One Piece: Uncle B is Invincible

At first I thought I would become Uncle B and do big things as a pirate in One Piece. But... Well, I accept being in the navy. But what happened to the protagonist Xianyu? I'm afraid of this. I really am not in the mood to watch anymore. And I saw what you wrote about my brother-in-law. I can't stand it either. (I don't know what my brother-in-law has to write about. I don't think any man would like to read this.) I really hope the author can change it. If your previous writing is not good, it will be useless no matter how wonderful your subsequent writing is. And you've blinded Uncle B's muscles in vain. Look at how domineering this picture is. Look again at the protagonist you wrote. Don't we need to pay attention to the three golden chapters when writing novels? The first 20 chapters the author wrote are like that. I dare say he will scare away half of the people.

Judging from my 10 years of reading experience, this book is not interesting at all, the writing style is slightly poor, the story logic is unclear, and it is too loose. It is predicted that this book will sink in a wave! I saw Uncle B coming in happily, but it turned out that what was written here! A good subject matter was ruined!

Fan fiction is most afraid of magically changing the settings of the original work. Fan fiction itself relies on fans of the original work. Modification of the settings will make fans of the original work like me feel as uncomfortable as eating... What the hell is the domineering sound transmission of the story? It's so embarrassing, isn't it?

What I originally wrote well was always reminiscing about my childhood. Just reminisce. Don't keep writing so much.

I think you write what happened first, and then describe their inner thoughts after a while. This way of writing is fine for those of us who have read too many novels, but for some people who are not very good at reading, it is very troublesome to read like this. (I am handicapped and can't write very well. If you understand, just read it. If you don't understand, forget it. Don't scold me.) I have only read 50 chapters. If it's wrong, don't scold me.

Just do whatever your brother wants. This is really poisonous.

I was confused in the early stage and didn't have any special ideas. Anyway, keep working hard.

The direction of the plot is a bit confusing right now.

It's just that the protagonist doesn't know what he's doing. After writing about it, the dozen or so protagonists didn't show up, so I wanted to ask you if you want to return the protagonist.

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