, giving people the feeling of being there, which is great!
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