
Start as the Supreme Mage and Travel Across the Heavens
About This Novel
After traveling through Marvel for hundreds of years, he finally eliminated Dormammu, became the Supreme Mage, and reached the pinnacle of life! On the one hand, it is the responsibility to protect Kama Taj, and on the other hand, it is the opportunity to go further... Bai Lin thought for a long time and finally decided: I want them all! ! ! Ps: Newbie, new book, you can skip the first two volumes, but don't read the third volume Without him, the writing is not good, the brain is not good, and the plot is not good, just squirt!
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Official(23)Scraped 2d ago
Do you know why my grades are poor?
The subject matter is quite good, and the popularity among people is not low. The writing style cannot be said to be very good, but the sentences are smooth and readable, but the plot is very embarrassing, and it is still in the third chapter. The early readers are not sticky enough to directly put the poison, and the poor results are natural. I suggest you, the author, change that plot, otherwise you will definitely be disappointed.
Where does the writing come from? Please don't write random comments, okay? This is written like a mentally retarded person, who is over a hundred years old, is written like... . . The other character designs are also very poor, collectively reducing intelligence and forcibly sensationalizing.
too. . . . . .
Take action. Seeing this scene, Xu San and Xu Si were shocked. They thought Bai Lin wanted to harm Feng Baobao, so they took action suddenly regardless of the strength gap between the two parties. "Baby, chop him with a knife." Xu Si shouted loudly the moment he took action. The next second, the two were imprisoned in place again. "If you attack again, you will die!!!" Bai Lin said, his voice no longer cynical. Cold? Fierce? Tyrannical? Xu Si and the two couldn't tell what words to use to describe his voice. However, they knew that if they took action again, they might really die. On the other side, Bai Lin didn't think about Xu San and the others.
Pretending to be like a classmate I don't like very much
Didn't watch it
It's so stupid. It's over a hundred years old and you're still a stallion.
Like a retard
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To be honest, I'm not a good reader, but the three Golden Chapters were too poisonous for me. Good guy, a high-level combat power comes to a low-level world, and a person who can at least destroy stars with one blow is outrageous to act like that. Does he look like a 97-year-old person?
This is a virgin whore novel,,,,
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I'm a newbie, so this book definitely has a lot of shortcomings! If you are unhappy after reading this book, feel it is boring, cliche, not up to par, or not compelling enough... I admit that these are the reasons for my lack of ability after all. In fact, if you don't like it, you can just leave it! Of course, I am not qualified to deprive you of your right to evaluate, but please speak more tactfully, thank you! Bow and step down! ! !
To be honest, it's not very rubbish, it's just a bit rubbish. I can't stand traveling through the world anymore.
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Official(23)Scraped 2d ago
Do you know why my grades are poor?
The subject matter is quite good, and the popularity among people is not low. The writing style cannot be said to be very good, but the sentences are smooth and readable, but the plot is very embarrassing, and it is still in the third chapter. The early readers are not sticky enough to directly put the poison, and the poor results are natural. I suggest you, the author, change that plot, otherwise you will definitely be disappointed.
Where does the writing come from? Please don't write random comments, okay? This is written like a mentally retarded person, who is over a hundred years old, is written like... . . The other character designs are also very poor, collectively reducing intelligence and forcibly sensationalizing.
too. . . . . .
Take action. Seeing this scene, Xu San and Xu Si were shocked. They thought Bai Lin wanted to harm Feng Baobao, so they took action suddenly regardless of the strength gap between the two parties. "Baby, chop him with a knife." Xu Si shouted loudly the moment he took action. The next second, the two were imprisoned in place again. "If you attack again, you will die!!!" Bai Lin said, his voice no longer cynical. Cold? Fierce? Tyrannical? Xu Si and the two couldn't tell what words to use to describe his voice. However, they knew that if they took action again, they might really die. On the other side, Bai Lin didn't think about Xu San and the others.
Pretending to be like a classmate I don't like very much
Didn't watch it
It's so stupid. It's over a hundred years old and you're still a stallion.
Like a retard
Comment
To be honest, I'm not a good reader, but the three Golden Chapters were too poisonous for me. Good guy, a high-level combat power comes to a low-level world, and a person who can at least destroy stars with one blow is outrageous to act like that. Does he look like a 97-year-old person?
This is a virgin whore novel,,,,
Comment
I'm a newbie, so this book definitely has a lot of shortcomings! If you are unhappy after reading this book, feel it is boring, cliche, not up to par, or not compelling enough... I admit that these are the reasons for my lack of ability after all. In fact, if you don't like it, you can just leave it! Of course, I am not qualified to deprive you of your right to evaluate, but please speak more tactfully, thank you! Bow and step down! ! !
To be honest, it's not very rubbish, it's just a bit rubbish. I can't stand traveling through the world anymore.









