It's Really Hard for Me to Be a Powerful Person in Swallowing Starry Sky
by All Illusion
About This Novel
Su Chen, who traveled through "Swallowing Starry Sky" and awakened [the most powerful divine system in the city], felt like he was completely flat! In this life, I may only be able to become an ordinary handsome man with a net worth of hundreds of millions, and I can only live a depraved life of drunkenness and dreaming, eating sweets and salty foods every day! [Bite! Congratulations to the host for obtaining the Cosmic Coin (Crystal), the Immortal Coin (Crystal)...] Monetary rewards: [Eternal Coin], [Hour], [Resurrection Coin], [Crystal Core], [Spiritual Stone], [Immortal Stone], [Ink Stone], [Nascent Soul Pill], [Merit]... Treasure rewards: [Heart of the Ocean], [Suojia Diamond Ring], [Precious Ball], [Treasure Money]... (⊙O⊙)! ! ! I seem to have stood up...
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Official(149)Scraped 19d ago
In addition to introducing and explaining the plot of the circle, plus psychological explanation,
I have never seen such a disgusting book. There is no plot at all. It is all introduced in the commentary. You are a fan writer. If you write the introduction and explain it, others might as well read the original work. Moreover, your commentary explains what others are thinking. After chatting for a day, you can also write a lot of messy things that others think about. Well, there are more than twenty pictures. Twenty pictures are not enough to make it into an anime. If it is an anime, it will be a nonstop thing.
not good
Damn it, the protagonist, as a God of War-level warrior, can have Zhang Hao for so long. I skipped several pictures and kept talking about them. He didn't die until the end.
The sea is full of water and you talk nonsense.
I originally gave him one chapter, but it turned out to be all his nonsense confessions. The Shenhao system didn't see where Hao was. Anyway, I followed Luo Feng because the plot was better and I didn't have to use my brain to make it up. I didn't care about any resources. But you are like a wild goose and you can pluck everything. After reading more than ten chapters, they were all the confessions of myself acting like a neurotic. After reading the table of contents, I just came out of the earth with more than 100 chapters. Awesome
Nothing makes me want to squirt when I see Shenhao
It's really boring to read this type of book. It's like a nouveau riche. No matter what, he's the best at it. It's like a stand-alone game.
The author is a novice, I guess. There is no sense of immersion in this novel. The whole process seems to be explaining.
The text is too simple. The protagonist is talking to himself all the time and always repeats and emphasizes the explanation.
Too wordy,
You can write a chapter by describing the psychological activities of the protagonist. Moreover, the psychological activities in this chapter are all about TM's self-examination content. It's really TM.
Actually, it feels pretty good.
Writing a book is not easy, authors should be prepared to be scolded, especially newbies who write books. There may be some words that some people don't like to hear, but to be honest, I am not very good at writing. It is not an honorable thing to scold others for poor writing. Don't make it look like you have done a good deed. I am proud, I am proud. There is really no need for this. It is boring. Some people may not even read it, but just follow the trend and start scolding by looking at the comments section. Anyway, cheers for the author! 😂
sea
The sea, you are all water, the horse, you have four legs
It's all watering
My head already hurts. What are you writing? It's a waste of time.
It's a lot of nonsense and I can't even tell what the hell it's about.
The legend of the sea duel water water water water water
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Community(0)
Official(149)Scraped 19d ago
In addition to introducing and explaining the plot of the circle, plus psychological explanation,
I have never seen such a disgusting book. There is no plot at all. It is all introduced in the commentary. You are a fan writer. If you write the introduction and explain it, others might as well read the original work. Moreover, your commentary explains what others are thinking. After chatting for a day, you can also write a lot of messy things that others think about. Well, there are more than twenty pictures. Twenty pictures are not enough to make it into an anime. If it is an anime, it will be a nonstop thing.
not good
Damn it, the protagonist, as a God of War-level warrior, can have Zhang Hao for so long. I skipped several pictures and kept talking about them. He didn't die until the end.
The sea is full of water and you talk nonsense.
I originally gave him one chapter, but it turned out to be all his nonsense confessions. The Shenhao system didn't see where Hao was. Anyway, I followed Luo Feng because the plot was better and I didn't have to use my brain to make it up. I didn't care about any resources. But you are like a wild goose and you can pluck everything. After reading more than ten chapters, they were all the confessions of myself acting like a neurotic. After reading the table of contents, I just came out of the earth with more than 100 chapters. Awesome
Nothing makes me want to squirt when I see Shenhao
It's really boring to read this type of book. It's like a nouveau riche. No matter what, he's the best at it. It's like a stand-alone game.
The author is a novice, I guess. There is no sense of immersion in this novel. The whole process seems to be explaining.
The text is too simple. The protagonist is talking to himself all the time and always repeats and emphasizes the explanation.
Too wordy,
You can write a chapter by describing the psychological activities of the protagonist. Moreover, the psychological activities in this chapter are all about TM's self-examination content. It's really TM.
Actually, it feels pretty good.
Writing a book is not easy, authors should be prepared to be scolded, especially newbies who write books. There may be some words that some people don't like to hear, but to be honest, I am not very good at writing. It is not an honorable thing to scold others for poor writing. Don't make it look like you have done a good deed. I am proud, I am proud. There is really no need for this. It is boring. Some people may not even read it, but just follow the trend and start scolding by looking at the comments section. Anyway, cheers for the author! 😂
sea
The sea, you are all water, the horse, you have four legs
It's all watering
My head already hurts. What are you writing? It's a waste of time.
It's a lot of nonsense and I can't even tell what the hell it's about.
The legend of the sea duel water water water water water
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[Grain]★★★ Devouring Starry Sky God Hao Wen If I had this system, I wouldn't know how to do it anyway. I would definitely try my best to hug Luo Feng, and then hug Luo Feng's family. In short, I would hug my thighs. As for cultivation, of course there is no conflict. As long as I become a true god, have money and thighs, there will be endless blessings.
The subject matter is novel and the ideas are clear, very good
⭐️⭐️⭐️ Devouring the Starry Sky Fandom Not poisonous and watchable👀
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