
People Are Perfect, but the System is in Ruins?
About This Novel
Good news! Time traveled! There is a system! Bad news! It's perfect! The system is positioned in prehistoric times! ! But... I was given an innate Taoist body at the beginning, which doesn't seem to be bad news... [Ding--Congratulations to the host for creating Ye Yi and obtaining "The Transformation of Gods and Demons"! [Ding--Congratulations to the host, you created the first cluster of flames and obtained the human race's sacred fire "Xinhuo"! [Ding--Congratulations to the host for creating a cultivation system, becoming a human saint master, and obtaining the twenty-fourth grade Green Lotus of Creation! [Ding--Congratulations to the host, you killed the ferocious beast and obtained the innate treasure Chaos Bell! ... Many years later. Shi Hao: Brother Tian is indeed Brother Tian, one person suppresses an era! Huo Ling'er: You are indeed my man! Liu Shen: It's an honor to witness the arrival of this era with you!
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Official(18)Scraped 11d ago
The author is great, I don't want a stallion story, it's not good-looking, just three or four female protagonists, I don't want a stallion story🐴
Female main building
Ladies and Gentlemen, as for the heroine, please fill it out and I'll see if it's the ones Lao Mao has chosen. If not, then I'll think about the plot.
Chen Dong said that the Immortal Emperor ≈ the Great Luo Celestial Immortal. Daluo Tianxian is the highest realm of Taoist mythology. Fengshen and Journey to the West are stitched together + hodgepodge, a mess. Novels are novels, myths are myths, don't get them confused. It is recommended that the author read "Tao Zang"
Why hasn't it been updated yet?
Why hasn't it been updated? Why hasn't it been updated? It's been half a month.
The author is already home, why don't you update?
The author's writing is good, but he probably hasn't read the original work
In the first chapter, the strength exceeds 100,000 kilograms, but he has not yet entered the blood-moving realm. The blood-moving realm in the original book is not just to train his body to break through tens of thousands of kilograms of strength, even if he enters the country, but here is a boy who has broken 100,000 kilograms without entering the blood-moving realm. I feel happy whenever a young man's physical body has broken through the blood-moving extreme realm. But in the end, someone who has no knowledge, thought it was like the world of martial arts or immortal cultivation, so he trained his magic power and Qi or something like that. It's numb.
The beginning is very sandy. The protagonist doesn't want to travel through time. Then you write a fart article. There is also sandy. He's talking nonsense and doesn't know anything. He talks nonsense about all kinds of nonsense. Sandyong. The protagonist also speaks very sandyly. He has no cultural level, so don't write it. He's just like a brat. Sandyong.
The setting is very good, don't be a eunuch
Not bad, but Perfection and Prehistoric World should be in the same world, otherwise just one thing in Prehistoric World can destroy Perfection
Let me remind you, the author should make the comparison between the prehistoric and perfect world realms earlier and make it more reasonable, otherwise the dutiful son of the prehistoric world and the dutiful son of the perfect trilogy will come over soon🙃
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Official(18)Scraped 11d ago
The author is great, I don't want a stallion story, it's not good-looking, just three or four female protagonists, I don't want a stallion story🐴
Female main building
Ladies and Gentlemen, as for the heroine, please fill it out and I'll see if it's the ones Lao Mao has chosen. If not, then I'll think about the plot.
Chen Dong said that the Immortal Emperor ≈ the Great Luo Celestial Immortal. Daluo Tianxian is the highest realm of Taoist mythology. Fengshen and Journey to the West are stitched together + hodgepodge, a mess. Novels are novels, myths are myths, don't get them confused. It is recommended that the author read "Tao Zang"
Why hasn't it been updated yet?
Why hasn't it been updated? Why hasn't it been updated? It's been half a month.
The author is already home, why don't you update?
The author's writing is good, but he probably hasn't read the original work
In the first chapter, the strength exceeds 100,000 kilograms, but he has not yet entered the blood-moving realm. The blood-moving realm in the original book is not just to train his body to break through tens of thousands of kilograms of strength, even if he enters the country, but here is a boy who has broken 100,000 kilograms without entering the blood-moving realm. I feel happy whenever a young man's physical body has broken through the blood-moving extreme realm. But in the end, someone who has no knowledge, thought it was like the world of martial arts or immortal cultivation, so he trained his magic power and Qi or something like that. It's numb.
The beginning is very sandy. The protagonist doesn't want to travel through time. Then you write a fart article. There is also sandy. He's talking nonsense and doesn't know anything. He talks nonsense about all kinds of nonsense. Sandyong. The protagonist also speaks very sandyly. He has no cultural level, so don't write it. He's just like a brat. Sandyong.
The setting is very good, don't be a eunuch
Not bad, but Perfection and Prehistoric World should be in the same world, otherwise just one thing in Prehistoric World can destroy Perfection
Let me remind you, the author should make the comparison between the prehistoric and perfect world realms earlier and make it more reasonable, otherwise the dutiful son of the prehistoric world and the dutiful son of the perfect trilogy will come over soon🙃









