Cannon Fodder Female Supporting Role as a Cultivator
About This Novel
(The author of this book is currently cultivating immortality. I apologize for not replying to messages.)??(???????)?? You can even dress up as a character in the book while walking and playing with your mobile phone! Why is it that others are a lucky heroine, but I am a flamboyant heroine? Thinking that the original owner gave the ancient space as broken jade to the heroine, which enabled him to achieve the glorious path of cultivating immortality; and when he competed with the heroine for a man, but ended up being drained of his spiritual energy by the demon cultivator and died, Xu Qingqiu determined to cherish his life and stay away from the hero and heroine. Little did they know that the gears of fate had already changed... The male protagonist of the 1v1 Shuangjie in this article is Sheng Wuji, who will appear later. Demining: The original heroine is Shen Bingqing (many people jumped to read it, did not see the introduction of the first chapter, and mistakenly thought that Xu Lianyi was the original heroine.) Reader communication group: 963278333
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Official(507)Scraped 8d ago
shock! ! !
I have never seen a novel in which the male protagonist appears so late. When I saw more than 60 pictures and still didn't see the male protagonist, I ran to the book review area and saw the comment saying that the male protagonist appeared late. Then I went back to read the book and until I saw 161, I finally saw the male protagonist's name. I was a little excited about what happened 😂😂 and ran over to write a book review!
About writing style
When I read the first chapter, I felt that the author's writing style was not very good, the paragraphs were very inconsistent, and the pace of each chapter was like watching a 2.5 Times TV series, which always gave me the feeling that the author was a primary school student. That's right, but it doesn't follow logic. It is also true that I am immature in terms of ideological outlook. Gradually? Don't you feel that the golden finger is opened a little too wide? The descriptions in many places are not detailed enough, giving people a feeling that this matter is very relaxed. There are n swear words below, I don't know whether to say them or not. It's better not to complain, after all, it's not easy for authors to write articles. I won't rate it low either.
The author needs time to calm down for a while.
I don't know why there were ten negative reviews overnight, and the score suddenly dropped by five points. Was it a deliberately malicious review? Such readers really affect the mood of the novel. I met such a person in the first book. This article does not focus on Luo Ji's thinking, and I couldn't write it if I wanted to. (Some readers with picky tastes are not suitable for reading. The author apologizes for his limited level) This is the first time the author has written an article, and there are indeed loopholes in the beginning. I have also revised a lot, and deleted many particularly unpleasant comments (this is the first time I feel that the malice between people can be so great, it is all about the moral integrity of a father and a mother. The author is also a human being). People are making progress little by little, and I have also corrected the problematic areas that everyone raised. Although the author's writing is average, I still squeeze out time every day to keep updating, because I know there are still people reading my articles. Everyone's tastes are different. It is the most basic quality of a reader to not give random ratings. I can read typos and so on, but I don't believe that there are no typos in other articles. I accept that the logic is not rigorous. After all, my experience is not enough and my writing skills are average. However, in the face of the ill will from some readers, I really can't hold on anymore, and the author has no motivation to update. The author needs to calm down for a while and think about whether the book can continue. After all, some readers are too malicious. The author is very sorry for showing such negative emotions. I am really sorry for some supporting readers. The author wants to say sorry to you, but you really need to calm down.
The author of ** has something to say😣😣
Dear author, can we not pair up Qingqiu with the original male protagonist Qianshang? We hope the author will write another male protagonist to pair up with Qingqiu. Can the plot of the original male protagonist and Qingqiu be changed? (ಥ_ಥ) I really don't want the original male protagonist Qianshang to have an entanglement with Qingqiu. Woohoo (┯_┯) I really like the author's book (ಥ_ಥ)
A letter of apology from the author, and to readers who have made personal attacks on the author.
The author is just a newcomer. This is the first article I have written. The early writing is indeed not good, and there are many loopholes. The author has also changed it if he can. The author cannot guarantee that the writing will be as wonderful as those great masters. Chengfeng is very grateful to those friends who persisted in reading and continued to give positive comments. But everyone has their own writing ideas, and the author does not think that the contents of the articles on cultivating immortals should be unified. Everyone's writing style is different. There is no need for the author to refer to other people's articles to write. This is called plagiarism! ! ! When these people say this sentence, they are already an insult to the author's writing. Verbal attacks are really hurtful!
