Chaos God

Ah, not bad, but there is too much nonsense, some of which can be omitted. Also, can you not write the male protagonist in such a bad way? . . . .

Modal particles are very important, a lot of nonsense

It's a bit too expensive to spend money on each chapter from now on.

When the author is composing, he should pay attention to whether the article can withstand scrutiny. The protagonist's grade is so high. Those aristocratic families before Chapter 80 never thought about the power behind him? They can't be that stupid, right? Also, after the battle between the protagonist and that strong man from the Wei family, Xiao Jiu appeared and seemed to have a lot of work. How did the protagonist complete the last sudden body attack? I don't understand this! Wouldn't another protagonist be able to fight across levels? Then what about the old man Ouyang who couldn't beat him at that Tianxiang Tower? Doesn't the kicking the neck move mean that all realms above the creation realm are risky? Then why did old guy Ouyang come on and still be unscathed? I can't stand the scrutiny, author! Also, holy crap, what's the point of not following the news for a few days? I don't want to scold you in harsh words, so you'd better follow Xin quickly, otherwise I won't be able to control my mouth! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

In the dark dark room, I saw a woman wearing a black outfit with half a silver mask. She was knocking on the table with a small leather whip in her hand. She narrowed her eyes and looked at the person tied to the shelf. She said, "How about I say burn a knife? Have you thought about it?" A trace of anger flashed across the face of the tied person: "Stinky Longfei, you dare to tie me! Don't think it's a big deal that you are the number one killer! Don't let me go, my fans." Flatten your Lingxing Pavilion!!" Long Fei's mouth opened slightly: "Really? I think if they know the purpose of tying you up, then I dare say they will stand by me, stop talking nonsense, the article will be updated 20 times a day, and I will let you go!" Shao Daozi's body went limp. If it wasn't tied with a rope, he might not be able to get up. Others may not understand, but he knows how crazy those wolf-like fans are. After a while, a weak voice sounded: "Can you let me think about it!!" "Yeah! No problem, but you have to hurry up, otherwise I can't guarantee that your fans will do something crazy!" Hee hee! !

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Writing nonsense! Changed too quickly

The plot design is very unreasonable. A time traveler grows up by encountering adventures, but he causes trouble everywhere, and still can't die. There are too many online novels, pieced together, and it all makes sense. I admire it, high 👍👍👍

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