What Can You Do by Traveling for Five Seconds?

I traveled through time immediately. I'm learning from your time-travel novels.

Ah, this, I feel like I have no motivation to continue watching this. It was originally quite fun to grab and run in 5 seconds, but the only point was omitted. The protagonist turned out to be mentally disabled. There were a lot of settings piled up to death. When I saw the ending, I said goodbye.

What is this thing, what is it written about, Chapter 271 starts with mother-in-law, one is golden, one is cautious, and the other emphasizes immortality. How many times have I said it over and over again? There is no theme in the whole article, no point can be seen, and no meaning. It is just like this nonsense literature: When we talked about this matter, we didn't say we couldn't do it, but we didn't say but, we didn't say anything. We talked about how we had to do it, didn't we say no? It's not that we talk about it. We can think of a way. You can do this. Let's do it later, right? I include you when the time comes. You can take a look at it. When it's over, I'll explain this matter to you, right? Okay, that's it. Let's do it like this for now. It's funny in the front, but why does it become like this in the back? It gets uglier as you go to the back.

The more I write, the more I draw. The combat power fluctuates high and low, what the heck. Traveling to the west can strengthen the Buddha. Go to a small world that studies viruses. Still cautious. A little old man can hurt you. Wow. I saw you were very tough on Buddha before. Who knew your combat power was so low?

I really can't appreciate this kind of book at all. The setting is not clearly explained and it's too hard to be funny. It's not funny at all. I'm just amusing myself The whole journey is an old man's subway mobile phone

If you don't want the protagonist to grow in strength too quickly, you shouldn't take out such a stupid thing. If you take it out and don't let him grow in strength, you are forcing his strength away. This is the original description of the flat peach in Journey to the West. Take a look: There are 1,200 plants in front, with tiny flowers and small fruits. They ripen once every three thousand years. After eating them, people will become immortals and have a light body. There are 1,200 trees in the middle, with layers of sweet and fruity flowers that ripen once every six thousand years. People who eat the Xia Li will ascend to the sky and become immortal. There are 1,200 plants at the back, with purple lines and cores. They are ripe once every nine thousand years. If a person eats them, he will live as long as the heaven and the earth, and the sun and the moon will have the same age. , Basically eating one is enough to ascend in place.

It's just a running story, with no coherence. It doesn't affect you at all if you skip between ten lines at a glance. The simplicity of the plot doesn't mean that you should be brief about the plot.

The author's writing is good. I like it very much. Come on, author. I want to ask again if there is a female protagonist in this novel. I just rarely talk about your book. It would be better if more people comment more.

Is anyone watching? It feels like this book is about to be released again! I haven't received a site error yet! (┯_┯)

1: From the perspective of writing style and writing style, the author is a complete novice, but his control over the jokes is still relatively good. 2: The content of the book is indeed a bit messy, but the subject matter is good. 3: From my point of view, this book belongs to the above-average category among the articles written by novice authors (this is just my personal opinion, you are right if you criticize me)