A Light in the Leaves

The timeline is not messy, the Shining Fruit ability is very strong, and the writing skills are good. But going from genin to kage level without any transition at all, isn't it bad? Also, is the protagonist a little too nerdy? Have you lost the basic sense of right and wrong? Doesn't this mean that you have the ability of the Shining Fruit, and you can do whatever you want directly in Naruto? You can do whatever you want, and you can do whatever you like, and basically have no emotional basis. Women who are attracted solely because of their abilities. Is it really good? It doesn't matter if you are lazy, you don't matter, you don't matter if you want to make money and you want a beautiful woman. Isn't it too simple and refreshing? Wouldn't it be better to have a little more depth in the plot (I don't mean to criticize anyone at all, I'm just discussing the matter). I know this is a fan, and maybe I'm more particular about it, but wouldn't it be better to listen to some suggestions?

Is the update too slow?

The writing is so messy, 👎👎👎👎

If you are sick, will you write that the main character is like a fool and can't do anything? He is really sick.

The last time I read it, I helped Zabuza defeat the 4th Mizukage.

By the way, how many updates a day? ? ?

I feel like the Shining Fruit is very restrained to Uchiha

What I wrote before was okay, ***, but when I encountered Kirigakure Village later, I was like a licking dog.

The subject matter is very novel. I wonder how much the ability of the Sparkling Fruit can increase the protagonist's strength.

The protagonist is equal to ** and brainless.