Invading the Heavens from Eternity

I don't even know what the author is writing. Is this fan fiction? ? ? . . First, the main character is not seen pretending to be a magic stick, but he is shown wearing a holy robe in front of others. . Secondly, I don't see the protagonist as a teacher, so I accept the protagonist of the original work as my disciple, and embark on the path of success. . Third, they have traveled through all the worlds, not to mention the things in the mortal world, Taoist scriptures and other cultivation techniques, whether it is trading or exchanging, whether it is to increase the protagonist's knowledge or let the protagonist meet Taoist friends, sell it, exchange it, give it away, pretend to be a master, pretend to be bold, and it can promote the plot. . . When I saw Yangshen World, the main character was really clumsy and bland! Yes, it is good to integrate into the plot, but who among those who read fanfics does not want to see the protagonist travel through the original costume to make up for regrets or something? No matter how well you write about integration, what's the use? ? ? (And the writing is not very good either)

I read the introduction, but I don't want to read it. You've already traveled through Fang Han, what other heavens have you traveled through? If you want to write Zhutianwen, don't use this kind of protagonist. The original works are already invincible in the later stage. Why are you trying to show off by writing another one about traveling through the heavens? The starting point for eternal life itself is high. It is even more powerful in the later stages. You have to travel there in person. Traveling across the heavens in order to become stronger. You're already dressed as the protagonist, why else are you wearing the clothes of Heaven? You can't write except to show off. If you write that the protagonist travels to other worlds to grow up when he is weak. Accelerate the growth of this world. Just take off your pants and fart. It's unnecessary, I'll just read the original work.

The protagonist has a woman, but what happens to the Fragrant Fox King when he returns to the eternal world? It's best to take it with you, after all, men have to vent sometimes, and Princess Hongyi can also take it in! Fang Qingxue must also accept it! After that, you can go to some more popular worlds. There won't be much good in those outdated worlds! After that, you can do battles, martial arts, etc.! Is it time to return to that world that covers the sky? Then Qin Yao is good, it would be a pity to give it to Ye Fan! Perfect is okay, prehistoric is okay too! ! ! I have to grab some treasures and stuff!

Nowadays, black and yellow horses are still used to determine combat power. Damn it. I suggest the author take a look at the eternal life. Each realm has its own combat power statement. If you want to write the combat power indicator, I will doubt whether it is a shrunken immortal world.

What is written in the front is okay, but the part behind Zhetian makes me want to vomit. What is written here? What's written here about Yongsheng is already so strong, but he still has so much fighting power, and he can still reason with people. I'm really convinced. Don't you know what Yongsheng is? People just accept those who can't be treated like dogs and beat them to death.

It's better to read the original work! If you don't have anything of your own, you just know how to write plots

I'm probably out of luck with this book. The Great Holy Artifact, the Quasi-Emperor Artifact, and the Great Emperor Artifact can all be placed in the same rank.

I don't understand why it's so bad. It's been over ten chapters since Lingxu Cave Heaven was broken.

This is the first time I've seen someone cheating on Fang Han. As the main character in the top three in the novel's combat power rankings, he is already a super cheat. Now, if you give him a big cheat, it's still a joke.

The author's imagination is wild and it seems to be very immersive. Those in the comment area who say that they have to pretend to be a b and get slapped in the face don't know what they are thinking. It is such a cliché routine and there is no point in saying it without pretending to be a b and slapped in the face. The author of this book writes about the way for a protagonist to become stronger. Do you still have to pretend to be a slap in the face? It's enough to be strong enough