The Little Black Dragon in Douluo Zongheng

First, I know in my heart whether this book is good or not, and I don't need you to judge. Second, I am a newcomer who likes to write in my own style. If you look carefully, the protagonist is actually not the same at all. It's just that the enemies I assigned to the protagonist are all too strong. Those weaklings are all instantly killed by the protagonist or taken as subordinates. For example, in the Soul Hunting Forest, the protagonist killed a seven hundred year old tiger in one hundred years, and then killed the entire Soul Hunting Forest with less than five hundred years of cultivation. When we were in the Star Dou Forest, the protagonist was just over a thousand years old, and the opponents I arranged were all soul beasts that were eight thousand to ten thousand years old, so the protagonist couldn't beat you, making you look weak. Then in the dark forest (the worst place here), the protagonist's enemies were at least eighteen thousand, and the highest was poisonous pythons of ninety thousand and almost one hundred thousand. In order to get back to the point, I also deliberately changed some plots so that the protagonist could improve his dark attributes and break the rules of the world. (Actually, when I wrote this paragraph, many people asked me to write a female protagonist. However, I still overestimated myself and the writing collapsed in an instant.) And so far, I have almost all described the weak soul beasts and weak characters in one stroke. Except for some special characters who will write a little more (such as the previous Shadow Five, who will play a major role in the future), they are all instantly killed by the protagonist. If you really finish reading it, you will find that the enemy soul beasts the protagonist has encountered so far are all over ten thousand years old, and they have already come into contact with Ditian once, so don't say that the protagonist is too weak or as cowardly as a dog. In fact, these are the things you are used to seeing. The protagonist did not encounter many powerful enemies from the beginning, but only kept them as backup later. My writing style is a bit different from other authors. I like a fast pace, but not too fast. So after the protagonist tastes the sweetness at the beginning, he arrives in the Star Dou Forest, where many ten thousand-year soul beasts are waiting for him. Although the protagonist can't fight, he can escape. For example, the Titan Giant Ape is the same, its strength is astonishing, and after hundreds of years of cultivation, it can be as strong as a super ordinary ten-thousand-year-old soul beast. The two are almost the same. Although the protagonist is a dragon, he is not that strong. He is better in speed, talent, attributes, etc... To sum up, there should be two main reasons why it doesn't let you enjoy watching it. 1. My writing is not good. 2. My writing style is completely different from other authors. So you are still a little used to it.

You shouldn't have amnesia. I feel like I can't even watch your amnesia.

In Douluo 2, it is said that Emperor Tian's strength has reached more than 800,000 years. This is like facing a catastrophe when the strength reaches a certain point, and it does not necessarily have to be a hundred thousand years old. Just like the soul beasts in the Ice and Fire Eyes, they are also called hundred thousand year soul beasts because their intelligence has reached the level of the hundred thousand year soul beasts. That is because the special ability of the Ice and Fire Eyes can make the plants there grow at ten times the speed. And because Ditian occupies the Lake of Life, and because Ditian's bloodline is strong, the previous tribulations pose little threat to him, so it will choose to face the tribulations in advance. After each tribulation, if it survives it, its strength will be greatly enhanced! Di Tian already existed when the Dragon God Rebellion in the Divine Realm was in existence. Although the rebellion in the Divine Realm has been going on for a long time, it is definitely not more than 800,000 years old. If we remove the power of Di Tian's own bloodline and the bonus of the Lake of Life to him, Di Tian himself should have lived between 500,000 and 600,000 years at most. Although the book says that Di Tian is more than 800,000 years old, that is not his actual age. It is just that his strength has reached that age. From this, we can also see how powerful Di Tian is.

You can tell by looking at the pictures.

The front looks good, but the memory loss at the back is not so good. Restore your memory quickly!

Readers: The authors have so much imagination. Where are your brains? Author: I was swallowed up by my imagination and can't find it.

Come on, author, it's very good-looking. Don't be a eunuch.

It's great when you see an author not deleting bad comments. Some authors delete comments when others say the novel is not good.

After all, you are newbies, so don't go too far.

It looked really good at first, and I was very surprised. I thought I had found fairy grass. . Although the writing style is not very mature, it is obvious that the author put his heart into it and worked very hard to describe the novelty and fear of the unknown after time travel. To be honest, my eyes lit up and I was amazed. However, this realistic style that can grab people's hearts is gone before it lasts for more than ten chapters. Then the system appeared, and the writing became smoother and rougher at the same time. The focus on describing new worlds and new things was transferred to the setting of the system. There's nothing much to say about the system. The routine system has some novel ideas that I'm proud of added to it. Overall, it looks pretty good, but it taints the best part of the book. Author, think about it carefully. If the fascinating adventure is summarized by simple "system" and "becoming stronger", and the colorful communication and contact are summarized by simple "the jungle of the jungle" and "killing", if such soulless things can be good-looking, then what's the point of wonderful adventures, dragon warriors, and plot settings? I'm not opposed to adding a system, but your idea is too simple. You want to use simple "killing", "becoming stronger", "the weak and the strong" to directly replace all the novel content and wonderful ideas of millions of words in an entire novel. All I can say about this is, what do you want to eat? I voted for the recommendation, and if you are lucky enough to have it on the shelf, I will vote for a monthly ticket to remember my lost wonder.