Your Talent is Good, it Will Be Mine in the Next Second

Your Talent is Good, it Will Be Mine in the Next Second

by Liu Chongxiao

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789Kwords376chapters
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About This Novel

"Didi! It is detected that the unparalleled talent has entered the download range, and its unique talent can be downloaded: Chaos Dao Body. Do you want to download it?" "Didi! Detect the peerless powerful person who has entered the download range, and you can download his god-level technique: "Original Holy Law". Do you want to download it?" "Didi! The download progress is 99%... 100%! The chaos body and "Original Holy Law" were successfully downloaded! Are they integrated?" Traveling to the world of fantasy novels, Lu Lin bound to the god-level download system, and his strength increased without limit! No matter how talented you are, I will just download it!

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The Dragon That Tastes Herbs52mo ago

The opening was poorly written.

Can't you just time travel? If you have to travel to the novel world and know the plot, will you have to lick the protagonist again later?

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Earth Emperor52mo ago

Give the author a suggestion

I have seen a lot of novels close to Destiny's Child before, and without exception they were all unfinished. They ended immediately after about 800 chapters. In my opinion, the main reason is that the relationship with Destiny's Child was too close and the relationship was not handled properly. In my opinion, we should try our best to avoid these problems. To be honest, it is enough to just focus on it in the early stage and develop other things later. In fact, we should try our best to avoid writing about the relationship between the protagonist and the destined child, and write more about the female protagonist, and try not to add some strange background settings to the protagonist later. Just don't bury too many holes in the book. After all, this seems to be the author's first book. There is no requirement to write well, just develop smoothly and let the ending take its course.

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Author: Come On, Work Hard54mo ago

There are almost no poisonous points. Some have been corrected and do not affect reading.

There are basically no major problems with this book. The books that have been sitting on my bookshelf waiting for me to finish them are all excellent products.

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Just Let Him Go54mo ago

I haven't read any poisonous novels yet.

I just like to read poisonous novels. If I sign in, I will give you 1 book coin to support it, leave a proof, and add the full subscription

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53mo ago

The novel is good, but the download range of the system is too small, only 20 meters, which is not enough for fighting. A bit fake

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Book Friends 20260113645_bd51mo ago

The introduction doesn't tell a story, and I couldn't stand it in the first chapter!

What does the introduction say? The things I downloaded are all invincible existences in the big world. The first chapter told me about the world of runes. I was convinced. The runes are not from the same dimension as you mentioned in the introduction.

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Book Friend 87921722mo ago

How do you know he is the main character in the crowd. Excellent rune talent. Your plot is boring.

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Teacher Wu 40051351446mo ago

The content in the early stage is okay, but the later stage is not so good.

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Destiny50mo ago

It's a good book with not many poisonous points and no brainless routines.

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Ghjkonn, Yhjk51mo ago

It's great, the world of fantasy novels. The introduction at the beginning includes a car computer.

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