Daming Yuanfu

This book contains too many trivial matters, not enough narrative depth, and does not highlight the key points. Science popularization is indispensable... But the proportion of science popularization is too much. I don't know whether to say that the author is lazy or not. Some people say that the writing is too deep. In my opinion, it is just the opposite. It is too commonplace. I jump here and there without knowing what the author wants to write. I don't know what the author's goal is. What do you want to do in the future, such as making soap, soap, candles, etc. Do you want to make money for the emperor or yourself? I spent so much time on science popularization, how to prevent the egg beater from rusting, and how to make it stainless steel... Etc., But then there is no follow-up and I won't write about it. If I don't make money, I don't give treasure... So what do I spend so much effort on?

Although I can understand that the first one million words of this book are free, but you don't need to say a very simple thing in classical Chinese and then translate it in vernacular and finally give four or five examples, right? If you really don't understand, you can use Baidu to read the book. It's really unnecessary, it's really unnecessary....

I originally thought it was good, but it was too long-winded in the early stages. Those allusions and theories seemed to be just to make up the word count. The two princesses were also a bad review. Otherwise, don't write it. If you write it, it will be jarring. The concept of the protagonist is also good. If you are writing about modern society, a single heroine is good. The key point is that this is an ancient novel.

In fact, it's really too verbose. Even if you don't understand many of the allusions, you've heard them before. There's no need to explain everything in the book. It's really boring to explain everything in one chapter.

There is too much information in the article, which leads to a loss of interest when reading. It is quite sloppy. I have no objection to the information. Too much information is the greatest damage to the novel. A good novel must be mainly based on the protagonist's deeds or psychological description, and the accompanying information interpretation can only be mentioned briefly. The context of the novel and the story arc are quite good.

Another question is, is Gao Gong's Practical School also a Confucian school? Is there any school of realism that opposes Cheng-Zhu Neo-Confucianism?

The paragraph is too long and contains too much information. In many paragraphs, the information in it even exceeds the plot itself, taking over the main role.

I just saw Chapter 15. I originally thought it was okay, but the author took the trouble to deny historical figures. I felt really frustrated and couldn't watch it anymore! ! !

It was originally written as a story, and then countless different histories were inserted into this story.

It can be seen that the author's writing style does have some skill, but it may have something to do with the author's professional knowledge. When describing the narrative, the details are described in more detail, which leads to the situation where the details are overwhelmed by the main body, so that the plot of the story develops too slowly! For example, if I want to eat a steamed bun, I don't need to know how the steamed bun was processed, how many difficulties it went through, and the historical development process of the steamed bun. At most, I only need to know whether it is a hot steamed bun and whether it tastes good. When reading this book, I have the illusion that I am reading a science textbook. If you read it carefully and thoroughly, you will indeed gain a lot of knowledge! But my original intention of reading this book was to read a novel, and I didn't need to gain so much knowledge. Therefore, the novel only needs to have a complete outline and a reasonable plot, and it already has the characteristics required for a qualified novel. If the writing style is added with humor, lightness and liveliness, this book will have the potential to become a hit! Although my interest in reading is getting lower and lower, I still definitely have a good writing skills, so I give 4 stars to encourage you!