Versatile Mage's Beginning: Crisis in Bo City

The plot of giving away a girl is very well written. What I mean is that the main character is given all the magic in the beginning and arranged directly into the Forbidden Spell. That would be cool. Don't just awaken five lines at the mid-level. It's too lame. We want to be strong and strong but talk disgustingly and send the girl off like crazy. If you are a naive md and you are incompetent like this, come to me. The hammer🔨 is all ready for you😘😘

It was already well written, but Tang Yue couldn't accept it. The author tried not to write it like this, and there were some typos.

Damn it, it suddenly ended😳😳, did you make a mistake?

As long as it's a story about girls, I'll give it a bad review and let it go. I can tolerate no heroine, single heroine, or multiple heroines, but I can't stand stories about girls.

Giving away a daughter is not a good death. . . . Don't ask why you reported it, just ask because you are disgusting me.

The protagonist has exposed his talent too early. Are you really not afraid of others assassinating you? You must know that you are only at the middle level and have exposed the five elements. Will those holy cities and others be afraid of you and get rid of or seal you? He was exposed without even having a trump card. I really don't know what the author was thinking. You have to at least expose him and give him a strength that can match the monarch before exposing him. You see in the original work, Mo Fan has been hiding and hiding, and at most only exposed three elements. In the eyes of others, he is born with one more element than others and is not worthy of fear from those people. But what about you? When you are still a junior middle-level person, you are directly exposed to the fifth element. You really think that people in this world are innocent and cute. Don't say that just because you wrote a big shot to protect him, it will be fine. If others can't do it openly, why can't they do it secretly? As long as it is handled well and there is no substantial evidence, even if they kill you, they can find a scapegoat to take the blame. Is it possible that the big shot who protects you will fight with those people for a protagonist like you who has not grown up and has been killed? It's a bit stupid to expose so many elements in advance without any self-protection or trump card. Besides, go back and see what you wrote in Chapter 20. Have you forgotten? (Chapter 20! "Of course, it seems that neither of us are human beings allowed to appear within the rules of the world!" Lin Shuo answered with emotion in his tone. Trading sincerity for sincerity, both of them hold each other's secrets. Invisibly, the distance got closer. Neither those who are born with dual elements or those who suffer from spiritual disasters will be allowed to exist in today's human society. Ding Yumian was persecuted by others in the original Siren Invasion and died at the hands of a councilor. Her evil thoughts took refuge in the Ocean Gods, which brought a lot of trouble to mankind. In the end, her thoughts of good and evil merged, and Ding Yumian, a gifted psychic disaster victim, disappeared. Mo Fan achieved the position of Evil Saint King and was chased by the Traveling Angel. With the help of Lingling, he fought back with great difficulty and then chose to surrender in the Holy City. After experiencing the Sin Stone Trial, he went to war with the Holy City. With the help of Qinglong, he won the final victory. Ding Yumian now has a deep understanding of today's dark society and knows that his spiritual system will definitely not be accepted by those rulers. But as long as the two of them are careful, they shouldn't be noticed until they reach the super level. ) I originally liked this fanfic you wrote, but then you forgot what you wrote at the end? With just a small mid-level move, the whole world will immediately know that you have five lines in the middle level (although two lines are hidden), but this is not the point. The point is that you have all five lines in the middle level. What do you think of making those holy cities wait? Will they investigate you thoroughly, and then they will find out, oh wow, you are not only born with multiple lines, but also a soul type, and you are also practicing very fast. Will they be afraid that you will grow up and hinder their dominance? Will they think that such a person must be sealed or eliminated, let alone the country to protect you? Look at the original Qin Yuer who also won glory for the national government competition, do you think the country protected her? Let's look at how much Mo Fan has done for the country and the world in the original novel. In the end, it's not all about his own strength.

Very good. I prefer it. I don't know what others think.

New book Versatile Mage: The Road to Invincibility, starting from the first release

Rubbish, just copy the text, what a bullshit

The current plan for the later stage is to adopt the advice of a book friend to control the Holy City in the later stage, and at the same time master the ancient king's undead armor. You can give me your opinions! By the way, in the later stage, a demon clone will be arranged for the protagonist to sit in the evil abyss. You can take a guess! (But you shouldn't have guessed it! Hehehe)