
Xiu Xian Starts from Fengdu Water Ghost and Changes His Profession
by Patients With Five Disadvantages And Three Deficiencies
About This Novel
From the [Fengdu Water Ghost] who sank to the bottom of the river, to the [Soul-Drawing Book] who stole power from the underworld; From the [Wangchuan Zhouzi] holding a pole to detect evil spirits, to the [River Patrolling Scale] commanding hundreds of ships; From the [Naihe Ferryman] who ferries ghosts, to the [Relief of Disasters] who handles doom; From the [Yin Jiao Driver] who controls the evil dragon, to [Luo Feng Zhenfu] who commands all ghosts ... At first he was the [Water Official], in charge of the misfortunes and blessings of a water area; Then [Beiyin], unifying the laws of the six heavens of Luofeng; Prove again that the [Great Emperor] controls the reincarnation of Jiuyou and the Three Realms! In the end, Yan Zheng's [Deed of Fate] was fulfilled, the Taoist Fruits condensed on their own, and the Heavenly Lord descended, becoming [Luofeng Great Heavenly Lord]! Many years later, his subordinate King Yama came to report: "The emperor is not good. A hozen with a hairy face and a thunderous mouth has come outside. He is holding an iron rod and is invincible. King Yama of the ten palaces has retreated and is about to demolish all the halls!"
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Official(11)Scraped 4d ago
It's almost the same as Batman's Demonic Cultivation. What you wrote is more mysterious than his.
The background setting of this story is very creative, between yin and yang, which makes people's eyes bright. The character of the protagonist is very clear, straightforward and not sloppy, which is something I admire very much. The development of the plot has ups and downs, but it is very close to real life, making people feel very immersed in it. The pace of the upgrades is just right, neither too abrupt nor too slow. Overall, this is a masterpiece worth savoring.
It was okay at first, but later it was written as Holy Mother. Go away, it's ugly...
The pace is too slow, the upgrade is too slow, and the pace is too long.
The outline of this book should be pretty good, but the writing is not that good.
After reading seven or eight chapters, it feels like there is too much useless nonsense, and one plot can actually contain so many words. . . It's not easy to read, and I can't stand your writing style.
It's a bit too slow-paced, but it's okay. It's better than those with the same copywriting. I've read too many novels with the same copywriting here. I'm tired and boring after reading them.
The book is not bad, but maybe it's because I've been too aggressive recently. Reading this kind of book still doesn't feel good. The shackles are too heavy.
not bad
There are some little bits of poison that are acceptable, and it's pretty cool to watch.
As long as you have a system, you also need to add points and withdraw quickly.
The protagonist is a ghost, and the realm of cultivation is named after those who practice martial arts. That's ridiculous.
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Official(11)Scraped 4d ago
It's almost the same as Batman's Demonic Cultivation. What you wrote is more mysterious than his.
The background setting of this story is very creative, between yin and yang, which makes people's eyes bright. The character of the protagonist is very clear, straightforward and not sloppy, which is something I admire very much. The development of the plot has ups and downs, but it is very close to real life, making people feel very immersed in it. The pace of the upgrades is just right, neither too abrupt nor too slow. Overall, this is a masterpiece worth savoring.
It was okay at first, but later it was written as Holy Mother. Go away, it's ugly...
The pace is too slow, the upgrade is too slow, and the pace is too long.
The outline of this book should be pretty good, but the writing is not that good.
After reading seven or eight chapters, it feels like there is too much useless nonsense, and one plot can actually contain so many words. . . It's not easy to read, and I can't stand your writing style.
It's a bit too slow-paced, but it's okay. It's better than those with the same copywriting. I've read too many novels with the same copywriting here. I'm tired and boring after reading them.
The book is not bad, but maybe it's because I've been too aggressive recently. Reading this kind of book still doesn't feel good. The shackles are too heavy.
not bad
There are some little bits of poison that are acceptable, and it's pretty cool to watch.
As long as you have a system, you also need to add points and withdraw quickly.
The protagonist is a ghost, and the realm of cultivation is named after those who practice martial arts. That's ridiculous.
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From the [Fengdu Water Ghost] who sank to the bottom of the river, to the [Soul-Drawing Book] who stole power from the underworld; From the [Wangchuan Zhouzi] who holds a pole to detect evil spirits, to the [River Patrolling Scale] that controls hundreds of boats; From the [Naihe Ferryman] who ferries ghosts, to the [Relief of Disasters] who handles doomsday; From the [Yin Jiao Driver] who controls the evil dragon, to [Luo Feng Zhenfu] who commands all ghosts At first he was the [Water Official], in charge of the misfortunes and blessings of a water area; then he was the [Beiyin], governing the laws of Luofeng and the Six Heavens; and then he was the [Great Emperor], controlling the reincarnation of the Nine Netherworlds and the Three Realms! In the end, Yan Zheng's [Deed of Fate] was fulfilled, the Taoist Fruits condensed on their own, and the Heavenly Lord descended, becoming [Luofeng Great Heavenly Lord]! Many years later, his subordinate, King Yama, came to report: "The emperor is in trouble. There is a hozen with a hairy face and a thunderous mouth. He is holding an iron rod and is invincible. King Yama of the ten palaces has retreated and is about to demolish all the halls!"




The various difficult details at the beginning of the chapter are described so well that it is very touching.













