Konoha's Projection Magic

Don't pay attention to the pictures that are found online.

If you have any comments or suggestions, you can leave them here and I will take a look.

That's about it.

I don't have enough brain circuits, so I'm looking for supporting actors, names, backgrounds and personalities. It would be better if you are good at ninjutsu😁😁😁

At the beginning, there is a incomplete Heroic Spirit Card without any Noble Phantasm. It develops very slowly. It should be interacted with Minato Tsunade and the others a little. The team is full of supporting players, which seems boring. Also, give your own blood to Orochimaru, and give magic to the third one, which means sincerity? Just say that blood stain elimination can summon various weapons? Orochimaru and Sandaime are all staring at the Sharingan. If you can make a magic trick and learn it, we will see if you die. The protagonist should not be too upright.

There is no point in watching a fandom if you don't dismantle the CP. After all, the purpose of watching a fanfic is to have fun and to make up for regrets. If these factors are not taken into account, then just stick to the original version. Why bother to watch the fanfic?

◎There are several typos in each chapter. The author saw them but did not decide to change them. The reason is that after the changes, the ideas posted by readers will be automatically deleted (it is true, after the changes, the ideas will be misplaced or even found). I don't agree with this approach, but there are not many typos, so it is still acceptable. (If there are five or six typos in a few paragraphs, that will definitely not work!!!) ◎A little too much emphasis is placed on describing the protagonist, and thoughts take up most of it. It may be that the system and settings need to be explained in the early stage, which seems a bit verbose, but this is indeed not a good thing. ◎The only thing that surprises me is... The author can treat the original characters objectively! ! ! ! ! ! The time in the book is near the end of World War II. What will Sarutobi Hiruzen, Danzo, and Orochimaru be like at this point in time? I'm glad the author is not like this - Because the Third Generation, Danzo and others later did many wrong things, and they caused the decline of Konoha, so it is absolutely correct and necessary for the protagonist to prevent them from becoming the disciples of Senju Tobirama... (I have really seen an author who writes like this, and I will agree with readers who do it well) They have been harmful to Konoha and the protagonist from the moment they were born. In the fanfic, Sandai and Danzo should be like villains with dark hearts no matter what period they are in. If they are not dark, they are clean... Tsk. I'm really bored. The reason for the boredom is not whether the third generation is black or not, nor whether it has been washed or not, but why the third generation must be written in such a dark way. (I read a philosophical article about "Modern Cyberpsychiatry" last week and learned something. Originally, I was worried that I clearly felt that what they said was wrong, but I couldn't seem to refute it. Now I know how to refute it. Don't follow their logic and be deceived, but hold on to your own point of view.) --"Look at how bad Naruto's life was when he was a child, so the third generation must be very dark." Well, I know that his original character design is very unnatural, so, what? So, with, Is there any necessary connection between this and forcing the author to portray the third generation in black in his articles? No. Supporting characters should contribute to the plot. Because of what kind of people are needed in this story, the author adjusts the original characters and creates derivative works, and adjusts the appropriate characters within a reasonable range. Different stories also require different characters. Why, why must it be limited to "only write this way"? ... Cough, sorry, I got a little excited and angry. I really feel that some phenomena and behaviors are too incomprehensible. Forcibly attaching a fixed label to a character takes away his/her original important inner spirit and spirit. From now on, he/she is just a label. This is really terrible. They continue to convey a certain point of view mechanically, repeatedly piling up a large number of meaningless Internet words, drowning out rational voices with viral numbers, and trying to eliminate all voices that are different from them. (Ahem, that philosophy article is really interesting, and a short paragraph is used here) Well, it seems like I wrote a lot of irrelevant things, that's all about the original characters. The author has a great attitude! ◎Overall, we still need to work hard Readers without excessive reading requirements can continue reading. There should be no major mistakes in this article. But I can't. For me, the overall level of this article barely reached the passing level I expected. If it's not a good or bad book, if it's a little closer, I'll turn around and leave without leaving a single word of evaluation. If it's a little better and more distinctive, I'll accept it and try to read it intermittently. In fact, I can only give this article three stars at most, but I am easily touched by a certain point. This time, I added an extra star because of the author's attitude towards the original characters. I think those who can maintain rational cognition at present deserve encouragement. Sorry, my review is full of personal emotions and may not be very helpful. Recently I tried to use it as reading comprehension, but after writing for a while, my mind jumped to another place... You should be able to tell... (Face covering) Note: There is a time limit for evaluation and will be reserved until June 1, 2024. If the author improves or modifies the article, resulting in the evaluation not meeting the requirements, please remind me to re-read and change the evaluation.

Hua Ye, the Lord of Heavenly Palace, comes here for a visit

The whole article is full of course, but, and, but, and then wait, this is the way to write a running account.

They develop in a low-key manner, and they can do as they please. Occasionally, they pretend to be 13, raise them, and kill them when they are fat.