Just Getting Evil, Shura Armor Kills People Crazy

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A piece of shit, what can the Holy Mother do to save her? I want to charge for writing 25 chapters like this. I really think I am a great god.

What a retarded, brainless piece of writing,,,,,, disgusting, so disgusting

What did I spend my money on?

Do you want to charge for Chapter 25? Do you think you are a great writer?

What is the role of the woman who appears in the 82 photos? Please answer (15 points)

Very good, author, the next step is to kill the federal government, no matter old or young, let go of no one, old or young, shake the eggs to loose yellow, split the earthworms vertically, fill the ant nests with copper water, drink water that contains paraquat, kill even pregnant women and babies, kill everyone until no one dares to mention the name of the protagonist, kill everyone on the road

Kill decisively, do not join any team, and be the enemy of the whole world alone

Author, what are you going to do? Those distinctive belts on the statues, are you going to start an extreme war?

The following are some complaints I made before I read the small print in the first chapter. I added some content after reading it. After seeing the small print, I have been relieved of the brainless article. It is indeed only brainless. Just from the author's desire to portray the protagonist as a loving and righteous person, he has always wanted to avenge his sister and resurrect her, which is true, but killing civilians (although they were put back later), I was extremely disgusted after reading it. Just because you have this idea and want to create a protagonist, I think I give you 1 star. I am sorry. You said that you want revenge when you portray revenge. Why are you involved with civilians? What you wrote after that paragraph is true. I hope that the protagonist will be the same. In the end, the protagonist became a person that almost everyone was afraid of (including Long Yao, you have created the most decent person), so is he good or bad, or just a madman? Reading your article, I only saw a madman biting people everywhere, doing both good and bad things, but this person reads like a crazy person. I generally know that the author wants to shape the plot based on the protagonist's inner changes. This process is tortuous, but I don't know whether it is due to the writing style or the author's conception. I just raise a few questions for the author's reference (only my personal opinions) 1. The IP you use for armor should not have huge changes in the design. Of course, adaptation is also possible, at least it must be reasonable. The original Duanmu is completely different from what you created. This article even started to kill civilians😐. This will make people who have watched the original TV series very disgusted (those who haven't watched it will most likely do the same, and you can imagine the plot writer who kills civilians) (since it is a mindless text, it probably doesn't matter 😂) 2. I understand that the author wants to construct the complex psychological changes of the protagonist, but at least the connection should not be so sloppy (it's all brainless anyway 😂😂😂). For example, in the scene where Shura turns to Yatales, I don't know whether the author wants the protagonist to become righteous or seem to be righteous. Your shaping the plot into a fusion of Yatales and the protagonist is extremely purposeful and a helpless compromise for both parties, so what exactly do you want to portray? What to make? Justice is not like Justice and can drive Yatales, who is known as the god and guardian. It seems a bit abrupt, and it gives me the feeling that you want to force the Shura Armor to be offline, but the explanation you gave later was to pave the way for the follow-up. But isn't the point of your foreshadowing just to make the plot less abrupt? Does it seem more logical? But your foreshadowing process is very abrupt, which will make people feel that the gain is not worth the loss. You will make people feel that the foreshadowing itself is a flaw, and then you might as well not do this foreshadowing. I think it is reasonable for you to write this article as a purely brainless article, but in fact you don't have to, because a brainless article does not require logic and foreshadowing! 😂😂😂 3. Regarding your portrayal of the protagonist who seems to be a heroine, this is also very strange. The reason why you created her so far I only understand that you most likely want to express that there are still "good people" in the world who are kind-hearted but not holy. But the problem is that she has no driving role or influence on the entire plot. It seems that you have written so many interactions with the protagonist, but you might as well delete her to see if her absence will affect the plot or whether she is necessary. Of course. It's not that you can't write about this kind of character, everything depends on the author's wishes, but you spend a lot of space writing it, but it has no promotion effect on the plot. If you don't write about this person, you will still write like this. If you write about her, you will still write like this. So what is the meaning of writing about her? (Since I have no brains, how can the author be happy 😂)