The Wind Blew the Phosphorus Away
About This Novel
A hundred years later, Yellow Diamond still remembers the original war, while Phosphophyllite has long been sleeping in the deep sea. The gems on the ground still maintain the fragile relationship. With the resentment of the crushed gems and the greed of the moon people, what will become of the gems and the world in the end? It turns out the world can never end.
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Official(1)Scraped 7d ago
Coming from half a dimension
I came from Half Dimension and hastily read your book. I have summarized a few points that you need to improve. You may or may not adopt the small suggestions. ①The first is the cover. Um. . The chance of the original cover being discovered is relatively small, because the cover is like a person's face. Only when you are good will people get to know you deeply. The same is true for the cover. You have to have a good and attractive cover. Only then will people be willing to come and read your book. ②The plot is a bit confusing. I read these 31 chapters. Don't see what you are trying to say? The first few pictures probably need to construct the entire world view. Even if you can't write the first few pictures, you must have a general main line of thought, but I didn't find out where your main line is. And for such a long time, I didn't see anything that attracted me. ③The article you wrote belongs to a relatively niche genre. If you want to write about a niche genre, first of all, you must have great confidence in your writing style, and you must be ruthless when writing. It should not be as plain as white water, but have waves. When you write, you need to catch the reader's attention and find something attractive. If a niche novel is written well, it will become an instant hit, but if the intensity is not chosen well, it will be buried. These are also some experiences I have summarized during the writing process. I hope it will be helpful to you. If you don't like it, just delete it.
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Official(1)Scraped 7d ago
Coming from half a dimension
I came from Half Dimension and hastily read your book. I have summarized a few points that you need to improve. You may or may not adopt the small suggestions. ①The first is the cover. Um. . The chance of the original cover being discovered is relatively small, because the cover is like a person's face. Only when you are good will people get to know you deeply. The same is true for the cover. You have to have a good and attractive cover. Only then will people be willing to come and read your book. ②The plot is a bit confusing. I read these 31 chapters. Don't see what you are trying to say? The first few pictures probably need to construct the entire world view. Even if you can't write the first few pictures, you must have a general main line of thought, but I didn't find out where your main line is. And for such a long time, I didn't see anything that attracted me. ③The article you wrote belongs to a relatively niche genre. If you want to write about a niche genre, first of all, you must have great confidence in your writing style, and you must be ruthless when writing. It should not be as plain as white water, but have waves. When you write, you need to catch the reader's attention and find something attractive. If a niche novel is written well, it will become an instant hit, but if the intensity is not chosen well, it will be buried. These are also some experiences I have summarized during the writing process. I hope it will be helpful to you. If you don't like it, just delete it.
