Douluo: Seven Treasures Glazed Pagoda? Soul Beast Tower!

Qian Daoliu allowed Bibi Dong to be mentally ill. The protagonist's brain is also not working well, and he is close to Qian Renxue even though he knows that Bibi Dong is mentally ill.

This author's book is generally good so far. But there are also a few obvious poisonous points. First of all, the first soul ring is the pure-blood true dragon. It should be changed to a pure-blood sub-dragon. There are very few pure-blooded true dragons in the Douluo series, and the few that are there are ridiculous. The second one is when absorbing the first soul ring, the soul ring that is said to be 700 years old should be changed to a quality comparable to that of 700 years old, otherwise it makes no sense logically. Because you don't have any other plug-ins. The third one is when Qian Renxue approached Bibi Dong and refused to go undercover. Bibi Dong just released his pressure. Qian Daoliu can hold him down, and the Wuhun Palace is the Qianjia's Soul Palace. The unity of politics and religion has been inherited for a long time. Before Bibi Dong became a god, Qiandaoliu could kill Bibi Dong at any time because Bibi Dong's previous divine examinations would have suppressed his strength. In Qian Daoliu's view, Bibi Dong was just a tool, and it was just because his precious granddaughter wanted and needed a mother that she didn't kill him. Otherwise, do you think that Tian Wudi, whose son was killed, would not dare to kill anyone? From the Enshrinement Hall to the Elder Hall, the prestige of the Qian Family is absolute. Even if it was Ju Gui, the two Douluo followed him because Bibi Dong was a disciple of Qian Xunji and had the tacit approval of the great worshipper.

No wonder the comment area was full of curses. We are here to torture Gang and Three, so it would be better for you to write about the abuser. It's already 2026, and there are still people writing about abusive masters. If you don't get scolded, who will?

The author adds too many extravagances. On the first 18th floor, I was hit by a car, and it was written that someone deliberately guided me away. Can you come back to fill this hole later? The second awakening memory must be that in Douluo, when someone called Awakening Wuhun at the age of six, he still felt unaware. People who traveled through time must have been thinking about this day for a long time, right? The third awakened martial soul was suddenly struck by lightning at home. Is the author polite to ask? This is another trap. Can it be filled in later? The fourth one just awakened his martial soul and was thinking about the Ice and Fire Eyes and wanted to hook up with Dugu Yan. Qian Xunji was still there at this time, and Dugu Yan was probably not born yet. Don't add drama to yourself without making any sense.

I can only say that she was fine before she was killed by Dongzi, but after she was killed, she was pure and pure. In the front, she still seemed to be in pure love with Qian Renxue, but later she turned into a mutated horse. The nine dragon soul rings had to be made into a female, so that Brigitte liked the protagonist. I really don't understand this. We only met twice in total, and we said a few words to each other, but the second time we met You wrote about Brigitte falling in love with the protagonist. I can only say that the writing is really curious. In addition, I don't think about Qian Renxue if I die. It's not like I want to improve my strength quickly and find her. I don't think about women. I can only say that the author is a person who can write books. The protagonist is also a real person, a hundred times more born than the Tang Shenwang. I can only say that the writing is awesome.

Later on, it became watery and extremely boring.

I can't even figure out the timeline. If you want to innovate and write a few characters yourself, it's too rigid to copy. To put it bluntly, you just want to innovate but have no ability and can only piece it together.

Let's write a single female protagonist. The relationship between the protagonist and Qian Renxue was so well described in the early stage. It would be a bit bad to write multiple female protagonists later. Although the protagonist was killed by Bibi Dong and Qian Naoliu also acquiesced, then just wait for Qian Daoliu later. Don't worry about him if you sacrifice for Qian Renxue. Bibi Dong directly takes revenge and kills her. It's best to kill her apprentice, who is a white-eyed wolf anyway. In the end, Yu Xiaobang is brutally killed in front of Bibi Dong. The protagonist and Qian Renxue take control of the Wuhun Palace together.

How did such a book score 9 points? It was produced just like Sword Wine, right?

If this kind of shit can reach nine, it seems that this software is finished.