The Heartthrob of the Men's Team Draft! Cool Beauty Thai Pants Spicy

Advantages: Novel settings and characterization: The time-travel setting of the novel is very novel, bringing Su Yinian, a chivalrous girl from the ancient Xiaoyao School, to the stage of the modern boy band audition. This collision of ancient and modern times has produced a wonderful chemical reaction. For example, when Su Yinian faced modern draft rules and training methods, her ancient way of thinking and behavior formed a strong contrast with the modern environment, adding a lot of comedy effect. For example, when she first arrived in the practice room, she felt strange and curious about various modern training equipment. She used ancient martial arts moves to understand dance movements. This unique perspective brought freshness to the story. The characters are distinct and rich. The boy band members in the book have their own characteristics, such as the enthusiasm and straightforwardness of the handsome dog-type rapper, the charm of the charming fox-type team appearance, the cold outside and hot inside of the cold snake-type vocalist, the cute and lively main dancer of the super clingy rabbit-type, the pride of the arrogant cat-type genius producer, etc. Each character has its own unique personality traits and behavior patterns, and the interactions with the heroine are also interesting. For example, the rabbit-type main dancer always pesters the heroine to take a shower together. This innocent and clingy behavior adds a lot of interest to the story. Thrilling plot rhythm: The plot of the draft is exciting and full of competition and challenges. From the initial stage rating assessment to the performance showdowns, the author describes every aspect in a gripping way. In this process, the heroine continues to work hard to improve her strength and overcome various difficulties and challenges. Her growth process makes readers excited to watch. For example, the heroine won the first A with her stunning sword dance extra test on the first stage, which laid a solid foundation for her talent show. She went all out in every subsequent performance and continued to break through herself. In addition to the main plot of the draft, the novel also intersperses some mysterious gossips, secret plots and other side plots, making the story richer, more diverse and full of suspense. For example, the heroine was maliciously framed by a rumor maker, but she successfully resolved the crisis with her own wisdom and courage. These plot settings keep readers curious and paying attention to the story. Balance between career and emotional lines: The heroine Su Yinian is a career-minded person and is unswerving in her pursuit of becoming a C-position group. Readers admire her for her persistence and hard work in her career. At the same time, the relationship between her and the members of the boy band is also developing subtly. The setting of all members pursuing their wives with single arrows satisfies readers' expectations for emotional drama. The two are intertwined, so that the emotional line will not take over and affect the development of the career line, nor will the career line be too boring and lack emotional embellishment. Improvement points and suggestions: Plot logic: Occasionally, some of the plot twists seem a bit stiff. For example, when the heroine faces some unexpected situations, her way of solving the problem is too smooth and lacks certain logical foundation. For example, when the heroine resolved the rumor crisis, although she was very smart, the resolution process seemed too easy and did not fully demonstrate the strength of the opponent and the complexity of the incident, which reduced the tension and credibility of the plot. It is recommended that the author add more details and logical reasoning when setting up plot twists, so that readers can better understand the heroine's decisions and actions. The motivations for some characters' actions are not clear enough. Some members of the boy band developed their feelings for the heroine too quickly and lacked sufficient emotional foreshadowing and inner portrayal, which made people feel a bit abrupt. For example, the face of the fox team showed obvious affection for the heroine after meeting her for the first time, but the book did not give a sufficient explanation as to why he fell in love with the heroine so quickly. The author can add some inner monologues and descriptions of emotional changes of the boy band members, so that readers can better understand how their feelings for the heroine arise and develop. Writing style: In terms of language expression, sometimes it is too straightforward and simple, lacking some literary and artistic qualities. When describing characters' emotions and scenes, you can use more rhetorical techniques and delicate descriptions to enhance the appeal of the text. For example, when describing the heroine's sword dance, you can use more vivid and vivid language to show the beauty and momentum of the sword dance, so that readers can more intuitively feel the charm of the heroine. This is a novel with certain highlights. If you like relaxed and interesting time-travel themes, and are interested in boy band auditions and heartthrob settings, then this novel is worth reading. It can bring you a reading experience full of joy and touching, allowing you to see the process of the heroine working hard to pursue her dreams in a strange environment, and at the same time, you can also feel the sweet interaction between her and the members of the boy band.

Each male protagonist has a special memory, and they all have animal sculptures. I'm a little curious that Xiao Fu is not the wolf type mentioned in the copy? I like the male protagonist who is a rabbit the most. He has such a cute personality and goes well with the female protagonist.

Don't give up! It's a very novel novel and very unique. I really like the heroine's character. It's very interesting.

Very good, great to update

I still want to read it after reading it. The subject matter is so novel and the author is so awesome.

I really like this type, please update more often!

The general direction of the plot is good, but in the later part of the novel, there are a lot of names of people and groups, most of which are in English, which makes people have no memory points and cannot be substituted, and too much exaggeration in this part can easily cause sensory fatigue. In the end, the emotional transition between the members and the heroine was too sudden and rapid. The emotional progress can be slowed down appropriately and the main mission can be accelerated. Come on😹!

The characters in this book are well drawn, and everyone has their own animal figure.

I feel like it could be made into a B-game with many endings

Super, super good-looking🙉Snail's personality is also super good