Xiaochun Molou
About This Novel
This is the story of a slutty flower demon and a nonsensical Taoist priest whose past lives have messed up their present lives. The seven thousand years of waiting are ultimately not as good as staying together for a long time. They cannot love each other, but they are willing to do so...
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Official(1)Scraped 11d ago
Slowly, slowly, you will get better.
Although this book is a short story, and the author's writing style is also very good, I still feel that there are still many shortcomings in it. 1. The plot develops too fast, which is a bit hard to accept. 2. Then the plot and other arrangements are a bit too ordinary, just like the beginning, I was not attracted. 3. Then some of the plots in it are a bit too ordinary, and some of them feel like they have been seen before. Too popular? 3. I think writing about the past and present life is more suitable for writing a novel. Because a short story cannot express its originally good storyline. And this past life type of novel is also a popular type now. There are many people who write it, and then you have to write it more perfectly to make it more attractive. 4. Then I really think that the storyline is too ordinary, and the plot develops very quickly. There is no storyline that is amazing to read, not at all. 5. And the story framework of Taoist priests and demon masters is actually a pretty good type, but you wrote it too ordinary. The plot is not very rich, it is just ordinary, and then it feels like you just brush it off. In fact, you can write more, and it doesn't matter. 6. Then the protagonist's name can actually be better. Finally, I hope you can become better! -- I love you, classmate Xiao Zeng
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Official(1)Scraped 11d ago
Slowly, slowly, you will get better.
Although this book is a short story, and the author's writing style is also very good, I still feel that there are still many shortcomings in it. 1. The plot develops too fast, which is a bit hard to accept. 2. Then the plot and other arrangements are a bit too ordinary, just like the beginning, I was not attracted. 3. Then some of the plots in it are a bit too ordinary, and some of them feel like they have been seen before. Too popular? 3. I think writing about the past and present life is more suitable for writing a novel. Because a short story cannot express its originally good storyline. And this past life type of novel is also a popular type now. There are many people who write it, and then you have to write it more perfectly to make it more attractive. 4. Then I really think that the storyline is too ordinary, and the plot develops very quickly. There is no storyline that is amazing to read, not at all. 5. And the story framework of Taoist priests and demon masters is actually a pretty good type, but you wrote it too ordinary. The plot is not very rich, it is just ordinary, and then it feels like you just brush it off. In fact, you can write more, and it doesn't matter. 6. Then the protagonist's name can actually be better. Finally, I hope you can become better! -- I love you, classmate Xiao Zeng
