One Piece Knight
by There's No Milk In The Custard Buns
About This Novel
What kind of waves will the bodyguards who travel to the world of One Piece cause in the world of One Piece? Li Ergou, ah no, An will tell you how to use a protective heart to implement the justice in your heart.
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Official(1)Scraped 9d ago
hello author
Let me talk about my thoughts after watching it. First of all, if possible, add more punctuation. Sometimes I don't know who is speaking, and then it is too confusing and does not clearly express what you want to say. There is also the introduction of age and the depiction of pig's feet. Should you write in the first person or the third person? The above are my suggestions that you can try to revise. Come on, you will write better
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Official(1)Scraped 9d ago
hello author
Let me talk about my thoughts after watching it. First of all, if possible, add more punctuation. Sometimes I don't know who is speaking, and then it is too confusing and does not clearly express what you want to say. There is also the introduction of age and the depiction of pig's feet. Should you write in the first person or the third person? The above are my suggestions that you can try to revise. Come on, you will write better
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