Adventurer of the Elf World

I just came in and read Chapter 30. I feel that the details are very thoughtful, but it may be too thoughtful, which gives readers a descriptive feeling and lacks a sense of involvement. Most readers cannot resonate with it. I've also read a lot of Pokémon stories with dark styles, inspirational passion, game competitions, real-world advents, and even some stallion stories. But these all have one thing in common, that is, they can give people a strong sense of immersion, or the descriptions of elf cultivation and elf battles are very good, which attracted me. I haven't read the specific style of this book yet, and I'm not sure what the content behind it is. However, I hope that the author can revise the previous content appropriately when he has time, otherwise it will easily dissuade a large number of readers. Although this book is not to my liking, I feel it has potential and needs patience to be explored. I hope the author can work harder, maybe I will come back to read it after it is finished. Finally, I would like to say that every book is the author's hard work. Even if you don't like it, you should pay attention to your comments. This kind of dedication is something that people who have never written can't understand. I don't want you to support it, but I hope that people who don't like it can also encourage it. Often, a word of encouragement can support many authors to continue writing. (Note: This is from a passerby, not the author)

Ibrahimovic is cute, so Ibrahimovic is my favorite

He can obviously fight against mythical beasts, but when he goes to play games, he can't even beat weak ones. Every time he goes to a new area, he is forcibly weakened, and novice pets sometimes can't beat them.

Not bad, the writing style is more delicate, the plot is also quite complete, more realistic, not too poisonous, and it is also an above-average existence among elf novels. Come on, author! Great A bit dark, seems normal to me

Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire, Crystal fire

It's been more than two hundred chapters and I'm still a novice. They're all babies, and there's not even a single elf that's good enough.

I've read more than 70 chapters and I really can't stand it anymore. I'm getting upset just reading 70 chapters.

One star for Casey, two stars for childhood, three stars for your persistence, and the last two black stars for the protagonist's head.

Hua Ye, the Lord of Heavenly Palace, comes here for a visit

The villain you wrote wanted to steal the elves, but he was just a petty thief, not a very evil person. It wouldn't be weird to kill him directly. The protagonist is still in time travel, so he can be caught and handed over to the police. In an orderly society, it is absolutely illegal to kill people at will, no matter whether they are good or bad people. Do you want to arrange the protagonist to be assigned to a force like Team Rocket later? I can't stand it.