Douluo: after Receiving His Urn, He Became Invincible

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It's too sweet. The first poisonous point is that the innate eighth-level soul power is not received from the main hall of Wuhun Hall for training, which already makes me speechless. There are no more than 100 people in the whole continent who can combine the seven innate levels, and all the eighth-level innate souls can enter the golden generation. The second poisonous point is to find the Millennium Second Ring. The Soul Hunting Team has the moral bottom line of the Soul Hunting Team. If your Millennium Second Ring does not arrest you and question you, it is simply impossible. The third poisonous point is the issue of the original heroine. Does the author really not know how difficult it is to control the original heroine in Douluo? Many people can't accept your original heroine. Even if they can accept it, it's not easy to grasp. Although the author won't sit at the same table as sugar and three spoons, it's really fast.

1. You were thrown into a small town below when you were born at level 8. According to the setting of Dou Yi, now level 8 can definitely charge a Titled Douluo, but in the end, you just threw it outside and ignored it, and in the end you had to be tortured to death. 2. The second one said that he didn't want to talk to Tang San, but at the same time he was entangled with others. At first, he said that the soul skill hidden behind the soul ring was exposed, and he wanted Tang Hao to beat him to death. 3. What original female character are you writing in Douluo Dalu? The emotional lines are poorly written and not likable. The author also wants to forcefully add drama, and the entire scene is filled with heartbreaking lovesickness. The emotional line is based on the word cry, why is this woman not dead? 4. The author already has the intention of being black for the sake of being black. He no longer cares about what the character is like, and it will collapse when it should. And it's really far-fetched to die one by one.

All I can say is that the death of the protagonist in the second urn was not unjust at all. You deserve to die. It was clearly agreed not to contact Xiao Wu and the others. It also exposed the second ring of the millennium and kept in contact with it. If you don't die, who will die? This time I don't take sides with the protagonist, I support Tang Hao and the others.

You don't have a second heroine yet, it's just ambiguous. If you don't want it, why don't you give up? Anyway, I advise you not to write now. I can see that you can't write just one emotional line. What you write is like a **, either crying or crying, and the emotional line is not There is no crying process when we meet, and there are no details, and there is no nothing, that is, how good the relationship is, and so on, but there are no details. If you don't know how to write, don't write too much. It's really funny to read so many heroines at your level. In addition, the urn accounts for too much, 190,000 words. I think at least 130,000 words are written about the urn. Anyway, it is very watery. Looking at it myself, I have no choice but to read it now. I only read this novel if someone can read my evaluation and decide whether it can be read. There is another little poisonous point, that is, I don't know what you think about the process of Xiao Wu knowing the urn. I can only say that this is a very poisonous simulator to write this. Anyway, I can't stand it. I think this is the only one you have, so I will try my best to read it. And this is not called an urn, at most it is something given after being simulated by the simulator, because you wrote it in too detail. The most important thing is that the author can't write multiple heroines or emotional lines. I advise you not to write it now. If you can't control it, it's obvious. If you can't control it, writing so many heroines will be of no use other than wasting the word count because I haven't seen any process. Even if it's just daily greetings, I won't ask you to write anything that violates the rules. Even if it doesn't violate the rules, you won't write anything. It can really be said that if you insist on writing about pure emotions, you will easily get bored of it.

Author, how do you connect "10 years old" with "already missed the best age for cultivation"? No matter which world or cultivation system you are in, the age of ten is a good time for your mind to be initially determined and to officially enter the period of rapid cultivation. (The best time to practice should be between 10 or 12 to 20 years old. If you are too young, you will not be able to calm down. If you exceed 20 years old, your body will stop growing and your condition will basically be finalized.) By the time I get to you, I have already missed the best age for cultivation.

Wuhun Palace will help you awaken Wuhun for free. If you have the strength, think about dealing with Wuhun Palace.

What a fucking piece of rubbish. The levels were suppressed too hard. There were several 100,000-year-old soul bones and 400,000-year-old soul bones. With the level suppressed for almost a year, it reached level 36. Just six levels? Treat readers like idiots.

If you are selling sheep's head and selling dog meat, you might as well just write a mock essay

This novel could have been a high-quality one, but it was already written about a Douluo fan and it had an original female protagonist. I was speechless. I had read it earlier and it was amazing, but the fact that it had an original female protagonist was really annoying to me.