Just after Breaking Off the Engagement, He Was Abducted by the Evil Commander into the Civil Affairs Bureau
by Yu Feiyu
About This Novel
Su Luo was adopted by the aristocratic Su family of Alpha Prime since she was a child. The Su family treated her well, and Su Luo has always been grateful. Until Su Xiaoxi, the real daughter Su Xiaoxi who had been lost for a long time, was found, Su Luo's situation suddenly became embarrassing! Su family: Luoluo, our Su family has raised you for ten years, how can you snatch things from Xiaoxi? Fiancé: Luoluo, Xiaoxi spent the vulnerable period with me. It's all my fault. Don't blame her. Su Xiaoxi: I'm sorry, Sister Luoluo, I didn't mean to mess with your optical brain, or give you the genetic matching application for marriage. Alpha Star law stipulates that voluntary application for marriage is irrevocable. "Su Xiaoxi, I don't want any of your things." Su Luo turned around and went to take her steaming husband back with resignation. Then... She saw a very beautiful man who was experiencing a susceptible period. The tips of the man's furry canine ears trembled slightly, his eyes were clear, and his nine big silver-white tails danced behind him. The pheromones in the air smell so damn good... He asked coquettishly: Sister, are you here to take me home? Su Luo nodded vigorously! Collar! Must get it! But how did she know that the one she brought home was no ordinary lycanthrope. Rather, he is the prince of the empire, the youngest commander with the highest level of beast transformation on the entire Alpha planet!
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Official(44)Scraped 24d ago
I think there are some areas that can be improved
Isn't the character described by the heroine at the beginning a cold one, but she falls apart a bit when she meets the hero. The heroine may be attracted to the hero, but I feel that the description in the article is a bit unsatisfactory and does not express the heroine's character particularly well. It's okay to be astringent, I understand, but every time it's like this, it makes people feel that the heroine is a bit undervalued (nothing else, I just can't find a better way to describe it). I think if you have a cold personality, you should be cold and thorough. You shouldn't be too indecisive and keep saying "say." "Maybe he will get divorced after he wakes up" or something like that. The male protagonist also has a shortcoming. He is too smart. He is so talkative when he is pretending to be Shijiu, but he is pure and straight when he is not pretending. It is a bit illogical to ask Jixiang why the female protagonist is angry. The above are some of my views on male and female characters, no malice intended.
There is still a lot of room for improvement, but the character design was a complete mess from the beginning. And the effect of writing it is not very good. I have already drawn a clear line with the Su family, and I haven't told the dean yet, which makes the dean worried. And there is nothing else to think about every day, except divorce. . . The character creation is also very superficial, with no details, movements, or expressions. The plot also feels like someone is leading you by the nose.
The male protagonist is really mentally ill. He can't stand it for more than ten chapters. He even threatens the female protagonist. I just don't understand what he can do.
I'm not happy at all . It's so frustrating. I'm so angry that my chest feels tight.
I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 20. What's the male protagonist doing for being so high-ranking and taking advantage of the female protagonist without giving him a good look? What kind of scumbag is that?
Very pretty
A husband who is 100% compatible, has looks, money, a powerful position, and is very clingy. Such a perfect man only exists in novels. Although... But... I still like this kind of sweet article
What's so good about this? The plot is just okay. The rest of the writing is a mess. The writing is not very enjoyable.
Interstellar, orcs, human-vulture fusion, wolf, mermaid? It all depends on imagination, and the published anime should look good.
I'm really speechless. I asked others to eat. I accepted it.
I also think it's not very coherent, it's a bit dramatic.
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Community(0)
Official(44)Scraped 24d ago
I think there are some areas that can be improved
Isn't the character described by the heroine at the beginning a cold one, but she falls apart a bit when she meets the hero. The heroine may be attracted to the hero, but I feel that the description in the article is a bit unsatisfactory and does not express the heroine's character particularly well. It's okay to be astringent, I understand, but every time it's like this, it makes people feel that the heroine is a bit undervalued (nothing else, I just can't find a better way to describe it). I think if you have a cold personality, you should be cold and thorough. You shouldn't be too indecisive and keep saying "say." "Maybe he will get divorced after he wakes up" or something like that. The male protagonist also has a shortcoming. He is too smart. He is so talkative when he is pretending to be Shijiu, but he is pure and straight when he is not pretending. It is a bit illogical to ask Jixiang why the female protagonist is angry. The above are some of my views on male and female characters, no malice intended.
There is still a lot of room for improvement, but the character design was a complete mess from the beginning. And the effect of writing it is not very good. I have already drawn a clear line with the Su family, and I haven't told the dean yet, which makes the dean worried. And there is nothing else to think about every day, except divorce. . . The character creation is also very superficial, with no details, movements, or expressions. The plot also feels like someone is leading you by the nose.
The male protagonist is really mentally ill. He can't stand it for more than ten chapters. He even threatens the female protagonist. I just don't understand what he can do.
I'm not happy at all . It's so frustrating. I'm so angry that my chest feels tight.
I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 20. What's the male protagonist doing for being so high-ranking and taking advantage of the female protagonist without giving him a good look? What kind of scumbag is that?
Very pretty
A husband who is 100% compatible, has looks, money, a powerful position, and is very clingy. Such a perfect man only exists in novels. Although... But... I still like this kind of sweet article
What's so good about this? The plot is just okay. The rest of the writing is a mess. The writing is not very enjoyable.
Interstellar, orcs, human-vulture fusion, wolf, mermaid? It all depends on imagination, and the published anime should look good.
I'm really speechless. I asked others to eat. I accepted it.
I also think it's not very coherent, it's a bit dramatic.
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