Beast Control Begins with Evolution

I won't say anything else, this book is really beautiful, so, dear author, please scroll it up! ! ! ! As long as the author rolls it up, little brother, I can wake up laughing from my dreams, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow.

The artist said that the AI ​​​​pictures cannot be too detailed. I originally wanted to change the background to a thunderstorm and the sea, but it couldn't be done, so there was nothing I could do. I don't think the Mu Chu picture was ideal, so let's forget it. Let's take a look.

Let's not talk about the plot, but I can keep watching it. After all, there are not many themes like female videos, and the requirements are not high. But the writing style, emmm, always feels weird when I read it. In order to continue reading, I have to let myself read without thinking, otherwise I really can't stand the writing style. Speaking of which, I actually read a little bit of this book before, but I gave up writing it because I found the writing style uncomfortable. I saw it again this time, and I really can't stop reading it, but can the author please refine his language? Some sentences simply cannot be read carefully, and one can only use the innate Chinese skill: to understand the meaning even if the words are in the wrong order.

First of all, all the comments are fair to the subject and not the person. I can feel that the author has tried his best, without starting or ending, and without any eunuchs. He has written a novel with a complex and grand setting very seriously and responsibly. If you work hard, you are worthy of praise and have merits. Not every novel can make me read it from beginning to end. Then talk about your feelings after watching it. There is an emptiness and childishness between the lines that cannot be ignored. I don't think it's a simple "lack of writing power", but a lack of thinking ability. The whole text is full of "The heroine is invincible, but she is not perfect, which is not outrageous in this setting. The character is very righteous, but not a holy mother, and she is not indifferent. In short, she is good. The country and the elders are good and are reliable backing, but they are not motivated. With the rise of Eastern countries, women are independent and self-improving, but they are not self-satisfied, they respect reality." The author consulted a lot of information and knew clearly what people wanted to see and what they wanted to read. He had a strong desire to survive and wanted to convey positive and excellent values, but he couldn't write it. Because the author simply does not understand human nature, political economy, interpersonal relationships, equal rights, power systems and other things repeatedly emphasized in the article, let alone grasp the scale. So I had to write: "This setting is like this, the scale is just right, nothing is too much, and nothing is not enough." Because I couldn't understand it, many settings were inconsistent and changed day and night. The foreshadowing I sold earlier was forgotten, and later I added a supplementary order "There was still one detail at that time", and the logic was confusing. I found that many people cannot think and mistake memory for thinking. They read a lot of information on the Internet and know that it is good stuff. They know it by heart and think they know it. But in fact, thinking is the processing of information rather than the collection of information. It is the correlation, ordering and influence between two things, rather than a simple arrangement and combination. For example, through thinking, we can understand that "in a gender-equal society, women can rely on themselves without having to please men, so they will pursue efficiency, safety, and comfort over beauty. Female warriors will shave their heads for convenience, and when others see a woman, they will also prioritize her ability and personality over her appearance in marriage and love. Focusing on career leads to women's ability to improve, and thus occupy more important positions." ", Without thinking, it becomes "There are beautiful and cute women in the equal rights literature, there are also those with fashionable short hair, there are those who chase small dogs, and there are those who like older sisters. They are also strong warriors who wear high heels and fall in love with men, and there are also those who have pure friendship between men and women, and they can tear apart scumbag men..." Simply stacking the elements together will collapse at the first glance. You need to build your own value system and knowledge framework.

It's too watery, it's too watery. The pet interface is really watery. I'm so annoyed by this setting. There are a lot of male posts about the evolution of this kind of pet beast, but there is no introduction to the pet interface that is so watery.

The painter and I have tried our best. Dear friends, please check it out. What we painted is the scene where Yiping advanced in the waters where the Broken-backed Duck lives.

Can I have a CP? I'm a cliché person. I don't have a CP, but I like novels where the heroine has a male CP.

It's great without CP! ! ! (Shout!!!) Focus on posting with your friends! ! ! !

I think the pet interface is not watery at all. I still like the ones in the main text very much, because it is really clear what changes have been made. The happiness that develops little by little is very satisfying.

Mo Ze's picture is also out, please check it out. . . .