The Fairy Cultivator Sets up a Stall to Tell Fortunes in a Thriller Game
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[Bking Face Slap + Cultivation + Real and Fake Daughter + Horror Infinite Stream + Xixi Golden Finger + Whistle Xiang] She is the real daughter of a wealthy federal family living outside. She grew up in a garbage dump and is a waste with only F-level mental strength. Scorned and favored by his parents, excluded and framed by Green Tea's fake daughter, the cultivator's sect is in danger. Only by participating in the "God-making Game" on the federal planet can she practice again and turn the tide! "Isn't it? How can a waste with only F-level mental power enter the "God-Making Game"?" "Maybe she's here to make up the numbers." "With only 3 points of attack power, a gust of wind can kill her, right?" Josh, a useless waste who was not favored by everyone, casually summoned an SSS-level god-level monster in the plane. Just when everyone thought she was going to kill everyone, she smiled slightly: "Open the fortune telling, fortune telling, monster location, weakness, treasure location, plane feng shui, monster face, 3000 points for one hexagram, scan the QR code to pay, thank you!" The barrage: "There is something wrong! 3,000 Points, what idiot would do that?" Contestant: "I, I, I, I want to count!" "Don't jump in the queue!" Barrage: "..." These are the star players they used their points to win?
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Official(221)Scraped 19d ago
I don't know how I finished reading this novel
Josh, a real daughter of a wealthy Federation family who was abandoned on a garbage planet, was found but only saw the ugly faces of her relatives. In order to save her master in the world of cultivation, she needs to win the survival game and become a god! For this reason, when the whole family stood on the side of the fake daughter and accused her of stealing other people's qualifications to participate in the game, she finally spoke up! The well-founded rebuttal made these people reflect on themselves, and Josh was able to participate in the game. She uses fortune-telling in exchange for points in the game to help herself succeed. This is a smart girl...
Let's do some research to make the plot more reasonable.
This theme of wearing back clothes is quite novel. But as for the latest heroine This village is not a female queen at all! So many outrageous settings 1-Saints cannot meet men, otherwise they are impure. In a female-dominated society, there are shackles of female chastity. 2-The oral habits of people in a woman-dominated society are actually words that insult women and male-oriented words. 3- In a femdom-dominated society, women actually have such a big difference in power from men? Is it possible for a female leader to want Liu Fufeng, a weak woman? 4-Saints in a female-dominated society actually have to undergo circumcision? ? ? Why haven't I seen Tantric Buddhists want to purify their bodies? . . What outrageous settings are these?
feel
Looking at it now, the author's writing style is really good, and the character description is also OK. Just the comment on the live broadcast, should you consider changing it later? Although it is said to be a slap in the face, it is really unpleasant to watch all the bad words. Several copies of the heroine can slowly prove that she is a capable person. Not everyone watching the live broadcast is an idiot. Some positive comments can be intercepted to slowly deepen the heroine's power, instead of using others' slander and "intelligence" to set off the brilliance of the protagonist team every time. This is my personal idea. Just take a look at it, and don't force changes for others. Just keep writing at your own pace. I just want to give you a suggestion, and I wish the book a great success!
Although I usually read stories about heroines, I also read other good-looking ones. I don't know if anyone has seen "I Become a God in a Thriller Game". It has that flavor_(:з∠)_Maybe it's because the male protagonist is an illusion caused by being sliced. As far as this article is concerned, the heroine's design does not feel very three-dimensional. The heroine almost ascended to the throne. After she came back, she always felt dissed by her family but not like a barrage. The heroine has a growth-type mental power. She can increase her mental power by practicing inner elixirs. Then the boss of each copy always has some inexplicable effects on the heroine. Emotions, but they are not necessarily sliced by the male protagonist. I guess it is to give the female protagonist some kind of godly identity, so the bosses are allowed to kill the female protagonist, and then be attracted to the female protagonist, emmm. In terms of the plot, there is no merit or demerit. The routine is similar. If the female protagonist does not have anything, the system will take it. If she cannot defeat the male protagonist, she will explode and save her. Others are just mentioned in one stroke. If it is a group portrait article, the lines of other people are not very attractive.
