My Life with the Attribute of Immortality

All you can say is that these words are really a bit embarrassing, and the way they speak is a bit like that of a child. It feels very strange and cannot be explained.

Well, there are highlights, but not many. The main reason is that the writing style is quite uncomfortable and the handling of details is very sloppy. The plot is generally passable, but some of it is handled more than a running account. It's not simple, but a few weird strokes, and it goes too fast, which is awkward. When writing, if you feel awkward, try adding one or two more sentences to wrap things up. When wrangling, if it really can't be condensed, change the position. If it doesn't work, just cut it off. Less wrangling is better than making it awkward. Also, if it is divided into paragraphs, it is difficult to improve your writing skills in a short period of time, so you can skip class if you divide it into paragraphs and make it more detailed.

If there are any parts that don't look good, please don't write them off. You can spray them here. The author will carefully absorb opinions, improve his skills, and write better stories.

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Thank you readers for your support, and I also have many great collections. I would like to ask you not to keep books, or you will die! Woohoo, please read the latest chapter, just stay for two minutes and turn to the reading ranking! The author guarantees that the plot will become more and more exciting! As long as the elder dares to chase, the younger sister will dare to update!

I feel that your introduction makes people feel uninterested. Immortality means there is no calamity, so what else do you write?

After talking so much about one thing in a roundabout way, and still trying to unravel it, I'm just as damn convinced as the Riddler.