I Have the Final Say in My Rebirth

Talking to myself feels like reading a diary

I can't stand it, it feels like a primary school student writing an essay to explain things. I've read a few chapters and can't stand it...

Give me the illusion of keeping a running account~

It's uncomfortable to watch, the first few chapters are confusing and are just outlines. The male protagonist is useless. I just want to say that the male protagonist is buried and the female protagonist is still young. If I have to arrange a male protagonist, I don't know if it will change in the future. I don't plan to watch it anymore. The hero's mother thinks that the heroine must accept the hero's love. I want to vomit. I just want to say why.

I think the introduction is good, but I didn't know it was running water. Sorry to bother you, farewell!

The writing is a bit too straightforward. It looks like someone drinking water. There is no sense of hierarchy.

Read the previous chapters. . . Well. . . Really running water. . . .

Generally speaking, this novel "Jiaste Sosou" is not an article about cultivating immortality? The heroine was reborn from the world of immortality to modern times. No one can discover it because heaven does not allow it. But generally speaking, the heroine has become an immortal. Why does it sound so boring to read?

The topic outline is good, just like reading a composition written by a student, I am talking to myself.

Bad review, I can't stand it anymore. This is the first time I've encountered such a novel since I've been reading it for so long.