Back to 85: from Pengcheng Hawker to Giant
About This Novel
(New book: Back to 1987, My Girlfriend is from 1907) Back to 1985. At that time, my father was holding the wrinkled Special Economic Zone newspaper in his hand and hesitating whether to go south to Pengcheng. My mother used a sewing machine to sew 368.45 Yuan into her clothes. Grandpa and uncle persuaded father. In the previous life, my father finally gave up the idea, which became a lifelong regret. In this huge gamble with time: border breakers, street vendors, shantytowns, joint defense teams, electronics factories and endless opportunities are all forcing him to answer: Can he ride the golden road of 1997 with a rural bicycle in 1979? Can the moonlight tricycle of 1985 be used to carry the ambitions of the entire turbulent era? Cheng Yang felt that if there were technical help getting started, he could give it a try. Let the corner of your clothes be stained not only with the dust of 1985, but also with the metal debris belonging to the entire reform era... PS: Shenzhen text. Light on abilities, heavy on chronological realism (skills only help the protagonist to get started in Peng City a little easier in the early stage.)
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Official(33)Scraped 19d ago
The writing is very good, but the only problem is that it is too trivial and detailed. Even decorating and buying furniture is written bit by bit. Many things are mentioned in one stroke, which can make your article concise and colorful, and also increase the appeal of the novel. A good online novel writer must be able to be careful about his novels. He can write or not write, and he can describe what he does not write. It may not be described, it may not be described, it may be foiled, it may not be foiled, it is not foiled, it is necessary to make the novel have tension, twists and turns, and a refreshing point. Many authors especially like to be more and more complete. Of course, if you cut off the content that you have worked so hard to come up with, you will definitely be reluctant to cut it off, but you can get it if you are willing to do it. No matter how many words you have, if no one reads what you write, it does not mean that you have not written it.
Do you know why your grades are not improving? Goldfinger is back, but it has always been used as a piece of trash and has never been able to get on the stage. This is uncomfortable, and simply put, it doesn't feel satisfying enough. So the question is, how to enjoy it? Can future female stars have their beards cut off? Can I find a different career path? Can you lead a group of young men to steal back a few female stars from Hong Kong? Can we get on the bus if there is a chance in 80 years? The writing is clean and revealing, (it was really unpleasant to see the part where you went to fix CT scans for free in order to sell vegetables). When can you make a fortune selling vegetables?
Explain the golden finger
Hand of Soul is a preliminary transitional start for the protagonist, so it won't take much space to write. The main thing is to rely on the protagonist's own foresight, but he won't know everything. Secondly, the business lines are divided into two: The first one, selling vegetable line This is for Shenzhen's initial food basket project, so as to develop connections within the system, and also for the purpose of building a future [Pang Donglai-style complex]. I also call it an offline industrial humanistic service line. The second one is the electronic wire. The protagonist's setting does not understand this, but the people he meets do, and there is also this soul hand that occasionally helps the protagonist in important times. But mainly he will use his rebirth advantage to lay out. It is impossible not to lay out electronic lines in Shenzhen. Later, it extended from the electronic wire to the technological Internet and so on. This is the future investment direction and the online business ecological chain. Summary: The outline is beautiful, but the reality is cruel. The author is not good at writing, it is the result of a round of travel.
In the early stage, it was good food and grass, but in the later stage, it was not to your liking.
The writing in the early stage was obviously very good, but it started to change after Uncle Fu gave 5 million. Not to mention that you knew the prospects of VCD and just gave it to others. Later, the bulk of the stock trading was given to others, which is awesome! If you want to write more comfortably, if you have a golden finger, then make the book bigger. If you want to write more logically, then write slowly and steadily. It's understandable that you want to make money through connections, and you should be in a dominant position, instead of starting to act like a junior brother after meeting a big shot. The more you look at it later, the more awkward you will feel.
very good
The description is delicate and measured, and the story is exciting but not shocking.
Why does the back part feel a bit like a literary youth? I'm not used to it.
I don't even know how old the protagonist is when he leaves the factory
I thought it was very good in the beginning, but from the time I started writing about Su, the book lost its flavor and became science fiction. It's a pity.
