The Wicked Girl Quickly Passes Through: the Ascetic Male Protagonist Gets Out of Control and Falles into Fall

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It's good. It's from the Tik Tok tweet. It's just as soon as the prince calls the heroine Bao'er, it will make a show 😘 Furthermore, this setting is unreasonable. The heroine's life experience is like this. The princess is a mother-killing enemy. They both know it. They have made the same daughter a maid for so many years. How dare they use the heroine, and the heroine is so ridiculously stunning, so how can she safely put such an enemy next to her daughter? How dare she

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To be honest, I think the writing is really not that good. Every supporting character has suffered a particularly serious mental decline, and the logic and common sense cannot stand a closer look. If this heroine lived in ancient times, she might have died hundreds of times. All I can say is that this novel is just a brainless novel, without any brains 🤐

A small suggestion, there are too many inner activities and small actions written, and it cannot be integrated naturally. Instead, it feels a bit inconsistent. You can refer to other novels. The overall outline is quite good, but it feels not mature enough. Please work hard!

Super super super super super super super awesome. I love the evil female character (here the evil female refers to a scheming and beautiful woman, not really evil). The only drawback is that the author is too slow to update. I know my wife is very tired, but don't rest. (A weak question, why do you have to have children? Forget it in the first world, having children in the second world obviously has no effect. I thought it would increase the abuse point, but the heroine can have children if she wants. Childbirth is a woman's right.) For the sake of such a pitiful child, please update ten times a day.

It's too slow to update, only a few articles in a few days. . . . Why should I become a member? A waste of time?

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The writing style is lacking, there are a lot of typos, the writing style is childish, there is no logic at all, there is no common sense, and there are too many idioms😜😜

I only read the first story without reading more, but there were a few points where it wasn't written well enough (only my personal opinion): The first point is the supporting actress Tang Mingzhu and her mother Liu Ruoyun. Since Tang Mingzhu was able to win an overwhelming victory against the heroine Tang Yu in her previous life, it proves that she must not be that stupid. But after her rebirth, it feels like she has been forcibly intelligent. Even if Tang Mingzhu is stupid, it all depends on her mother, but Liu Ruoyun after rebirth She didn't appear to be thoughtful and calculating. After all, the ideas she gave Tang Mingzhu were not very clever (a man who grew up in a deep palace actually dared to persuade his daughter to drug the prince). Although it was written later that Liu Ruoyun was spoiled by the Queen Mother, when describing her previous life, she was written as if she was in control of the overall situation. Another point is that the male protagonist is written very casually. He has been in love with Tang Mingzhu for more than three years, even if he has not seen her true face, but he still has some feelings for it. What's more, the male protagonist is described as a person who can build a secret guard network by himself. So many subordinates can't find that Tang Mingzhu is not what he seems. He wants to write the feeling of strategizing and controlling the overall situation, but he even needs the female protagonist to expose that his wife is not a good person, which makes the male protagonist not that smart. What's more, it seems that he fell in love with the heroine after meeting him twice, and it was still that kind of deep love. He didn't even notice that the heroine planned to divorce him and Tang Mingzhu. It was like he wanted to write the hero as a very smart person, but his words and deeds made the hero unable to stand up. Another point is the heroine Tang Yu. Assuming that Tang Mingzhu has the same IQ in her previous life and after her rebirth, Tang Yu can't even figure out Tang Mingzhu in her previous life. In this life, it's like he has a new brain and he understands everything at once. He can also plot against Tang Mingzhu in turn. What's more, the heroine's writing is so good that he can see through the male protagonist's psychology. It is really assumed that the heroine has a God's perspective to see everything and everything she encounters can be solved at once. However, when writing about the heroine harming others, she did not write about the contradiction between cowardice and kindness in her previous life and ruthless revenge in this life. However, the heroine directly wrote about it later to let herself miss the fact that she is not a bad person with blood on her hands. The heroine was cowardly and kind-hearted in her previous life, and now she is free from the burden of killing people when she is reborn? It may be that the story is a short film, so the logic is not carefully considered, or it may be that the author's book is an exercise for novices, but overall, although the writing style is a bit flawed, book friends who like to skim and scan can give it a try. 👨👨👨