The Heroine is Over-nourished

I think no matter how good your writing is, some people will deny your writing. It's not possible for everyone to like it. You just need to write according to your own outline. To be honest, the beginning of your book is very similar to another book I read. I was about to give up. But when I saw Black Panther and Young Man, I knew it was different. It was very exciting. I was very depressed at the end of the first content. When I saw the part where Young Man got old, I shed tears. The heroine is a bit of a scumbag! Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on! ! !

Damn, I feel sorry for the heroine. Can you give her a real relationship and accompany her? I hope there will be a male protagonist. Although it is a fairy tale, I feel that it is a happy thing to have love and companionship on the dangerous journey (^o^)o. Great support, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง! ! !

This book is really good, all aspects are described in detail and there are many annotations. Although it's a bit verbose, it's really thoughtful and you don't have to worry about forgetting some settings. Actually, I don't like the heroine Neptune, but the description makes it hard for me to dislike her. She is really cute. Then suddenly I thought of an interesting thing. When many worlds passed, Changsheng finally returned to the fairy world. People, monsters, ghosts, demons, etc. Who had emotional connections with Changsheng also ascended to the fairyland one day. When they were about to start the Shura Field mode, Wangheshu suddenly dropped from the sky holding Changsheng. They suddenly discovered what Changsheng would develop into when he was still a baby? ① Let's have a truce and let's raise immortality together. ② Changsheng's biological father, mother and godfathers throw them back to the lower world in anger or "enslave" them to take care of Changsheng ③Suddenly I felt that I was a little abnormal, I couldn't stop talking, and I couldn't worry about immortality, so I wanted to be an elder of immortality. ④Fight first to establish the main palace and then wait for it to grow. ⑤Eternal life means that "the love in the past life is over", it's all gone. ⑥......

I almost thought it was a monthly update⊙∀⊙! With this update, I have forgotten what I said before! ! Damn, you're the one signing the contract! ! ! Don't remember the account number?

This book is very good, but, author, when will you update it? If not, I will abandon the article.

I think many of the annotations are unnecessary and seem boring. Half of a chapter is annotations. This is an online novel and not a literary classic. Writing such advanced things may not be necessary for many people. It's just a pleasure to read and buy the next chapters. Although I support it, so many annotations will inevitably make people feel uncomfortable. Water, after all, it costs money, but the novel is well written. There are also some who say that if the author thinks the writing is bad, then you should not read it. I hope the author can listen and cater to the market. Of course, if the author feels that his writing is good, it doesn't matter what others think. Just treat it as if I didn't say it, and you don't need to care about my opinion.

We promised to update in March, Ah Bi can't break his promise

Isn't it time to update😓, urge more troops👹The action begins

It's March, it's time for an update, please update |ω)

Dad, Yangchun will be updated in March. Is it a big update?