Can't Stop Drawing Cards

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This is a two-dimensional novel. Can't you just stop writing about the dark side? Seeing those two angels being wheeled caused discomfort, although they later turned into angels for revenge. They must be angels, right? Overall very good. Characters appear more frequently. Basically they are all girls, the male one is Conan Rikuo Ye Quan, I have watched one or two episodes of Garter Stockings, but I am not interested in the weird style of painting. So I don't know what exactly it is talking about. Also, she confirmed her relationship with Suzumiya right from the beginning, which made me confused. And in the end, all the people recruited by Lin Group were girls. . . . . . When I saw the Okazaki couple in Chapter 96, for some reason, I suddenly couldn't continue reading. It must be that the constant addition of new characters has made me aesthetically tired... To be exaggerated, there seem to be hundreds of characters appearing in less than 100 pictures.

After reading more than 60 chapters, I feel that it is not very good. The main reason is that I feel that there is no goal, I don't know what the protagonist is going to do, and there is no villain to jump out. If it is a daily novel, and the story content is not enough, it probably feels like a daily novel with no villain and no main plot?

Don't misunderstand me. I think it's not easy for an author to write more than 500 pieces. I've also written novels, each of which requires at least 2,000 words. I tried writing five or six pieces and then stopped writing them. I guess the author didn't make much money either. It's purely about love. Come on!

I feel like I can only read the first two to three hundred chapters, but once the reincarnator appears, the plot starts to ramp up.

Why does the protagonist have to join the Nuliang Group? I don't see the benefits of joining at all. If you really want to do something, you can trade it. The protagonist has so many good things in his hands. And Lu Sheng is completely plotting something against the protagonist, right?

As soon as there are more characters, many people cannot elaborate or even directly marginalize them. For example, Mikuru Asahina, her sense of existence is almost zero. Now, except for the heroine Haruhi, even Rikuo and other former friends have disappeared directly. Also, the time span is not grasped well. For example, spending a while in the void, but in reality, more than half a year or even several years have passed (for many characters) The campus plot period jumps directly to the entry into society period after the plot ends). I hope that the protagonist can slow down, such as living a daily life. After all, there are enough homotopics (can be directly understood as anime characters) in the original universe, and many plots can be written. There is no need to develop alien universe plots (anyway, characters in other universes have similar existences in the original universe). Overall, this book is worth reading

Anyone? (O_O)

I vomited when I saw Suzumiya. You really don't understand the character and just wrote it casually?

Please answer? ~(≧▽≦)/~