Former School Master

1. The plot description is weak and gives people no sense of involvement. (The description of the heroine is the usual description in harem novels, which makes me vomit. Please be kind to me.) 2. On the surface, it is a Cthulhu-style novel, but in fact it is just a layer of skin. The setting also gave me a hodgepodge feeling. (I feel like I copied the settings from other books) 3 did not write the weirdness and madness of Cthulhu style. On the contrary, it makes people feel a bit like Long Aotian's development.

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I have seen that many readers feel that the author's writing is not good and the writing is a bit lacking. (Whispering BB is indeed a little bit worse, but it's not too bad. I can only say that it's still a little short of experience. Personal opinion) But I still look good. After all, I have seen too many routines in the past few years. It is still much better than those who forcefully pretend to be 13 and slap the face, the villain is mentally retarded, and everyone's name is the enemy. At least it looks more comfortable. (Reading books brings your own IQ -20🤡🤡) After all, everyone's hobbies are different. I personally think the author's writing is quite good. If you like it, you can support the author more. If you don't like it, there's nothing wrong with it. It's impossible for everyone to like the same book. For example, I don't like many of the books on the boys' list. But we can't say that the author's writing is not good. Just different preferences. I don't know if the author has a list of tricks. (Didn't pay attention to see it) Highly recommend the author, come on! Keep up the good work. Finally, Crystal Flame! Crystal inflammation! Crystal inflammation! Crystal inflammation! Crystal inflammation!

To be honest, I'm afraid that the author will be angry after reading this. The following are my superficial feelings and some immature suggestions. I may be too one-sided and too simple. If you don't like this comment, you can delete it. _(: D)∠)_ The setting of this book makes me feel very similar to Lord of Mysteries. Maybe it's fate. This novel was added to my bookshelf earlier than Lord of Mysteries, but I didn't read it. Later, a friend recommended Lord of Mysteries to me. I will finish it in about two days, and then I read this book. How can I put it (~_~;), it feels strange and familiar at the same time. A familiar, yet slightly different protagonist. There are indeed many cool articles about routines nowadays, but I hope you can find another way, which will definitely be better! Come on, author, I think you will get better and better as you write more. I don't know if those driving scenes are because you represent yourself or to arouse readers' interest in reading, ๛ก(ｰ̀ωｰ́ก), but I wonder if you can be more subtle |･ω･｀) and write less, because this book is not only for adults, but also for many teenagers who have not yet fully established their three views. It's not like you can only rely on these to attract attention. It's a cool article. You read it as soon as you read it and forget it quickly, but it still has some subconscious influence. Do you want to consider looking for real cases? What really happened is always more cruel and unbelievable than what is written. I think it will be a good material. Adding something resonant may make people unable to help but mention it to their friends (maybe it's just me) ✧＼ ٩(눈౪눈)و //✧ I personally think that every book is an independent world. Since you have become a god, please treat the world you created well. (Ω< )★

How can you write a book without swearing, pornography, and vulgarity?

Finally, the top three on the new book list are no longer mindless articles! So excited! You know what it's like to read books like "I have a certain master, I've been invincible for three thousand years, I'm invincible at the beginning, and I'm like this at the beginning," and my IQ keeps decreasing.

It started well, I was attracted by the setting I have read Chapter 613 and am about to abandon the book. The title is Academic Master, and the Golden Finger refers to the Academic Master System. However, by Chapter 613, the Academic Master System has not appeared for a long time. The settings of ordinary, elite, and nightmare missions have also been changed again and again with the article, and they have not appeared for a long time. The system points are gone, and the system functions other than the dream battlefield, and there are no other functions. I have obviously introduced the system to have other functions before. When the personal panel first came out, it said that I couldn't add points, and then I was able to add spirit to myself inexplicably. I looked like I was the first or second person. What's even more outrageous is that you set the protagonist's resistance to pollution at the beginning and his knowledge to be contaminated, but later on, this setting became less and less common. Anyway, by Chapter 613, I basically can no longer see all the basic settings you gave in the early stage. It has changed from an old Japanese Ke-style novel to a harem war novel. The most unacceptable thing is that wherever the protagonist goes to the city, the enemy will destroy that city. The author sets up a base for the protagonist again and again. I seriously doubt the author has watered down the word count. After all, the protagonist has just laid a development foundation for the protagonist, and then destroyed it, and then laid a development foundation. Dozens of chapters can be written in the middle. I wrote about the recognition of the Lord Linjiang Sanctuary. If you turn around, you will lose the entire Zenith City. There are hundreds of chapters in the middle, and then change to the mountain city. The entire story has been fragmented, unsystematic, set up as decoration, poorly written, and the characters have collapsed. It is strongly recommended not to fall into the trap, stay away from drugs, and cherish life.

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Original text: But if the Tianyuan Alliance is not eliminated, the entire human race will definitely have no future. After a period of time, the human race recuperated, resisted the invasion of alien beasts and alien races, and basically gave up the territory of the spiritual world. Once an alien race entered the Blue Star through the entrance to the spiritual world, they would face the most powerful fire suppression. It means that if the human race wants to develop, it stipulates that demi-humans cannot practice cultivation. This is a matter of principle of the human race. Then the question comes. The protagonist discovers that his demi-human cat girl classmate practices but does not report it. Is this behavior considered rape?