What is it?
No, just a second ago Josh lost control because he thought the Mermaid King exploded and died, but ended up being forcefully kissed by the male protagonist and forgetting about the Mermaid? ? Just chase him and ask for a kiss? Even though we readers know that the Mermaid King may not be dead, Josh doesn't know that. There is no need to give out candy just for the sake of giving out candy. The main plot is obviously still being pushed, but halfway through, you jump directly into the emotional plot? What's the difference between this and eating half of it? [Emot=default,04/]
I started high and low and thought it was a double strength, but the heroine eventually turned into the hero's darling wife. The first copy was good, but the emotional scene was a bit abrupt. The second part was too rushed, and the heroine's petite appearance was always created. In the second part, the heroine thought she would become a royal sister when she grew up, but in the end she was still pale and thin. The "temperament that does not belong to this age group" should be the heroine's thousands of years. It's the result of cultivation, but many of the scenes are just like losing intelligence. The male protagonist's love is like raising a canary, and he always emphasizes that he raised it; the ending of Yu Shi and Lu Zhangyang is quite reasonable. Yu Shi's IQ should still be the same as that of a child, and he doesn't understand love, so I think it's normal. There are a lot of scenes where the heroine's mental strength is F-level, and the subsequent upgrades are very sloppy.
I can't stand the second copy anymore. The author's writing is okay. The first copy is also good. Some minor bugs are acceptable, but the second one? The heroine really deviates from the character. How can a person who is thousands of years old in the Tribulation Realm be so naive? Although the author has given her a very smart brain, she is really like a primary school student. The second copy is even more Mary Sue. She is all kinds of cute, small and so on. Oh my God, I personally really can't accept it. It's like reading an ancient romance novel.
Very messy
I feel there are a lot of bugs, and many things are forced and inconsistent. I'm curious how the heroine lives in the world of immortality for thousands of years? How did you manage to have an underage mind after you put it back? The emotional line is very strange. I feel that the male protagonist is like a pedophile. If you calculate it, the female protagonist is over 100 years old except for the female protagonist who is 500 years old. The female protagonist is still a minor and only 17 years old. Doesn't it really feel weird? Then there is the part about the parents. I feel that the heroine is forced to become a tool. The heroine does not know anything very well. When she does not understand, she is treated as her daughter-in-law and even tests her 666 I feel that the plot of the dungeon is also very strange. I don't see a very clear main line, and I can't quite tell where the highlights are. Then he said that although there were no problems with the plot regarding the heroine's parents, it was very uncomfortable to watch, and they were forced to wait until very late to solve it.
The most unreasonable part is that the heroine once cultivated to immortality and almost ascended to heaven. She came back with inner elixir, no cultivation, no spiritual power, the worst F level, and then she upgraded only by using game props, and she didn't achieve anything in practice. All her spiritual power filled up her spiritual power. Good guy, the author of this article has his own way of cultivating immortality. He can increase his spiritual power through spiritual cultivation. He didn't mention whether he went to the world of immortality in person or in the soul body. He said that he went in the soul body and came back with inner elixirs and spiritual roots. Are you saying that I only went to the inner elixir and had no spiritual consciousness? Oh, no, to be more precise, his spiritual consciousness is that weak. The swordsmanship practiced by the heroine can only move a thousand pounds with one move, four or two, and she can still fight back with her remaining health. Maybe it's not that the heroine hasn't learned magic before, but her spiritual power only increases every time she practices it? But her soul-calling skills are pretty good. Could it be that the heroine is actually a Maoshan Taoist priest? He is pretty good at attracting ghosts, exorcising evil spirits, drawing talismans, and setting up formations. Therefore, the heroine's past seems to be full of loopholes. The heroine's habit of cultivating immortals comes and goes. The article only vaguely mentions that the weapon used by the heroine is a sword, but the heroine does not seem to have any requirements for weapons...