I'm so cute
Can there be no male protagonist? (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡, I don't like the female protagonist to be in a weak position, or the female protagonist is written as an elegant female man, and the male protagonist is suppressed to death. Ok
Give some suggestions
I have read quite a few novels about female protagonists cultivating immortality, but they all have three common problems: ① as soon as they are introduced, they think about how to kill the original heroine, ② the reincarnation of a certain powerful person in the upper world, ③ the heroine successfully ascends and then disappears. The author has written very well at the beginning. He didn't think about how to kill the original heroine or seize the opportunity of the original heroine. Later, I hope the author will not write like this. The heroine will find her own opportunity, and the original heroine will not collapse. Don't wait until the end of the story. The original heroine becomes a white lotus, and the heroine and the original heroine become friends. This setting is quite good. Regarding point 3, considering the author's inspiration, you may or may not consider writing it, but I sincerely hope to see the heroine and her friends' journey to the upper world. The second point is the reincarnation of the great power in the upper world. Don't write this joke. Let the heroine be her own reincarnation from beginning to end and not someone else's reincarnation. These are my personal suggestions. I hope the author can take a look. I really don't want to see those three memes because I have been poisoned by them to the point of numbness. Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard and be inspired to complete my proposal😍
What? The male protagonist is not Yin Qianzhang, no, I think Yin Qianzhang is good, right? You see, you gradually like the heroine, rather than quickly, you like it after meeting her for a few times, so I think Yin Qianqian's dong is suitable!
The author is great
Personally, I suggest that the world of cultivating immortals should be based on strength. Men and women no longer rely on their own physical strength. How can they be so strong in favoring sons over daughters? All women accept that their husbands blatantly take concubines, making it like a house fight. In contrast, in modern times, when women When it comes to creating value, how can most women tolerate this? Even if they take concubines, as long as their strength improves, how can they be harmed because of their husband's preference? Great men usually have thousands of troops to cross a single-plank bridge, so why are most of them reduced to living on furnaces? Even so, if you use a man as a furnace, you will be a witch, and if you use a woman as a furnace, you will be blatant? I think it doesn't need to be written in the ancient way of men being superior to women. It can be changed.
It was the first time I saw that the male protagonist of a book has such a low reputation, and it opened my eyes.
😒😝😒😜😍😂😓😠😝😌
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Official(507)Scraped 8d ago
shock! ! !
I have never seen a novel in which the male protagonist appears so late. When I saw more than 60 pictures and still didn't see the male protagonist, I ran to the book review area and saw the comment saying that the male protagonist appeared late. Then I went back to read the book and until I saw 161, I finally saw the male protagonist's name. I was a little excited about what happened 😂😂 and ran over to write a book review!
About writing style
When I read the first chapter, I felt that the author's writing style was not very good, the paragraphs were very inconsistent, and the pace of each chapter was like watching a 2.5 Times TV series, which always gave me the feeling that the author was a primary school student. That's right, but it doesn't follow logic. It is also true that I am immature in terms of ideological outlook. Gradually? Don't you feel that the golden finger is opened a little too wide? The descriptions in many places are not detailed enough, giving people a feeling that this matter is very relaxed. There are n swear words below, I don't know whether to say them or not. It's better not to complain, after all, it's not easy for authors to write articles. I won't rate it low either.
The author needs time to calm down for a while.
