
Forbidden Land Adventure: Playing as the Celestial Master, Teammate Zhang Qilin
About This Novel
Qin Yun traveled to a parallel world full of restricted areas and played the role of the Heavenly Master at the beginning. In order to improve his performance, he participated in the "Forbidden Land Performance" program that was broadcast live around the world. And his teammate is actually Zhang Qilin, the little brother who has guarded the Bronze Gate for generations? "An old Taoist priest and a cold little brother? What a magical combination, program six!" "Why did this old man throw a bolt of lightning so casually that it shocked my mother for a whole year!" "The difference between cultivating immortals and practicing martial arts, I don't think anyone will dare to say that a Taoist priest is a magic stick in the future!" With a smile, Qin Yun looked towards the terrifying forbidden area that everyone avoided. Qin Yun was covered in golden light, riding a ferocious beast and making a scissor hand gesture. "Don't panic, I'm just an ordinary Taoist priest."
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Official(33)Scraped 19d ago
I noticed that first of all, the protagonist's teammates are all younger brothers? Can't you change someone else?
The author has strange sexual habits,
The author's sexual fetishes are really scary. They are two old men.
Why,
In many cases, the protagonist doesn't take action and his teammates keep taking action. Their presence is so low.
Is this a beautiful article?
I look forward to the author writing beautiful articles, I will definitely support him
Is it really okay for you to write this?
The strength of an ordinary person is 5. In the later stage, how high do you want the protagonist's strength to be? 100 Or what? Later on, you even wrote about Journey to the West. The power of immortals is the same as the power of humans. I wonder how much you can write. 100 Million or what? Without 100 million, how can you beat the immortal? I am quite speechless.
About the First Emperor
When I saw your description of the First Emperor, I immediately jumped out of the trap. I admire the First Emperor very much.
The barrage quality is low, and this one is not good. Although there is a reversal, it still makes me upset when I look at it
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Community(0)
Official(33)Scraped 19d ago
I noticed that first of all, the protagonist's teammates are all younger brothers? Can't you change someone else?
The author has strange sexual habits,
The author's sexual fetishes are really scary. They are two old men.
Why,
In many cases, the protagonist doesn't take action and his teammates keep taking action. Their presence is so low.
Is this a beautiful article?
I look forward to the author writing beautiful articles, I will definitely support him
Is it really okay for you to write this?
The strength of an ordinary person is 5. In the later stage, how high do you want the protagonist's strength to be? 100 Or what? Later on, you even wrote about Journey to the West. The power of immortals is the same as the power of humans. I wonder how much you can write. 100 Million or what? Without 100 million, how can you beat the immortal? I am quite speechless.
About the First Emperor
When I saw your description of the First Emperor, I immediately jumped out of the trap. I admire the First Emperor very much.
The barrage quality is low, and this one is not good. Although there is a reversal, it still makes me upset when I look at it















