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Are those five-star ones just trustworthy? The writing is extremely confusing.

What the hell? You still need asylum, you have to be a refugee, not even a slave in the house, and you still have to be a human being by the protagonist's side. Then doesn't the protagonist have to take at least 20 people with him wherever he goes?

The chapter title doesn't even explain what it's about.

What I wrote is too messy and has no main body. Reading the whole article gives me a baffling feeling

The plot is confusing, the college entrance examination is still going on, the two worlds go back and forth, there is no outline, and I can't understand what to write.

You start to fuck women before you have the strength to protect yourself. Author, how horny and unbearable are you?

How do you calculate the time between the two worlds? I didn't pay much attention to the settings and couldn't find them later.

To be honest, you might as well get an extra panel. It's always a bit messy to run between two worlds.

First of all, for me, an old book fan who has read nearly a thousand books, this book is considered a good one. If the book is short, there are almost no major shortcomings, at least in line with my bottom line of not giving negative reviews. The subject matter is not particularly new, but with this subject matter, there are basically no god-like works, and there are not too many junk books, which will not make people feel the same. I feel that the power of this book is quite high, but it is based on the Devouring Starry Sky. I won't go into details. There are too many and I am too lazy to type. Don't ask why, because I am lazy! . Let's talk about the author's concerns. Author, you should announce your cultivation realm and preferably within the first fifty pictures. If you do this, we can also make up for some realm issues that you have not described later. As long as you are not writing in a confused way, we can adjust ourselves, which will help readers' interest and quality in reading. This is very easy to understand, just like when you read a book and there is no more content, but what I am talking about is more The reader will make up the scene in his mind, which is what follows, just like you would imagine when watching a fighting scene. Basically, as long as the description is not too poor, there will be a sense of the scene. It just depends on whether it is strong or not and whether it meets the reader's taste. But one thing is for sure, the better the description, the stronger the scene will be and closer to the scene you imagined when you wrote the book. I don't want to say too much. I'm too lazy to talk about it. It's really boring. It's boring and I don't want to say it anymore. Although there are still many people who mind it, I don't want to say it anymore. Think about it

It feels like the author is writing randomly and has no feeling at all.