Japanese Manga Urban Ninja

Seriously, the author, your subject matter is novel, but your writing style is obviously not good enough to handle this subject matter. I am also a little embarrassed about the plot. I suggest the author practice his writing more first, and then find a way to deal with the plot. And if this kind of supernatural power really appears in the world of Conan, and if it becomes common in the future, have you considered how the natives of the world of Conan will survive without the protagonist? Let me tell you, if you want to increase the force value of the world of Conan, then you should also increase the force value of the people in the world of Conan. Don't make the protagonist and individual human beings have high force values. Otherwise, wouldn't ordinary people in the world of Conan be almost dead?

Just pick one and use it. Is the cover so bad?

The heroine should not be Xiao Ai. You can tell from the chapter title of Chapter 69. If the heroine is Xiao Ai, the protagonist will not call her Haiyuan. The same is true in Chapter 73. You can easily tell.

To be honest, this subject matter is very good, creative and bold, but it is a pity that the writing style, character language and action description are slightly different. Also, the character Conan is a scientific idea. The original comic Conan was forced to overthrow it for countless reasons when seeing Koizumi Anko's magic, flying and so on. Moreover, the world of Conan is more suspenseful. Even if the ninja system is turned on and some novel elements are added, it should be about suspense six and four, but yours is different and more strange. To be honest, I have been reading novels for a long time. It has been a few years and I have written some. I still have some experience. I will give you a few comments. Don't be surprised. I will just be a keyboard warrior. The main reason is that I can't bear to see such a novel subject have such a big failure, so that's it. It's a serious statement, don't be offended, I hope it will be helpful to you, and I'll say goodbye.

Stop writing about solving crimes all the time. Write about daily life and fighting in youth.

Single heroine or multiple heroines? Is the heroine Xiao Ai?

Can there be more attack methods? It feels a bit monotonous when viewed this way. Can the author arrange a Sharingan for the male protagonist?

I remember, that person committed suicide... It's Yoko's ex-boyfriend. Didn't he commit suicide?

Is it a garden? Or Xiao Ai? Or someone else? I just found this book and I don't know who it is, so I wanted to find out more about it. Who knows how to say thank you?

I hope the author will be more careful as he writes in the future. There are advantages and disadvantages to writing system flow. It may be okay in the early stage, but in the later stage, the protagonist can destroy a city with a large ninjutsu. After all, Konoha's contractors are great, but I'm not sure about Conan. After all, the two worlds are not on the same level. Add to this the actions of wineries, and the world is almost gone. And don't forget to open up a harem in the later stage, and show off endlessly, then this novel will end in a harem.