Swallowing the Starry Sky: I Get Stronger Every Year

When writing fan fiction, you can only write about Douluo and Dou Po. If you want to be special, you can only die violently. I believe all readers will feel this deeply.

Recently, some comments have been saying that the protagonist has a flawed character, is ungrateful, ruins everything while eating, and is rebellious while enjoying the resources of the tribe. It may be due to problems with the reading perspective, or skipping chapters, or it may be that my writing is not clear enough. No matter what the reason is, it cannot cover up the facts in the starry sky. The universe is cold, and there are thousands of enslaved races. The aloof immortals, venerables, and masters of the universe will not care about the future of other races. Whether you are a kind-hearted person, a grateful person, or a vicious person, it doesn't matter if you don't have strength. Those who are strong will not care about the weak. In the early days, I wrote that buying alien slaves was like buying groceries, and I could even inquire about the prices back and forth. Maybe my writing skills were limited, so I didn't write so impressively, and my exposure wasn't naked enough... If the earth had been discovered earlier and the protagonist followed Luo Feng and some people on earth to escape, it would be another story! Although I won't write it like this, it doesn't mean that it's not possible! This is the real universe! There is nothing wrong with becoming stronger, but the mentality in the process of becoming stronger depends on the experience. When you know that the earth is going to be taken away, and when the people on earth may become a wandering civilization, how can you be "grateful"? How to generate "identity"? Righteousness may be a bit ridiculous, but attempted robbery will lead to jail time! The only way to become stronger is for the protagonist to work hard. The author is also working hard and taking it seriously. (Volume 2, Chapter 40 left a note.)

The protagonist can never let go, is he afraid that the earth will be discovered? Then simply stay away from the earth forever and never enter the universe. In this book, because of the protagonist, Luo Feng also knew the specialness of the earth very early, but he still behaved and fought for it. He was not as dark as the protagonist. He just thought too much and scared himself.

It's okay for the protagonist to hide his strength, but it's too obvious. It feels very deliberate. Don't treat the top powerhouse in the universe as a fool.

It's really poorly written. You can't hide at all. All your actions are being monitored by the virtual universe. When you enter the sight of the Lord of the Universe, they will also check your details, so hiding is a waste of effort. The protagonist in the author's novel is like a stupid child. Participating in the Genius War to enter the Secret Realm is as valuable as joining the Virtual Universe Company and stepping up to the core level to join the Secret Realm. Why does the protagonist feel that entering the Secret Realm from within the company is not as good as those who come out of the Genius Battle? You're already at the core level, so why won't those higher-ups investigate you? You might as well fight with geniuses from the beginning. But, your golden finger is getting stronger every year. If you really want to hide it, you just walk alone in the universe and take time to develop, quietly surprising everyone. As a result, I didn't even hide it, and I ended up covered in chicken feathers. Goldfinger is not used well either. In addition, the protagonist is willing to sacrifice everything for his hometown and disobey the ethnic group. It is so "righteous". Those masters of the universe don't think "this is what the human race should do", but want to kill the protagonist? ? There is also a small drawback, enslaving the Nightmare King and the disciple of the Master of Wither, knowing that enslavement is useless, they still have to let them go in the end. They are still enslaved. Where is their brains? The funniest thing is that after reading so many fanfics, I have seen the alien universe master enter the battlefield outside the territory in order to strangle the protagonist, but this is the first time I have seen the human universe master enter the battlefield, bully the small ones, and expose the genius of his clan. The other human universe masters watch the show without stopping, especially Long Xing who said he would kill him if he wanted? ? ? This is the kind of human race in the universe. The protagonist risked his death, got the most powerful and precious ax, and dedicated it to the giant axe. Should the author let the protagonist lick those Lord of the Universe assholes and suck them twice more? After writing about it, the earth is still not saved, and the route of returning to the human race is very different from other fan fiction. So why is the author taking off his pants and farting here? If you want to hide, hide well, don't get in the face of the Lord of the Universe, if you want to defend, resist to the end. The natives of the Universe Sea, who are only at the same latitude, know the plot in advance and have the system in hand, yet they still make them feel so aggrieved? The author also makes a good name. Is this the protagonist's growth experience? ? ? Did you write a sadistic article? Can my system flow traveler suffer this kind of grievance? Standing on the earth, directly shouting to the original will of the original universe, Qingfeng Realm gave birth to hundreds of thousands of world beasts, and directly received the protection of the Ancestral God Sect, the face of those masters of the universe was nothing. To make an analogy, the Monkey King is the protagonist who fights against the cosmic people for the sake of the earth. The hero who fights against the Buddha and is brought back by the giant axe is an honest protagonist. The hero who fights against the Buddha is just the hero who fights against the Buddha. He no longer deserves the reputation of the Monkey King. The protagonist who is also brought back by the giant ax without wisdom and fighting spirit is the worst performer in both fan fiction and system literature. After writing it like this, the author's reaction to those negative reviews was "It's really interesting to see these reviews." Are you crazy about writing novels? Live in your own world? A book friend made a good comment. Whether the writing is good or not depends not on how clever the author's conception is or how reasonable the plot is, but on the feedback from readers.

The first time I saw the time traveler, I felt that the original protagonist robbed the time traveler of his opportunity. I'm afraid you are a fool.

The previous chapters are too..., Hard to describe, and completely unreadable.

Realm Master collapsed after that. The author forced his words and kept reading the readers' feedback and data. He wanted to write that the protagonist's IQ was online and he was hiding in hiding, but he also wanted to achieve results. He forced the blood and climaxed hard, and almost wrote the protagonist as a schizophrenic. I'm afraid not many people will be able to read it at this point. It's really difficult for the author to pay back so much!

Why does the author keep changing the protagonist's personality? It's disgusting and contrived.

If you don't take the treasure, you will leave it to others. . . The protagonist is really a saint