It Took Seven Years for Dashang to Interpret the Signature, Only Then Did He Realize That He Was a God

I have read a book that tells a story with the same structure. It is about the Tang Dynasty, and the master of the gymnasium has just died. According to the regulations, a gymnasium requires a martial arts level 4 or 6. The protagonist is not strong enough. Fortunately, the master has three years to observe filial piety. One day, a child from a villager's family at the bottom of the mountain has a problem with his martial arts training. Asking for signatures, the protagonist discovers that he can see the questions asked for signatures, can help people solve problems, and gain benefits in cultivation, skills... More and more people come, and the protagonist sings all the way... Later, he finds out that it is Journey to the West of the Tang Dynasty... (When I read that book, it had hundreds of chapters, and I haven't read it in a few months)

There are many books about conferring gods, but this book is pretty imaginative. The worldview of conferring gods blends fantasy with mortals, and the worldview of cultivating immortals is not bad. At least the world is relatively complete and reasonable, and the overall plot is reasonable. Reading other comments about why it took so long for the protagonist to realize that he entered the world of gods, I think it can be understood that the protagonist is a little resistant to this world of gods. The protagonist has been avoiding it and finding reasons to deny it. As for the main reason for lowering the rating is the author's writing style, I hope the author can pay more attention to the writing and not use fancy words. The main thing is to be able to carefully describe the people and things in the article. We do not require that the text can be seen as it is, but it must also be able to highlight the differences in character image, status, and mentality. Fengshen In fact, I think the praises and poems in the original novel have the same function as setting poems in the story-telling novels at that time. They are mainly used by the storyteller to guide the atmosphere. If used well, this thing is the finishing touch, but if used incorrectly, it will be a bit watery. I hope the author will pay attention when using the content of the original work. Another point is the rhythm of the plot. I hope the author can design it well. I believe that the author has his own ideas about when to lay out the story background and foreshadowing, when to introduce conflicts and adjust the atmosphere, when conflicts to explode and detonate foreshadowing, when to create twists and turns, when to create reversals, and when to dig holes and create suspense. Of course, I believe that the author can write well in this regard as long as he is careful. In fact, writing a novel is not difficult. Once you start, stick to it and keep it from beginning to end for your own love. Don't pursue other things. This book failed, just find the reason. Keep writing it first, and then just practice writing. I hope you can see progress in the subsequent chapters. I have been criticizing the author before, but I will talk about the parts of this book that are worth saving later. First of all, the world view is well established, which is conducive to the subsequent plot. You don't have to worry too much about rationality issues in the subsequent plot. The overall plot direction is also ready-made. This can save trouble in so many places, and we can focus more on characterization, setting up the atmosphere, and guiding the plot. The main thing when reading online articles is to look at the imagination. Everyone has the same writing skills. When I criticized the author before for his poor writing skills, we can actually look at other online articles. Most of the writing skills are like the author's. The author's imagination is okay. He should use more caution in his writing to at least enhance the reader's sense of involvement. In the end, the author felt that this article could be thrown into the street, so let's let go of the burden and let ourselves go. Instead of pursuing update efficiency, the author only concentrated on writing his own story. I believe that in this situation where most authors are pursuing updates and pursuing economic goals, the stories written by our authors with the purpose of improving their abilities may be more attractive. Having said so much before, the time has come for the final picture to appear. Finally, I would like to share some of my thoughts on the direction of the plot later in this article. The first point is that the main theme of this article is the great rejuvenation of the human race. The first means to revitalize the human race is the actions of some governments. Here I think it can increase the status of Zi Xin. The protagonist borrows the hands of Zi Xin to carry out some infrastructure construction, do some science and education to rejuvenate the country, and improve the overall combat effectiveness of the human race. Then there is the war between Shang and Zhou. The overall national strength of the Shang Dynasty army increased and it was able to defeat others without fighting. The real national war is to arrange some nomads on the grasslands, the mountain people in the 100,000 mountains, some islanders in various islands, etc. The Shang Dynasty accumulated luck through continuous wars with these scattered ethnic civilizations, and at the same time, through the wars with these ethnic civilizations, it unlocked some ancient secrets and the inheritance of lich. Two main lines can be drawn here. The rise of the Shang Dynasty in the human world and the revitalization of the Heavenly Court in the heaven, and then the Shang Dynasty in the human world and the Heavenly Court will have a fight. Of course, the war situation here is not just a face-to-face sword battle. It can include general calculations such as fighting for luck, a duel of weird magic and magic, as well as a lobbying war of words, an economic war that plunders resources through commercial means, and other all-out wars... You can also add some life descriptions of characters from the upper, middle and lower classes to build a fuller world. In addition, the emotional transformation of some protagonists can be added as a branch line. Joy, anger, love, evil, and desire can all have corresponding plots. What I want to say here is that readers should see the protagonist as a real living person, not an omnipotent god. There is a lot more I want to say, but I don't know how to start with the rest, so I'll mention these first in terms of opinions. At the end of the day, I still hope that the author will not go to the palace and the story will not be unfinished. Come on, author!

It has been six years since the Tang Dynasty was signed, and Fang was just traveling to the west? ? ?

Logically speaking, it should have been discovered that it was a conferred god. It should have been suspected since the arrival of Gongzi Qi. When Li Jing came over to ask about Nezha, you actually said it was Gao Wu. It can only be said that you did not write the plot well and forcibly subdued the mind for the sake of the plot. Don't read this book.

When I saw the title of the book, I thought of the story about the Tang Dynasty. It took seven years to find out that it was Journey to the West.

It's a personal interpretation of the signature. Is there anything new?

I don't know whose fault it is, but the original Tianzun asked Jiang Ziya to go to Xiqi. In Chapter 62, Jiang Ziya asked for the lottery, indicating that going to Xiqi was a mistake. The protagonist said that the lottery was a warning from the Sanqing Tianzun. The original Tianzun asked Jiang Ziya to go to Xiqi, and it was a mistake to ask for a signature to warn him. Let's play, who has a problem?

I couldn't stand it until I saw Daji, and I didn't even know you were recruiting a disciple. Still taking in a wife. Let me guess, you won't accept all the apprentices you have accepted later, right? Child Bride.........

Unbearable to watch. It will be uncomfortable to taste carefully. It is not recommended to use your brain.

You have traveled through time and yet you are an atheist. It feels very weird. If you look at it from now on, just pretend to be cool and that's it.