
Naruto Punch Superman
by Longba
About This Novel
Two worlds, Naruto and A Certain Magical Index. Lianshou's first work is average, so please feel free to comment. ... The new book "Eye of Asmodeus" is uploaded, you can check it out.
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Official(43)Scraped 23d ago
Author, your timeline is completely messed up. First, Mike Kay's father fought against the Seven Ninjas during the third war. Second, the Fourth Hokage only came to power after the end of the Third War. Third, the Kumo ninja leader kidnapped Hinata when Hinata was 3.4 Years old. It appeared in the anime. You said before that Hinata was just taken away and Hizu beat the ninja leader to death. Did you say that Naruto was still a baby and Hinata was two or three years older than Akito? I can't understand it. Fourth, after Minato became Hokage after the third war, Orochimaru was sentenced to escape. You wrote Orochimaru's Night of the Nine-Tails before he was sentenced to escape. Fifth, at the end of the Battle of Kanna Shinbashi, the third war came to an end, and at the end of the third war, only the Kumo ninja was still at war with Konoha. It was a local war, and it took 4.5 Years before they were reconciled. The Hinata incident occurred only when the Kumo ninja came to Konoha to sign a peace treaty. At this time, Naruto, Hinata and other young heroes were already 3.4.5 Years old.
The power is so bad, illustration One Piece, book title One Punch Man, content Naruto! [Emot=default,33/]
This book is an insult to One Punch Man
It's my fault for being awesome, cover One Piece, content Naruto, character One Punch Man
Awesome to me. Cover One Piece, content Naruto, and One Punch Man
What the hell, it's an insult to Naruto and One Punch Man. You don't know how to write a few novels.
Naruto: Punch Man - Book Review
Author, do you know how powerful the Eight Gate Dungeon is? It takes so much effort to defeat the Six Paths Madara. It takes so much effort for you to defeat even seven jounin. After opening the door of death, it is several times or even dozens of times stronger than the Kage. Although there are no tricks, a few jounin should be able to defeat it.
The protagonist can only be interesting if he grows up slowly! Otherwise, you will be invincible from the beginning, what will you do next!
Naruto: Punch Man - Book Review
One Punch Man, you said he is not fast? Hahahaha, look at it, One Punch Man and his apprentice robot are so fast that they are only afterimages when they fight. They can kill a Jonin with one punch and they still don't want to play with you. Yes, are you so useless in fighting? And if you say you can't control it, then when fighting seven people, you should have wiped out the area with a radius of ten kilometers with one punch. In the later stages of One Punch Man, you can see it for yourself. I have never complained about the last few episodes in other novels. This is also one of your abilities.
It's enough for Naruto to use One Piece's writing
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Official(43)Scraped 23d ago
Author, your timeline is completely messed up. First, Mike Kay's father fought against the Seven Ninjas during the third war. Second, the Fourth Hokage only came to power after the end of the Third War. Third, the Kumo ninja leader kidnapped Hinata when Hinata was 3.4 Years old. It appeared in the anime. You said before that Hinata was just taken away and Hizu beat the ninja leader to death. Did you say that Naruto was still a baby and Hinata was two or three years older than Akito? I can't understand it. Fourth, after Minato became Hokage after the third war, Orochimaru was sentenced to escape. You wrote Orochimaru's Night of the Nine-Tails before he was sentenced to escape. Fifth, at the end of the Battle of Kanna Shinbashi, the third war came to an end, and at the end of the third war, only the Kumo ninja was still at war with Konoha. It was a local war, and it took 4.5 Years before they were reconciled. The Hinata incident occurred only when the Kumo ninja came to Konoha to sign a peace treaty. At this time, Naruto, Hinata and other young heroes were already 3.4.5 Years old.
The power is so bad, illustration One Piece, book title One Punch Man, content Naruto! [Emot=default,33/]
This book is an insult to One Punch Man
It's my fault for being awesome, cover One Piece, content Naruto, character One Punch Man
Awesome to me. Cover One Piece, content Naruto, and One Punch Man
What the hell, it's an insult to Naruto and One Punch Man. You don't know how to write a few novels.
Naruto: Punch Man - Book Review
Author, do you know how powerful the Eight Gate Dungeon is? It takes so much effort to defeat the Six Paths Madara. It takes so much effort for you to defeat even seven jounin. After opening the door of death, it is several times or even dozens of times stronger than the Kage. Although there are no tricks, a few jounin should be able to defeat it.
The protagonist can only be interesting if he grows up slowly! Otherwise, you will be invincible from the beginning, what will you do next!
Naruto: Punch Man - Book Review
One Punch Man, you said he is not fast? Hahahaha, look at it, One Punch Man and his apprentice robot are so fast that they are only afterimages when they fight. They can kill a Jonin with one punch and they still don't want to play with you. Yes, are you so useless in fighting? And if you say you can't control it, then when fighting seven people, you should have wiped out the area with a radius of ten kilometers with one punch. In the later stages of One Punch Man, you can see it for yourself. I have never complained about the last few episodes in other novels. This is also one of your abilities.
It's enough for Naruto to use One Piece's writing















