Across the Stars: the Invincible Wife

I know that the first time I write a book, it may not be so good. I also grow through hard work and improvement. Let's remind each other, okay? I will listen to your opinions, but this is also the first book I have written. I also like reading novels, especially novels about strong women. It's the kind where the heroine is very handsome. Maybe it doesn't matter in reality. I imagine myself as a character in it, or something like that. But in the final analysis, no one is a character in it. I once imagined that if one day I could travel back in time to a novel I wrote, I would like to be the heroine in it, strong and casual. Maybe everyone has a way of life. In my opinion, every book is a world. The characters, ideas, and feelings in the book all have their own thoughts, and what I have to do is to turn his thoughts into words and show everyone my spiritual world. Maybe this book won't be very long, but thank you all for your company. Every day I see who has voted for my comments. It's really heartwarming when I have the first reader. I also have my own reader, even if he doesn't like this book that much. But our meeting is a kind of fate. Your choice to read my book is an opportunity for us to meet. After thousands of years of cultivation, we can cross in the same boat, and after ten thousand years of cultivation, we can sleep together on the same pillow. The encounter between you and me is also the expectation that I have looked back on countless times in my previous life. I will continue this book to give everyone a perfect ending, a perfect ending for myself, and a perfect ending for every character in this book. I saw a little cutie two days ago and gave it a 4-star rating. Today there is a cutie that got a 2-star rating. I took a look and asked for your suggestions. Mutual encouragement!

Everyone knows that my online name is Fengyu Luojiangnan. In real life, the word rain is the last word, so you can call me Xiaoyu, Sister Xiaoyu, Sister Xiaoyu, or Nannan. Little cuties, Remember to wear a mask when going out to nip the disease in the bud.

The subject matter is good but the writing style is not very good. I hope the author can work harder.

This book gave me the feeling that the plot develops very quickly, and the writing of Goldfinger is too high-end. I feel that the heroine is invincible. It would be better if the plot was lengthened. By the way, some suspense is designed to whet our appetite. . .

@author大大, your work contains too many language exchanges. It will be better with appropriate adjustments.

I don't know how to explain it, the heroine has too many inner activities and there is no plot to follow. Moreover, inner activities take up almost half of the chapter, which is not very interesting.

Come on, come on, come on, come on!

Come on, don't give up on the article.

Sister Xiaoyu, the male protagonist is too weak compared to the female protagonist.

Hey, haven't you updated for a long time? Can you tell me? When will it be updated? Never give up! We have your back. After you have a book friend circle, you must remember to tag me, I am afraid of missing out.