Career in the Heavens Starting from Douluo

I didn't feel immersed at all after reading it. I don't know why the author wrote such a book. Most of the people who read novels nowadays are middle school, high school and adults. Now you are writing about an elementary school student. You can't be immersed in it at all and it feels very annoying.

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The writing is not worthy of a no-brainer. The author's writing is a bit sloppy. He must have just opened the first book. Please stop complaining and read my spell: One Star Evil Killing Talisman.

Don't stop criticizing authors and books. After all, everyone has different tastes and ideas. It's very difficult to take into account everyone's ideas. Authors who write should feel it. There are always some people who will leave negative reviews and then start criticizing after reading the book. Everyone should just read the book carefully and abandon it if you don't want to read it. Don't comment on it. It's not easy for authors to think more about others. If you spend a long time writing a novel and it's easy to get stuck, and then you see a novel written entirely by **, what do you think? Don't say that I am the author's helper. If the author had such money and still wrote novels, he would not know what to do. Who can write novels if they have money? Don't want your hair anymore? It's not like I have no money! It's all forced by life. Finally, I would like to say that it is not easy for every author, so don't criticize me. Authors also have to make money and make ends meet. (Are you the author?)

In the Lingxiao Palace, Liu Bei looked at the Jade Emperor. The Jade Emperor caressed the male and female swords and sighed: "When I gave you this divine weapon, I didn't expect you to grow it much... After all, you were just a straw mat seller at the time and didn't have much money to buy materials. He stared deeply at Liu Bei and found that he really couldn't see through him. The Jade Emperor shook his head, "I didn't expect that you could practice it to this point, and even have 90% of the power of Xuanyuan Sword! ... Compared with Xuanyuan Sword, it's just a tiny bit behind! " Liu Bei remained silent, just waiting quietly for the Jade Emperor to finish speaking. "Awesome! Awesome! "The Jade Emperor clicked his tongue in admiration, "If it can be improved again, wouldn't it be another peerless sword? " Liu Bei was silent. He knows all this. "But..." The Jade Emperor changed the subject, "It's difficult, too difficult to break through this last line! ... Your sword incorporates your five strongest ways, so it needs to be refined with the five original divine flames for decades before it can become an existence like the Xuanyuan Sword. " The Jade Emperor looked at Liu Bei, but found that his expression had not changed much. The Jade Emperor couldn't help but said, "These five divine flames are crystal flame, Hunyuan flame, Fengluo flame, Tianxing flame and Sith flame. ... Except for the first one that I have, the remaining four are extremely rare and rare. Not even your ancestor Liu Bang had them! ! ... Do you understand? " Liu Bei looked at the Jade Emperor coldly and said slowly, "I have the last four. ... The only thing missing is the first one. " The Jade Emperor was stunned for a moment. How is that possible! ? Those four divine flames... How could he have them! ? Could it be Kong Ming? The Jade Emperor raised his head and couldn't help but ask, "You came to me just for the Crystal Flame? " Liu Bei nodded and said: "Yes, I came here just for the water experience."

I think this book is okay. The author has his own way of thinking when writing books, and everyone has his own taste. Are those people who are clamoring all day long about letting the author eunuch? ? Is it easy for the author to write a book? ? You really think you can't go out and turn left to delete the bookshelf, so don't affect the author's mood, okay? Come on, author! ! Your book is very beautiful! !

At first I thought Xiao Wu was the heroine, but after a few chapters Xiao Wu got involved with Tang San. That didn't matter. After all, the protagonist and Tang San were brothers, and it was really not a good idea to steal his marriage. Later, you removed the CPs of Ning Rongrong and Zhu Zhuqing, and made them both like the protagonist. I thought I would accept them all, but you gave me a sentence about the heroine of this book, why did you only accept Zhu Zhuqing to destroy Ning Rongrong? The writing is so ambiguous and you won't accept it. Why don't you give her an Oscar later? Isn't that disgusting? This book simply doesn't have too many flaws. First of all, the main character is a primary school student who travels through time. You wrote about his photographic memory but said he is not very smart. I don't know why people who are not smart have the ability to have photographic memory. , And then the protagonist's first soul ring has four soul skills for ten thousand years. It's amazing. I just want to say that the first soul ring is so nonsense. You didn't even talk about the most basic rules of the Douluo Continent. You can beat the Immovable King Ming at the second ring, and you have the combat power of a titled Douluo at the fourth ring. I want to ask you what else to write next. There is also the over-blackening of the original characters. Dai Mubai is indeed a bit carefree and impulsive, but that is based on his experience. After all, it is normal to indulge when you know that you will die in the future. If you don't turn into a real bad guy, I think the three views are enough, and you are also very loyal. I will give you a pick in the egg. Oscar, I think it is completely lying. Can other people decide their own soul curses? It's normal to be disliked and deliberately joke around since you were a child. This also gives you some evil thoughts. I think Oscar is already very good. A food-based soul master later went to such a dangerous place to gain the power to protect Ning Rongrong. What else can be said? Ma Hongjun was basically influenced by the martial soul. According to the settings of the next few movies, his martial soul is basically the precursor of the evil soul master. Look at Ma Xiaotao in Dou Er You know, it's easy to become an evil soul master. After he became a god, he felt guilty for not bringing his girlfriend to the divine world. He could even resist the temptation of the God of Lust. I don't know what the author keeps saying that their three views are not exactly what they do. They all have special experiences or influences and they are only thirteen or fourteen years old. In reality, they are still junior high school students. I don't know how correct the author's three views are and whether he has made no mistakes like a saint.

It doesn't look good at all. You're afraid you're being funny by letting a 6-year-old kid who doesn't know the plot travel through time.

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I don't love Tang San's family. I'm a fan of Sister Bibi Dong. I quit sadly because I didn't want to read it. I haven't read it yet but I give the author full marks. I hope the author can give Sister Bibi Dong a good result. Thank you.