The Mission System of the Elf World

I was successfully persuaded to withdraw. The first few shots were okay, but the later ones became more and more toxic and unbearable, so my fellow Taoists withdrew first. Why should I leave? I'm posting this review because I want to give a bad review before leaving. Please don't criticize me because this book made me feel uncomfortable, so I also want to make her feel bad.

The male protagonist has a not very good personality. The powerful and fiery monkeys who have already subdued him look down on him. They don't want to improve the elf's strength and they think the elf's skills are a mess! It is said that elves are friends and relatives of the trainer. If abandoned, the elves will be seriously injured.

The author is stupid and sincerely wishes everyone a happy new year.

Is it really good to have the Forest Lizard evolve in advance in order to win the Gym Tournament? The more I look at it, the more irritating it becomes! Think more about the elves. Without them you are nothing! Also, it is wrong for the male protagonist to prefer Eevee over an elf. Don't imitate Xiaozhi.

The early world view, the elf setting, etc. Are all very good. Goldfinger is not the kind of mindless and cool text, and the descriptions are also detailed. It's all good in itself, but when the protagonist goes out to participate in the competition, why take care of the children for the mission? Magikarp hits the gym. . . I can't see it at all. You set it up as a dark version of the elves, and the details are very good, but when it comes to raising children, it is a complete failure, especially when there are too many chapters. I was tired of reading it and didn't want to read it at all.

How can I put it this way? I feel like this book is barely worth reading. Although there are some poisonous points, it is much better than some books about being invincible at the beginning and stalling in the later stages. Since I have written this book, I will write it down. All in all, one thing to say, keep up the good work! But I always feel that the paragraph where three is written down can be removed (personal opinion)

Dear friends, I know it's hard to catch up, but I can't improve my typing speed. I type 3 updates every day. I don't want it. Please be patient for a few days. I will send you 10 updates on the first day of the new year. Happy New Year🎆🎉🎊🎈

The author is really great, and the elf novels are very good-looking. It's a pity that they haven't been updated for a long time, but I will wait and read them! ! Big cheers for the author! ! ! Aoli gives! !

"Isn't the author going to update???"

It's been a while since I updated. It's too slow. Based on this alone, not many people are willing to wait for your good writing.