Cross Pushing Interstellar Starts from the Swarm

Please give me a monthly ticket. If you have a monthly ticket, can you give it to me? I'll extend my little hand, hehe~

This book fully describes the pleasure of violent soldier flow, which made me extremely comfortable. The shortcoming is nothing more than poor writing, but the author also knows his own problems, so many difficult-to-write parts are summarized concisely. It is indeed smooth to read, but it always fails to achieve that refreshing feeling. Suggestions for the author's next book: use less swear words and have more diverse characters. I feel that most of the rulers in this book are not very smart, and the protagonist's mentality is... Um, a little childish? The protagonist does things that are not very well thought out. I really like that the author doesn't write too many emotional lines. Really, overall I hope the author can add more writing skills and it will be enough.

I personally don't like the Zerg Overlord doing this every day. I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye.

Can the author look at other Zerg novels and write about them? Don't all the leaders hide in the deepest place and let a group of soldiers come up to serve as cannon fodder? The worm sea tactic is not an elite tactic. What does it mean for you, the protagonist, to go up alone? Also, didn't we kill a few soldiers at the beginning? Why did the protagonist react so strongly? Did he kill his father or his mother? I really don't understand what the author was thinking. However, your development is really good, but the war is really not good. Can you sit down and refer to other sufficient novels?

A few points of analysis: 1. Is it okay to use the baneling stream, but all resources rely on trees? Maybe I will write about other things later, but the early stage was too toxic. 2. The war scenes are too monotonous, and the emotional scenes are really emotional, which can be understood by novice authors. 3. There is a problem with the writing style. Some things that should be highlighted are not distinctive, such as the energy level of the indigenous planet. Some things seem to be written as if something suddenly came to mind, or after reading the comments and finding problems, they are added at the end, which ruins the feeling. 4. I personally like Zerg novels. I have read many Zerg novels before. You can refer to your predecessors before writing. You are not asked to copy them, but you can learn from them. The Zerg novel I read was pretty good. Although it only had less than 300 chapters (Zerg Invincible), you can learn it. It feels like you are learning from this one. 5. There is also a problem with the evolutionary level. If the Zerg has not evolved, there is no need to read it. Some unconventional evolutions may also have signs, but they cannot be read anymore. Give up, give up.

I posted two chapters today, totaling 4,000 words. I'm very sorry, brothers who are following me. Starting from tomorrow, go completely crazy and make a minimum of 10,000 a day! Liar is a dog!

Come on. The character of the protagonist must be well-characterized, and it is best to be one who will seek revenge without seeking to kill without blinking an eye. But beg the enemy not to let it go. Don't act like you have no enemies. If your son is beaten, your father will come out, and your father will be beaten, and your grandfather will come out, and your grandfather will be beaten, and your family will be beaten. There are a lot of people in the sect, the clan, and the clan. They are afraid of this and that in doing things. Don't be miserable and bullshit in the city.

You don't know how to be a eunuch, do you? It used to be fine if you sent me to buy it, but now it's all in vain😭😭😭

I will form the first floor and the first floor~

The author may consider Super Seminary. The Zerg overthrew the Angel Civilization. Punch on Kesha and kick on Carl.