Lots of logic errors
Forget about other things, can the author remember the settings he wrote? It's really incredible to people who see it. 1. It is clearly written in the first two chapters that Josh is a minor and cannot blacklist his parents. In the next chapter, Cherry comes and wants Josh to remove them from the blacklist. 2. In the chapter about the Saint, I don't care about the fact that it is clearly set by the heroine but is very tactful. It is clearly written that the saint was insulted by that person, so why is it written that the saint was circumcised at the age of ten? This kind of mistake of not remembering your own settings is really uncomfortable for people watching! !
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Official(221)Scraped 19d ago
I don't know how I finished reading this novel
Josh, a real daughter of a wealthy Federation family who was abandoned on a garbage planet, was found but only saw the ugly faces of her relatives. In order to save her master in the world of cultivation, she needs to win the survival game and become a god! For this reason, when the whole family stood on the side of the fake daughter and accused her of stealing other people's qualifications to participate in the game, she finally spoke up! The well-founded rebuttal made these people reflect on themselves, and Josh was able to participate in the game. She uses fortune-telling in exchange for points in the game to help herself succeed. This is a smart girl...
Let's do some research to make the plot more reasonable.
This theme of wearing back clothes is quite novel. But as for the latest heroine This village is not a female queen at all! So many outrageous settings 1-Saints cannot meet men, otherwise they are impure. In a female-dominated society, there are shackles of female chastity. 2-The oral habits of people in a woman-dominated society are actually words that insult women and male-oriented words. 3- In a femdom-dominated society, women actually have such a big difference in power from men? Is it possible for a female leader to want Liu Fufeng, a weak woman? 4-Saints in a female-dominated society actually have to undergo circumcision? ? ? Why haven't I seen Tantric Buddhists want to purify their bodies? . . What outrageous settings are these?
feel
Looking at it now, the author's writing style is really good, and the character description is also OK. Just the comment on the live broadcast, should you consider changing it later? Although it is said to be a slap in the face, it is really unpleasant to watch all the bad words. Several copies of the heroine can slowly prove that she is a capable person. Not everyone watching the live broadcast is an idiot. Some positive comments can be intercepted to slowly deepen the heroine's power, instead of using others' slander and "intelligence" to set off the brilliance of the protagonist team every time. This is my personal idea. Just take a look at it, and don't force changes for others. Just keep writing at your own pace. I just want to give you a suggestion, and I wish the book a great success!
Although I usually read stories about heroines, I also read other good-looking ones. I don't know if anyone has seen "I Become a God in a Thriller Game". It has that flavor_(:з∠)_Maybe it's because the male protagonist is an illusion caused by being sliced. As far as this article is concerned, the heroine's design does not feel very three-dimensional. The heroine almost ascended to the throne. After she came back, she always felt dissed by her family but not like a barrage. The heroine has a growth-type mental power. She can increase her mental power by practicing inner elixirs. Then the boss of each copy always has some inexplicable effects on the heroine. Emotions, but they are not necessarily sliced by the male protagonist. I guess it is to give the female protagonist some kind of godly identity, so the bosses are allowed to kill the female protagonist, and then be attracted to the female protagonist, emmm. In terms of the plot, there is no merit or demerit. The routine is similar. If the female protagonist does not have anything, the system will take it. If she cannot defeat the male protagonist, she will explode and save her. Others are just mentioned in one stroke. If it is a group portrait article, the lines of other people are not very attractive.
What is it?
