I Was a Famous Teacher in Ancient Times

Yangyang, this 👇 is what I saw from the readers. I hope you can see it and know what the problem is. The more you write, the better! (I copied and pasted it directly) ① I'm not talking about ability, I'm talking about image, that is to say, the author didn't write many specific examples. Not only the female protagonist, but also the male protagonist. For example, making the first batch of money by appraising treasures, taking the imperial examination, and how to guide children are all the author said one sentence and then the effect was gone. Manbao's mother and sister-in-law didn't do anything big, but their image was particularly obvious because there were many small details. In the article about mother-in-law, what impressed me most was the eldest daughter-in-law, because she was described in detail a lot. ② If the article follows the plot line and ignores details, the characters are indeed relatively thin. However, although a lot of things happened, the author has mentioned them all in one stroke. If it focuses on details, the characters will be more obvious. However, many articles are full of repeated details. For example, the male protagonist treats the female protagonist well and values his wife. The son says it once, the wife says it once, and others continue to say it. I couldn't hold on for 300 chapters. I just relied on the admiration of the supporting characters to deepen my impression that the main characters are awesome. I don't think they are awesome anyway. ③ This is the reason why I abandoned the article after reading 800 chapters of Granny Farmer ④I also abandoned the article for this reason. I repeat what Zulu said. In fact, the content is okay, but the superficiality is really not good. ⑤ This kind of story is actually one that cannot be set up. It has only a skeleton without flesh and blood. While writing about how awesome the protagonist is (usually using the supporting character "Che Luo" to shock and admire), there is no description of the specific amazing actions the protagonist has done. It is written in one stroke and the only water is dialogue, just like those mystery and suspense novels that rely entirely on God's perspective to solve problems. The above are the opinions of the book friends in the group on the previous book. I collected them for Yangyang to read. I hope Yangyang can understand his own shortcomings and write better books. I want to send a private message to Yangyang, but I can't find the private message function at the starting point or here. I hope Yangyang can see it! You can delete your comments after reading it! There is no need to keep this kind of thing (of course Yangyang can take a screenshot and save it to spur yourself )

Although there are not many chapters, it is not difficult to tell that it will be a very exciting novel (produced by Sheep, it must be a high-quality product). However, the update is very slow, two chapters a day, which is not enough to read.

Comment--Humanity emerges from adversity Blood is a very wonderful emotion, but it does not mean that all families are beautiful. Some are harmonious, and some are like enemies. However, Yang Xi and Zhou Yu's family is quite beautiful. From old to young, they are not the kind who can't figure it out. There is no evil mother-in-law. But maybe it's because the male and female protagonists are childhood sweethearts, and the male protagonist's family raises the female protagonist as their own child. For the sake of justice in his heart, the father of the male protagonist Zhou Yu invites villains to plot against him, which leads to disaster. They all fly away when disaster strikes, even husband and wife, let alone strangers? The male and female protagonists do not dare to gamble on human nature, and they also have to observe the Wu family before they dare to trust it. Otherwise, the Zhou family will go from one tiger's mouth to another. The situation at this moment was one of man-made disasters and natural disasters. The Zhou family fled all the way from north to south, avoiding man-made disasters and encountering natural disasters. How the people live determines the state of the country. Along the way to escape, the Zhou family met all kinds of people and witnessed the rarity of stability and the ugliness of human nature. Living means growing. The people of the Zhou family gradually see through the world, understand human nature, and become more united and independent than before. The more difficult it is, the more they can embody the inner meaning of family and everything being prosperous. "Good and evil coexist in human nature. Without balance, there can be no harmony. Without harmony, the world will be in chaos." Human nature cannot be tested. If interests are touched, any kind of conflict may occur. However, if we want to overcome the difficulties, we must work together. If everyone is self-interested, it will leave endless sorrow.

The author's writing style is very good, the male and female protagonists have top-notch IQs, and the family they create is also very harmonious. The only drawback is that the novel is too bland, giving people a narrative feel. When fighting against wolves, doesn't it hurt if you are bitten by a wolf? There should be cries of pain when it hurts, and the same goes for when facing unruly people. The threats of the unruly people were not described in words. When the thieves cut off their hands and hamstrings, there should also be cries of pain, etc. The author did not describe it well in words. The feeling it gave me was that it didn't present a very dangerous or tense feeling, it was just plain and ordinary.

There are very good points and ideas, and there are also many directions that everyone likes. But there are some logical fillings, and there are always some links that are not connected. It is the kind that at first glance, it seems that I can continue reading. I look at it and think, this is a good point, so I continue reading, but after looking at it, I feel that the logic is a bit unnatural, so it goes over and over again... I have read more than two hundred chapters, and I really can't stand it anymore. I don't know if there are any amazing points later, but after seeing the plot here, the focus is completely on being Yang San's successor. It is obviously me. In ancient times, he was a famous teacher, but the focus of the current famous teacher is entirely on Yang San. The future emperor can indeed be called a famous teacher. In addition, other people he interacts with are all paving the way for Yang San. Before Bozhou, it could be said that Yang San was not the male protagonist, but later on, it was impossible to tell whether the male protagonist was Yang San or Zhou Jue. Zhou Jue was said to be the male protagonist, but almost everything he did was to pave the way for Yang San, just like a tool man. Rather than calling this article a famous teacher, it is better to call it an imperial teacher. I originally thought that there was at least a direction that would be both uplifting and benefiting the world, but the more I looked at it, the narrower it became. On the surface, I kept emphasizing the troubled times, but in fact, there were very few things written about troubled times. Almost all of them revolved around the small families of the powerful and the male protagonists. I rarely wrote about the far-reaching influence and the power that this famous teacher brought to ordinary people. , It has been written, but it is not as long as the so-called Emperor Master... It gives me the feeling that this article has a "fake name" after reading it. The comments are all good, the ratings are very high, there are many recommendations, and the rankings are also good, but when I really read it, I feel like it is not worthy of such a prestigious reputation...

It has to be said that the officers and soldiers in Yangyang's works are truly soldiers and bandits. I believe that the people have no love and respect for them at all, right? Of course, soldiers and bandits don't need it either

I always feel like I left within less than a month of teaching. Just changing the lives of those children is too idealistic. Let's not talk about how much we learned in just one month. You've forgotten everything before you grow up!

The male and female protagonists Zhou Yu and Yang Xi both traveled from modern times back to ancient times. Fortunately, they can still be husband and wife together. This is also a great fate. Zhou Yu's father was upright and honest, and he directly became a comparison group for corrupt officials. People hated him deeply. It is obvious to all that corrupt officials want to destroy the Zhou family after they come to power, not to mention that the emperor is fatuous. It is unwise for an emperor like this to work for him! Fortunately, they were somewhat prepared. But in a chaotic situation like this, people can't make a living, so it's better to just live in a corner! The so-called poverty means being alone! It's not really selfish.

The male and female protagonists have changed their household registrations and road signs, and the Wu family has also changed their road signs. Apart from bandits, the road ahead should be safer, and I feel relieved.

The limited exemption is useless for those who often follow updates. It is better to burst the updates to make the old readers happy. We also want to give benefits to old readers, that is, explosive updates