Fallen Machinery
by Gray Armed
About This Novel
Since the physical body is too painful, then transform it into a non-human being. I once thought that I was still not human, but now I am convinced that I am human
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Official(1)Scraped 4d ago
Author, you didn't get off to a good start.
As someone who wants to test technology in the early stage, why is the first world a fantasy test? I don't understand. I think you should do a technology test to let the pig's feet transition, and then go to the fantasy test in the middle and late stages. Even if you want to do fantasy, it should be Western magic. This way, it feels normal at the beginning. It's better to write it down later, right? Also, I don't think you should choose Douluo Continent for the first world. This world has been written badly, and the sci-fi test at the beginning is fantasy. I always feel that it doesn't match magic. I think it's okay. After all, magic has alchemy, so I personally think it's better to finish the volume of Douluo Continent quickly.
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Official(1)Scraped 4d ago
Author, you didn't get off to a good start.
As someone who wants to test technology in the early stage, why is the first world a fantasy test? I don't understand. I think you should do a technology test to let the pig's feet transition, and then go to the fantasy test in the middle and late stages. Even if you want to do fantasy, it should be Western magic. This way, it feels normal at the beginning. It's better to write it down later, right? Also, I don't think you should choose Douluo Continent for the first world. This world has been written badly, and the sci-fi test at the beginning is fantasy. I always feel that it doesn't match magic. I think it's okay. After all, magic has alchemy, so I personally think it's better to finish the volume of Douluo Continent quickly.
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