Quickly Wear - Oh, Villain

Why do I feel so tired after reading it? There are so many symbols. Actually, you don't need so many symbols. You are the most tired after reading the novel for so long. I have to sigh⊙⊙

The vocabulary is simple, the content is orderly, and the mystery is hidden, which reflects the vividness and image of the novel. However, some of the double quotation marks are written backwards. Why does the heroine often put commas in what she says? So does the hero. The image of the heroine suits my taste very well.

Big, punctuated, visible, tired

The author is great, and the content is very good, but the punctuation is a bit too much, so it seems a bit stiff.

Do you need punctuation here? Everything else is fine. Can't I continue editing? Are punctuation points added to account for the number of characters? Also please update, thank you very much

The plot of this book is pretty good, but the tone is stuttering and updates are very slow. Everything else is okay

Sincere suggestion: If you can revise your article and remove some unnecessary punctuation marks, maybe more people will have time to read your article.

Damn, why haven't you updated it yet? >O<

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, don't give up on the article.

Updated 10 months ago? ? ? ?