Author, the game industry I mentioned was actually game consoles and related console games in the 1990s. There is also IC manufacturing, which needs to be entered as soon as possible. If you have low-end IC chips or IC chips made more than ten years ago, just buy the technology and production lines, and then pay some money to hire someone to guide the manufacturing. For example, the chip of the Xiaobawang learning machine, the CPU uses the mos6502 that was released in 1975. We strive to be able to fully manufacture learning machines and VCDs, including chips and decoders, by 1992 and 1993. We are currently in 1991, and we have enough time to set up an IC manufacturing plant. You can try asking Hu Zhengming and Liang Mengsong to helm the pig's trotter chip manufacturing company.
The main reason is that the word count is a bit short. I'm afraid I'll lose it as soon as I read it, so just keep it.
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Official(33)Scraped 19d ago
The writing is very good, but the only problem is that it is too trivial and detailed. Even decorating and buying furniture is written bit by bit. Many things are mentioned in one stroke, which can make your article concise and colorful, and also increase the appeal of the novel. A good online novel writer must be able to be careful about his novels. He can write or not write, and he can describe what he does not write. It may not be described, it may not be described, it may be foiled, it may not be foiled, it is not foiled, it is necessary to make the novel have tension, twists and turns, and a refreshing point. Many authors especially like to be more and more complete. Of course, if you cut off the content that you have worked so hard to come up with, you will definitely be reluctant to cut it off, but you can get it if you are willing to do it. No matter how many words you have, if no one reads what you write, it does not mean that you have not written it.
Do you know why your grades are not improving? Goldfinger is back, but it has always been used as a piece of trash and has never been able to get on the stage. This is uncomfortable, and simply put, it doesn't feel satisfying enough. So the question is, how to enjoy it? Can future female stars have their beards cut off? Can I find a different career path? Can you lead a group of young men to steal back a few female stars from Hong Kong? Can we get on the bus if there is a chance in 80 years? The writing is clean and revealing, (it was really unpleasant to see the part where you went to fix CT scans for free in order to sell vegetables). When can you make a fortune selling vegetables?
Explain the golden finger
Hand of Soul is a preliminary transitional start for the protagonist, so it won't take much space to write. The main thing is to rely on the protagonist's own foresight, but he won't know everything. Secondly, the business lines are divided into two: The first one, selling vegetable line This is for Shenzhen's initial food basket project, so as to develop connections within the system, and also for the purpose of building a future [Pang Donglai-style complex]. I also call it an offline industrial humanistic service line. The second one is the electronic wire. The protagonist's setting does not understand this, but the people he meets do, and there is also this soul hand that occasionally helps the protagonist in important times. But mainly he will use his rebirth advantage to lay out. It is impossible not to lay out electronic lines in Shenzhen. Later, it extended from the electronic wire to the technological Internet and so on. This is the future investment direction and the online business ecological chain. Summary: The outline is beautiful, but the reality is cruel. The author is not good at writing, it is the result of a round of travel.
In the early stage, it was good food and grass, but in the later stage, it was not to your liking.
The writing in the early stage was obviously very good, but it started to change after Uncle Fu gave 5 million. Not to mention that you knew the prospects of VCD and just gave it to others. Later, the bulk of the stock trading was given to others, which is awesome! If you want to write more comfortably, if you have a golden finger, then make the book bigger. If you want to write more logically, then write slowly and steadily. It's understandable that you want to make money through connections, and you should be in a dominant position, instead of starting to act like a junior brother after meeting a big shot. The more you look at it later, the more awkward you will feel.
very good
The description is delicate and measured, and the story is exciting but not shocking.
Why does the back part feel a bit like a literary youth? I'm not used to it.
I don't even know how old the protagonist is when he leaves the factory
I thought it was very good in the beginning, but from the time I started writing about Su, the book lost its flavor and became science fiction. It's a pity.
Author, the game industry I mentioned was actually game consoles and related console games in the 1990s. There is also IC manufacturing, which needs to be entered as soon as possible. If you have low-end IC chips or IC chips made more than ten years ago, just buy the technology and production lines, and then pay some money to hire someone to guide the manufacturing. For example, the chip of the Xiaobawang learning machine, the CPU uses the mos6502 that was released in 1975. We strive to be able to fully manufacture learning machines and VCDs, including chips and decoders, by 1992 and 1993. We are currently in 1991, and we have enough time to set up an IC manufacturing plant. You can try asking Hu Zhengming and Liang Mengsong to helm the pig's trotter chip manufacturing company.
The main reason is that the word count is a bit short. I'm afraid I'll lose it as soon as I read it, so just keep it.
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