Prehistoric: the Ancestors of the Human Race Join the Chat Group
by Not Everyone
About This Novel
Nuwa created the human race, and Lu Zhi became one of the first generations of the human race. He was respected as the human master and the leader together with the three ancestors of the human race. Thinking that after losing the protection of Nuwa, the human race had to survive in the cracks of the wilderness during the Lich Tribulation, which was extremely stressful. But it doesn't matter. As Nuwa's favorite cub, Lu Zhi will definitely lead the human race to survive the difficult times and move towards a more glorious future! ["Ancestor of the Human Race" joins the chat group] ["Aiyinbustan" joins the chat group] ["Three-Year Divorce" Join the Chat Group] [Join the chat group of "No Pay for Parking"] ["I don't drink animal milk" join the chat group] That's it for now, let's start with the water group. -- Everyone is welcome to comment on the characters that you want to join the group. The author will select the works and characters that he knows well and write them in. Reasonable corrections are also welcome.
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Official(4)Scraped 9d ago
It seems okay so far, but I don't really want to write a female protagonist. Because many authors nowadays cannot grasp the emotional aspect. , The subject of the prehistoric era is not suitable for writing, because it itself is a theme of pursuing immortality, pursuing Tao, and pursuing cultivation.
The author should be faster and update faster, it's not enough to read.
Some of the settings are wrong. I've already preached, haven't I become a saint? The prehistoric world has not yet entered the era of the Five Saints. How did I become such? And the protagonist is actually a golden immortal. What's the difference between prehistoric and ants? But the Taiyi golden immortal walks everywhere, Da Luo is not as good as a dog, any demon clan is In the late stage of Golden Immortal, there is only one human race. The perfect Immortal King who is still in trouble and will even have to face a Saint when he becomes a god is actually a Heavenly Immortal or an early stage Golden Immortal. It can be said that there is no backup. So, the Immortal Emperor is only Taiyi Sacrifice Dao and Daluo Sacrifice Dao is the only one who can be a Saint. Can the protagonist wait for Araraha to grow up and help him?
It looks okay so far, the settings are good, and the time perspective is also good.
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 9d ago
It seems okay so far, but I don't really want to write a female protagonist. Because many authors nowadays cannot grasp the emotional aspect. , The subject of the prehistoric era is not suitable for writing, because it itself is a theme of pursuing immortality, pursuing Tao, and pursuing cultivation.
The author should be faster and update faster, it's not enough to read.
Some of the settings are wrong. I've already preached, haven't I become a saint? The prehistoric world has not yet entered the era of the Five Saints. How did I become such? And the protagonist is actually a golden immortal. What's the difference between prehistoric and ants? But the Taiyi golden immortal walks everywhere, Da Luo is not as good as a dog, any demon clan is In the late stage of Golden Immortal, there is only one human race. The perfect Immortal King who is still in trouble and will even have to face a Saint when he becomes a god is actually a Heavenly Immortal or an early stage Golden Immortal. It can be said that there is no backup. So, the Immortal Emperor is only Taiyi Sacrifice Dao and Daluo Sacrifice Dao is the only one who can be a Saint. Can the protagonist wait for Araraha to grow up and help him?
It looks okay so far, the settings are good, and the time perspective is also good.
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