No, just a second ago Josh lost control because he thought the Mermaid King exploded and died, but ended up being forcefully kissed by the male protagonist and forgetting about the Mermaid? ? Just chase him and ask for a kiss? Even though we readers know that the Mermaid King may not be dead, Josh doesn't know that. There is no need to give out candy just for the sake of giving out candy. The main plot is obviously still being pushed, but halfway through, you jump directly into the emotional plot? What's the difference between this and eating half of it? [Emot=default,04/]
I started high and low and thought it was a double strength, but the heroine eventually turned into the hero's darling wife. The first copy was good, but the emotional scene was a bit abrupt. The second part was too rushed, and the heroine's petite appearance was always created. In the second part, the heroine thought she would become a royal sister when she grew up, but in the end she was still pale and thin. The "temperament that does not belong to this age group" should be the heroine's thousands of years. It's the result of cultivation, but many of the scenes are just like losing intelligence. The male protagonist's love is like raising a canary, and he always emphasizes that he raised it; the ending of Yu Shi and Lu Zhangyang is quite reasonable. Yu Shi's IQ should still be the same as that of a child, and he doesn't understand love, so I think it's normal. There are a lot of scenes where the heroine's mental strength is F-level, and the subsequent upgrades are very sloppy.
I can't stand the second copy anymore. The author's writing is okay. The first copy is also good. Some minor bugs are acceptable, but the second one? The heroine really deviates from the character. How can a person who is thousands of years old in the Tribulation Realm be so naive? Although the author has given her a very smart brain, she is really like a primary school student. The second copy is even more Mary Sue. She is all kinds of cute, small and so on. Oh my God, I personally really can't accept it. It's like reading an ancient romance novel.
Very messy
I feel there are a lot of bugs, and many things are forced and inconsistent. I'm curious how the heroine lives in the world of immortality for thousands of years? How did you manage to have an underage mind after you put it back? The emotional line is very strange. I feel that the male protagonist is like a pedophile. If you calculate it, the female protagonist is over 100 years old except for the female protagonist who is 500 years old. The female protagonist is still a minor and only 17 years old. Doesn't it really feel weird? Then there is the part about the parents. I feel that the heroine is forced to become a tool. The heroine does not know anything very well. When she does not understand, she is treated as her daughter-in-law and even tests her 666 I feel that the plot of the dungeon is also very strange. I don't see a very clear main line, and I can't quite tell where the highlights are. Then he said that although there were no problems with the plot regarding the heroine's parents, it was very uncomfortable to watch, and they were forced to wait until very late to solve it.
The most unreasonable part is that the heroine once cultivated to immortality and almost ascended to heaven. She came back with inner elixir, no cultivation, no spiritual power, the worst F level, and then she upgraded only by using game props, and she didn't achieve anything in practice. All her spiritual power filled up her spiritual power. Good guy, the author of this article has his own way of cultivating immortality. He can increase his spiritual power through spiritual cultivation. He didn't mention whether he went to the world of immortality in person or in the soul body. He said that he went in the soul body and came back with inner elixirs and spiritual roots. Are you saying that I only went to the inner elixir and had no spiritual consciousness? Oh, no, to be more precise, his spiritual consciousness is that weak. The swordsmanship practiced by the heroine can only move a thousand pounds with one move, four or two, and she can still fight back with her remaining health. Maybe it's not that the heroine hasn't learned magic before, but her spiritual power only increases every time she practices it? But her soul-calling skills are pretty good. Could it be that the heroine is actually a Maoshan Taoist priest? He is pretty good at attracting ghosts, exorcising evil spirits, drawing talismans, and setting up formations. Therefore, the heroine's past seems to be full of loopholes. The heroine's habit of cultivating immortals comes and goes. The article only vaguely mentions that the weapon used by the heroine is a sword, but the heroine does not seem to have any requirements for weapons...
Lots of logic errors
Forget about other things, can the author remember the settings he wrote? It's really incredible to people who see it. 1. It is clearly written in the first two chapters that Josh is a minor and cannot blacklist his parents. In the next chapter, Cherry comes and wants Josh to remove them from the blacklist. 2. In the chapter about the Saint, I don't care about the fact that it is clearly set by the heroine but is very tactful. It is clearly written that the saint was insulted by that person, so why is it written that the saint was circumcised at the age of ten? This kind of mistake of not remembering your own settings is really uncomfortable for people watching! !