I don't know why there were ten negative reviews overnight, and the score suddenly dropped by five points. Was it a deliberately malicious review? Such readers really affect the mood of the novel. I met such a person in the first book. This article does not focus on Luo Ji's thinking, and I couldn't write it if I wanted to. (Some readers with picky tastes are not suitable for reading. The author apologizes for his limited level) This is the first time the author has written an article, and there are indeed loopholes in the beginning. I have also revised a lot, and deleted many particularly unpleasant comments (this is the first time I feel that the malice between people can be so great, it is all about the moral integrity of a father and a mother. The author is also a human being). People are making progress little by little, and I have also corrected the problematic areas that everyone raised. Although the author's writing is average, I still squeeze out time every day to keep updating, because I know there are still people reading my articles. Everyone's tastes are different. It is the most basic quality of a reader to not give random ratings. I can read typos and so on, but I don't believe that there are no typos in other articles. I accept that the logic is not rigorous. After all, my experience is not enough and my writing skills are average. However, in the face of the ill will from some readers, I really can't hold on anymore, and the author has no motivation to update. The author needs to calm down for a while and think about whether the book can continue. After all, some readers are too malicious. The author is very sorry for showing such negative emotions. I am really sorry for some supporting readers. The author wants to say sorry to you, but you really need to calm down.
The author of ** has something to say😣😣
Dear author, can we not pair up Qingqiu with the original male protagonist Qianshang? We hope the author will write another male protagonist to pair up with Qingqiu. Can the plot of the original male protagonist and Qingqiu be changed? (ಥ_ಥ) I really don't want the original male protagonist Qianshang to have an entanglement with Qingqiu. Woohoo (┯_┯) I really like the author's book (ಥ_ಥ)
A letter of apology from the author, and to readers who have made personal attacks on the author.
The author is just a newcomer. This is the first article I have written. The early writing is indeed not good, and there are many loopholes. The author has also changed it if he can. The author cannot guarantee that the writing will be as wonderful as those great masters. Chengfeng is very grateful to those friends who persisted in reading and continued to give positive comments. But everyone has their own writing ideas, and the author does not think that the contents of the articles on cultivating immortals should be unified. Everyone's writing style is different. There is no need for the author to refer to other people's articles to write. This is called plagiarism! ! ! When these people say this sentence, they are already an insult to the author's writing. Verbal attacks are really hurtful!
I'm so cute
Can there be no male protagonist? (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡, I don't like the female protagonist to be in a weak position, or the female protagonist is written as an elegant female man, and the male protagonist is suppressed to death. Ok
Give some suggestions
I have read quite a few novels about female protagonists cultivating immortality, but they all have three common problems: ① as soon as they are introduced, they think about how to kill the original heroine, ② the reincarnation of a certain powerful person in the upper world, ③ the heroine successfully ascends and then disappears. The author has written very well at the beginning. He didn't think about how to kill the original heroine or seize the opportunity of the original heroine. Later, I hope the author will not write like this. The heroine will find her own opportunity, and the original heroine will not collapse. Don't wait until the end of the story. The original heroine becomes a white lotus, and the heroine and the original heroine become friends. This setting is quite good. Regarding point 3, considering the author's inspiration, you may or may not consider writing it, but I sincerely hope to see the heroine and her friends' journey to the upper world. The second point is the reincarnation of the great power in the upper world. Don't write this joke. Let the heroine be her own reincarnation from beginning to end and not someone else's reincarnation. These are my personal suggestions. I hope the author can take a look. I really don't want to see those three memes because I have been poisoned by them to the point of numbness. Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard and be inspired to complete my proposal😍
What? The male protagonist is not Yin Qianzhang, no, I think Yin Qianzhang is good, right? You see, you gradually like the heroine, rather than quickly, you like it after meeting her for a few times, so I think Yin Qianqian's dong is suitable!
The author is great
Personally, I suggest that the world of cultivating immortals should be based on strength. Men and women no longer rely on their own physical strength. How can they be so strong in favoring sons over daughters? All women accept that their husbands blatantly take concubines, making it like a house fight. In contrast, in modern times, when women When it comes to creating value, how can most women tolerate this? Even if they take concubines, as long as their strength improves, how can they be harmed because of their husband's preference? Great men usually have thousands of troops to cross a single-plank bridge, so why are most of them reduced to living on furnaces? Even so, if you use a man as a furnace, you will be a witch, and if you use a woman as a furnace, you will be blatant? I think it doesn't need to be written in the ancient way of men being superior to women. It can be changed.
It was the first time I saw that the male protagonist of a book has such a low reputation, and it opened my eyes.
😒😝😒😜😍😂😓😠😝😌
